四级作文1

写作

审题:审体裁（议论、说明、叙述），审direction中要求的内容

结构:搭文章架子-- 开头、主体、结尾

条理清楚:

➢议论文正反面；说明文条理

➢层次清楚:醒目的中心思想句(Topic Sentence)，主题句之后应该紧接着扩展句（具体的论据、事实、数据等）很好利用草稿纸

➢搭结构，把各个层次画一下

➢中心句

减少语言错误，语法规则和固定搭配。

写完后检查，尤其是检查拼写语法错误。

1.根据文章章法合理使用、灵活改造命题提纲，做到起、承、转、合，有头有尾。

2.确保主体段落有明确的中心思想句，后面的扩展层次清楚。

3.注意语法规则和固定搭配，减少语言错误。

4.文贵在变，学会用不同的形式开始句子，注意句子的长短结合。

具体要求：

语言第一位-- 表达通顺、无重大语言错误

基础一般：简单原则、安全第一

基础较好：变化句子结构和词语用法

结构第二位

逻辑性：

•并列：and/or/but

•因果：because/in that, since/as, for

•转折：but/however

内容第三位

四级写作出题分析

出题内容：

四级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。具体来说可以分为两个方面：

➢关于大学生的话题常见的社会问题

四级考试作文题型：

➢对立观点型

➢说明利弊型

➢解决问题型

➢谚语警句型

➢图表图画型

➢应用写作型

1.对立观点型作文

对立观点式

1．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？

2．有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么？

3．我的看法。

… has become a hot topic among people recently. Opinions vary from person to person. Some people are inclined to think that … On the contrary, there are still many people who claim…

Those who criticize… argue that… However, people who advocate …, on the other hand, maintain that…

对立观点型作文变体

Paragraph I（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；

（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。

Paragraph II（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句）；

（2）举例加以论证。

Paragraph III总结全文（再次强调作者观点）

2.说明利弊型作文

1.说明某种现象，并且阐释人们的不同的观点

2.你的观点

EXAMPLE

网上购物越来越流行，有人喜欢网上购物，但也有很多人不喜欢网上购物

你的观点。

The discussion about … has never stopped in the past few years. Let’s have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.

The biggest advantage of… What’s more… Last but by no means the least. However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with,… In the second place,… Finally…

Technically speaking, we could draw the conclusion that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. We have every reason to believe that… will embrace its bright future during the next decade.

3.解决问题型作文

1.说明问题、现象

2.分析问题、现象产生的原因，带来的后果；

3.你的建议

The recent years have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon -- ….

After contemplation and meditation, we can find three possible reasons accounting for this trend. Firstly, …. Secondly, ... Finally, …W e should take urgent measures …. On the one hand, … On the other, ….

4.谚语警句类作文写法

1997年1月

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below.

1. 为什么“欲速则不达”？

2. 举例说明。

写法

1. 解释谚语警句的涵义

2. 举例说明

3. 总结说明谚语警句对于自己的意义，对自己的影响

… is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with. This self-evident proverb means that… I fully agree with its implication.

I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the example of… All reliable data pile up to show the point that…From what have been discussed above, we can conclude that …. For one thing,… For another… The best way is to ….