中考英语写作示范课人物篇

Name：Tony / Jim…
Main body
Character：be kind / outgoing… Activities：have dinner, do sports,
study together
One unforgettable thing：
be hurt / ill take sb to the hospital
Ending: be happy/ thankful/lucky such a best friend
What activities do your friends and you do together?
have dinner together/ Play basketball together/
read /basketball…
He/She likes v-ing/ n. His/ Her hobby is…
shy/outgoing/ kind… English/ maths…
He/She is…
He/She is (not) good at … He/ She does well in …
help sb with homework study together
be hurt / ill take sb to the hospital
➢写人
文章可通过介绍人物的年龄、外 貌、职业、爱好、 学习工作等 方面来展现人物鲜明的个性。
(叙述的原则是从外到内）
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一、审题注意“四定”
During three years, I have made lots of friends.
Main body:
Name：
My best friend is Tony.
Character：
He is kind and outgoing.
Activities：
We often have dinner, do sports and study together.
One unforgettable One day,I was hurt / ill at sports meeting.
thing：
Tony hurried to take me to the
hospital. I was deeply moved /thankful.
you 写作要求：
（1）短文须包括所给的提示内容,适当发挥想象 （2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名、班级和地名 （3）语句通顺、意思连贯、书写工整，词数80词 左右。
二、列提纲
根据要点列提纲，列提纲 时候应以动宾短语或者系 表短语的形式罗列。
Outline
Beginning: leave school ; make friends
1.定内容：根据要点定内容。 2.定句型、定词语：应依据内容。应该
先定词语后定句型。 3. 定时态:记叙文、日记一般用一般过去
时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用 一般现在时；计划等用一般将来时。 4.定人称：用第一人称亲近自然；用第 三人称客观真实。
书面表达（满分25分） 初中阶段的学习生活马上就要结束了，在这三年中， 你一定和你的同学结下了深厚的友谊。
中考英语写作示范课人物篇
Brainstorming:
Jim/Kate… …years old
His / Her name/He/She is… He/She is…
in+地方；on月日，年 He/She was born…
tall/short/thin… long hair/big eyes…
源自文库
He/She is + adj(形容词) He/ She has + 名词短语 He/ She is adj with 名词短语
三、扩展成句
将提纲里的动宾短语或 系表短语扩展成完整的 句子。
扩展成句
Beginning: I am going to leave school.
Main body:
Name： Character：
Activities：
I have made lotms aokfefriferinednsd.s
Ending:
I am sboehhaappppy/y/ththaannkfkuful/llu/luckcyky that I shuacvheasbuecsht afribeensdt friend
四、连句成文
补充适当的连词和过 渡句，使之时间 、空 间、 细节有逻辑、连 贯呼应。
连句成文 Beginning: I am going to leave school soon.
请根据提示要求，写一篇短文，讲述你们之前的交往。 80词左右。 提示：建议内容如下： （1）who your best friend is （2）what makes you get on well with her/him （3）One unforgettable thing happened to both of
My best friend is Tony. He is kind and outgoing. We often have dinner, do sports and
study together.
One unforgettable thing： I was hurt / ill at sports meeting. Tony hurried to take me to the hospital.
enjoy food
do sports together
The unforgettable things that make you feel thankful
help sb with homework study together
be hurt / ill take sb to the hospital
What activities do your friends and you do together?
have dinner together play basketball together
enjoy food
do sports together
The things that your friend did make you feel thankful