大学英语四级写作(1)

11分—清清楚楚
• 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少 量语言错误
Para 1
• If a friend of mine ever comes to visit my hometown, Tengwang Ge is certainly the place I’ll take him to.
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Para 2
To begin with, Tendwang Ge is the symbol of my hometown. It was built in Tang Dynasty and has been kept very well. Many famous poets, such as Wang bo, enjoyed the great view there and created significant art works. That is what make Tengwang Ge even more special. Moreover, this old building was reconstructed during the past ten years. As a result it has become more attractive to the tourists. Standing at the top of Tengwang Ge, you can see the Gan River flow towards the sea in front of you. Different kinds of birds fly high in the sky. Skyscrapers form a “forest” across the river and all kinds of business is booming there.
• 评分标准：
2分---条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或 大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分---基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。 有较多的严重语言错误。 8分---基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚， 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是 严重错误。 11分---切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但 有少量语言错误。 14分---切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连 贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
8分—马马虎虎
• 基本切题。 有些地方表达思想不够清楚， 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，有一些 是严重错误。 • 残句较多，有基本的构句能力，隔三差五 有错。
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I am so excited to hear about my foreign friend is coming to visit my hometown. My hometown is Liyang, although it is very small, I am so sure that he will have a good time there. • The most interesting place I would like to take him to see is Tianmu lake. There are several reasons should be responsible for it. Firstly, it is a very beautiful place of some flowers, small lakes and small animals are so clever. Secondly, I will take him to taste the head of fish there, it is well known all over the country. Only a famous people come here he taste it. Last but not the least, he could enjoy him in the nature. There are fresh air, clean lakes, high mountions and clever people round Tianmu lake. • From the point of my view, all of these reasons will interest him, and I fully convince he will never forget this visit in Tianmu lake.
• 主要内容：
本课程的教学安排为 1 个学期，共 24 个学时Baidu Nhomakorabea 教学过程中紧紧围绕《大学英语课程教学要求》 和《大学英语考试大纲》中关于写作的相关内 容设计教学任务，组织安排教学。在教学过程 中，既要强调同学们掌握和应用语言知识的准 确性，又要注意同学们在应用语言写作时的流 利程度和得体性，从而达到既帮助同学们通过 考试，又能提高英语水平的教学目的。使同学 们在加强英语语言基础知识和基本技能训练的 同时，提高英语的综合训练能力。
• 评分原则：
从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评 判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表 达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言 来表达，要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分 表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确 切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错 误是否造成理解上的障碍。
阅卷标准
• 阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分 以及14分。
• 知识目标：
（一）词汇： 同学们掌握的总词汇量应达到4500个单词和 700个词组，要求同学们能够在认知的基础上 学会熟练运用，包括在口头表达以及书面表达 两个方面，尤其是书面表达方面。 （二）语法： 语法讲授涵盖主谓一致、动词、被动语态、 虚拟语气、不定式、动名词、从句等，强化同 学们对这类语法知识的掌握，使同学们能够综 合运用所学语法知识并能熟练运用于写作过程 中。
• 能力目标： 能用常见的应用文体完成一般的写作任务， 能够描述个人经历、事件、观感、情感等， 能根据规定题目和所提供的提纲、情景、 图片或图表等，写出一篇不少于120词的短 文，内容基本完整、用词准确恰当，语篇 流利连贯，能在一般或应用写作中使用恰 当的写作技能。
• 四级写作的基本要求： 共1题，考试时间30分钟。要求同学们写出 一篇 120-180 词的短文，试卷上可能给出题 目，或规定情境，或要求看图作文，或给 出段首句要求续写；或给出关键词要求写 成短文。要求能够正确表达思想，意义连 贯，无重大语法错误。写作的内容包括日 常生活和一般常识。短文写作部分的目的 是测试同学们运用英语书面表达思想的初 步能力。
大学英语四级写作 College English Writing ---CET 4--西安工业大学北方信息工程学院
魏 明
• 课程目标：
本课程专为有一定英语基础，并希望通过 大学英语四级考试的同学们开设。以培养 同学们较强的写作能力，使同学们能以英 语为工具，获取专业所需要的信息，进一 步提高英语水平，打下较好的基础为目的。 通过这一课程的学习，期望同学们能在写 作方面有所提高，掌握良好的英语学习方 法和写作方法以及应试技巧，争取尽快获 得大学英语四级考试证书。
2014年6月RANGE-FINDERS（CET4-W1）
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. • Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why.
评分标准的百分制换算
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得 分 10 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 17 率 0
• CET-4作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring) 方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分 (Award Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数 目扣分。
5分—糊里糊涂
• 基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差， 有较多严重语言错误。 • 能有一点儿构句能力，隔三差五有对。
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My hometown is Yu Yan with a beautiful mountains. Whenever a foreign friend is coming, I must take him to there. The air is much better than in city. And there are no noise. So I love there. In the summer, it’s so hot that you are difficult to stay here, you can chose there for you free time. And there are many interesting activities, likes dance with many friends, playing basketball, you will never feel boring there, you also can climb the mountains, when you get into the top, you can see the most beautiful signs. You will never forget it. The food that I think you will must like it. Although you maybe not suit for it. One weeks later, you will like them. It’s so delicious. The people who live there, that are friendly with everybody. So you can make many new friends there. They will share many interesting things with you. I think you will love there. And you will have a fun with there.
2分—一塌糊涂
• 条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大 部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 • 支离破碎，一塌糊涂，词语堆砌。
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My name is Cathy, a sunshine girl. I was born in Shanghai. I am very very love my hometown. One day, the weather is very hot. Suppose a foreign of mine is coming to visit my hometown. Moring, I and my friend go to Lujiazui station. Our look at Dongfangmingzhu and Ocean park. It is take us three hours to do it. In the eating of the time, we go to Xiao nan guo. Some time later, we go to nanjing Road. It is very people to go to there. There have many more popular things and eating. Now, the time was 5 clock. We go to Huanhai Road. Some people ask me “why go to there.” I said “there are very popular buildings and roads, we can buy something our love at there.” My friends said “Oh, I like.” In the evening. It has a little cold, My friend think go to hotal. We are also go home. The happly day is closed, but our friendship is in my heart all over the word.