作文范文之英语作文游泳的好处

英语作文游泳的好处

【篇一：雅思写作范文：跨国旅游的利弊】

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雅思写作范文：跨国旅游的利弊

摘要：为了帮助考生们更好地复习雅思考试，小马过河网雅思频道为各位考生整理了雅思写作范文：跨国旅游的利弊，供考生们参考

使用，更多雅思写作辅导请继续关注小马过河网雅思频道。

下面小马过河网雅思频道为大家整理了雅思写作范文：跨国旅游

的利弊，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。

nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect?

参考范文：

never before was travelling to alien countries so convenient and popular as in this century. this phenomenon is partially attributed to improved technology and cheap flight tickets. facing this travel frenzy, some are concerned that it will bring about too many side effects whilst others insist that is should be supported and maintained.

admittedly, cross-border travel has more downsides than one. firstly, the carbon dioxide planes emitted is reported to be disproportionately more than that emitted by other transportation means. the carbon dioxide will lead to ozone layer thinning and thereby increase the probability of people contracting skin cancer. moreover, being easier and more convenient to travel among countries means that some criminals could flee to other countries after committing hideous crime. this will pose a threat to local security and community stability.

however, the downsides cannot overshadow its upsides. for starters, travelling around the world with more ease

could expand individuals’ horizons and stimulate their love of life and they will be more productive at work in the future. moreover, companies could visit foreign markets more conveniently than before and as a result, they could locate potential target market and sell goods there or buy materials from there if the price is competitively enough. if a

company could flourish this way, employees will benefit and

the society in which companies are operating will be more stable and harmonies. last but not least, if more and more people are afforded opportunities to go to other countries,

there will be less misunderstanding and more respect among countries. all these will contribute to a diverse but harmonious culture.

to sum up, despite the numerous drawbacks mentioned above, travelling to other countries with more convenience and ease is, by and larrge, a positive development.

以上就是小马过河网雅思频道为大家整理的雅思写作范文：跨国

旅游的利弊，非常实用。更多资讯、资料尽在小马过河网雅思频道。最后，小马过河网雅思频道预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!

【篇二：高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)】

一. 用词准确;表达地道

【北京卷】【试题回放】第一节情景作文(20分)

美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住

在你家。假设你是李华，请给jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他

来中国后的生活安排。

注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。

dear jeff,

i’m hua from beijing hongxing middle school. i’m very happy

to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in beijing.

while you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a tv. y ou’ll also have your own bathroom. our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. at noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. i’m sure you’ll like the delicious chinese

food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. classes

in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. you can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. it’ll be

a lot of fun.

if you have any questions or requests, please let me know. we’ll try our best to make your stay here in beijing a pleasant experience.

best wishes,

li hua

[名师点评]

这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。

【安徽卷】【试题回放】

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一

份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写

封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4. 参考栏目：栏目—columndear mr. green,

i am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. that sounds great! and i definitely agree with you on that.

some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. this will offer a wonderful chance. apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for chinese students to learn english idioms and improve oral english. last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! the popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! teenagers are just fond of the trendy things. well, i can’t list more.i really can’t wait to read that magazine! yours faithfully,

li hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地

道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是

家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是

一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that,

oral english, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩

【北京卷】【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“green action in our class”为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs

april 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. in the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. upon arrival, we began to work immediately. some were digging holes. some were carrying and planting young trees. others were watering . after getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. we feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【北京卷】【试题回放】开放作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

in your spoken english class, your teacher shows you the following picture. you are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

what an interesting picture! a western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. he is holding two forks the same way as we chinese hold chopsticks. he is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. at first glance, i think it’s a bit funny, for we chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. the man in the picture is trying to copy us. obviously he is doing it the hard way. maybe using one fork will do a better job, in my opinion,

we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重

点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食

物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

三. 复合句为写作增色

【全国卷】【试题回放】

假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她

的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作

人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍;

2、祝贺苏琳生日;

3、感谢工作人员;

4、索取苏琳三

岁生日照。

注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、

开头语已为你写好。例文：

dear sir/madam,

greetings from china!

i’m li hua, a student in sichuan. i’ve been a panda lover since i was a child. about three years ago i was delighted to learn that baiyun gave birth to her daughter sulin and i’ve been watching her grow on your website,. now she’s going to be three. i’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the us.

by the way, could i have a photo of sulin taken on her third birthday? thank you very much in advance.

yours truly,

li hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：

1.自我介绍;

2.信息来源;

3.祝贺生日;

4.感谢照顾;

5.索取照片;

6.合适的结尾。

这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头

及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述

准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，

结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育

好句i’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to expr ess my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the us.

我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。【全国卷ii】【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;

3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);

4.游泳池：全天免费开放;

5.欢迎预定。注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。welcome to baishan mountain hotel!

baishan mountain hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of baishan mountain, it provides single

which the price is rmb100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 doubleperson room, of person rooms, with a price of rmb 150 yuan per day. it also provides hot water bath service. you can enjoy both chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. the swimming pool is open for free the whole day. all these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable. so come to enjoy yourself!

welcome to book rooms in baishan mountain.

【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句all these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

【重庆卷】【试题回放】

据报道，7岁的美国女孩amy bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(acs)决定，每当

amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华

中学的学生李华，请你用英文给amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意：

1. 信的格式已为你写好

2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3. 词数100左右。

4. 请在答题卡上作答。

dear amy,

i’m li hua from xinhua middle school of china. i’m sorry to

hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. but you should realize that you are young and have a

promising great future. so, stand up and fight against the disease! i’m sure y ou will win. it is reported that the america

anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. so i will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. in that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. hope you can be well soon. yours,

li hua

[名师点评]

本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如

i’m sorry to hear that..., it is reported that...等，都比较好。作者

对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得

学习。

积累卡片

好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

好句1. im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨

大的痛苦。

好处：which引导限制性定语从句。

2. so, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处：掷地有声，语言准确。

四. 结构清晰,句式准确

【江苏卷】【试题回放】

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动

在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项

活动。

教育部倡导学生：

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳

光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the ministry of education

good afternoon, everyone,

the national student sports program, waged by the ministry of education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on april 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over china. almost 11 million students

in jiangsu province participated in this program.

the ministry of education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. our whole life will be very enjoyable.

in my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. health is a basic condition for our study. if we did not

do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

so every one of you, join the program now!

thank you!

【名师点评】

本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，

作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句

式是本文的特点之一。

积累卡片

好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

好句1. the ministry of education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

好句2. if we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析：虚拟语气。

【篇三：英语作文：the way to travel】

the way to travel

出外旅游，任何一位旅游者最先需要考虑的是选择到那里去旅游？

采用何种旅游方式？旅游目的地是首选，旅游方式是必须同时考虑

的内容。随着时代的发展现代旅游的发展演绎出多种多样的方式：outdoor travel, is the first need to consider any other tourists choose to travel there? adopt what kind of tourism way? tourism destination is first selection, the content of the tour is

a must to be considered at the same time. along with the development of the era of the development of modern tourism deduce a variety of ways:

[1]团队旅游： group travel

团队旅游即我们平日说的最多的，最为传统的旅游方式参团游，它

是通过旅行社联合一些向往同一个地方旅游的人而组成一个团队前

往目的地旅游，这种方式最大的好处就是省去了不必要的麻烦，尤

其是你对当地的旅游情况、民族风情等不熟悉时，参团游无疑是最

好的选择，它有效地利用时间多参观名胜古迹，可以到个人无法去

的地方，团体行动较为安全，没有语言的障碍，并且团体旅游人数多，成本较低，大多数旅游者都比较适合。但参团游也有它的弊病，那就是一切行动要听指挥，自己的自由活动时间相对较少。

team travel that we normally say most, the most traditional

way of tourism tuxedo to swim, it is through the combined

some aspire to the same place tour of people and formed a

team to tourist destination, the biggest benefit of this way is to save the unnecessary trouble, especially if youre on the local tourism situation, ethnic customs, etc are not familiar with, tuxedo is undoubtedly the best choice, it effectively use time

to visit places of interest, can go to the individual cannot place, group operation safer, no language barriers, number and

group tours, lower cost, is suitable for most tourists. but

tuxedo has its ills, all listen to command, that is relatively few

of their free time.

[2]自助旅游：

人们通常用按是否需要通过旅行社等旅游代理机构来划分团队游客

与散客，但随着旅游服务机构业态的发展以及旅游中介服务项目不

断丰富，人们自行安排旅游的方式发生了很大变化，在散客市场中

有一个群体表现出共同的特征明显地有别于一般散客，人们将这一

群体的旅游行为称之为自助旅游。自助旅游是一种时尚的旅游方式，可以表述为：以“张扬个性、亲近自然、放松身心”为目标，完全自

主选择和安排旅游活动，现在所有的自助式旅游又有四种不同层次

的方式：

people usually use according to whether need through travel agency and other tourist agencies to tourists and the

individual division team, but with the development of the tourism service forms and eich tourism intermediary service project, the way people arrange travel, great changes have taken place in the individual market is a group show common features obviously different from the general individual, people will travel behavior of this group is called self-help travel. self-help travel is a kind of fashionable way of travel, can be expressed as: in order to make public individual character, the close nature, loosen body and mind as the goal, fully

independent choice and arrange travel activities, now all the self-service travel and there are four different levels:

a.全自助游：指抵达旅游区后，住宿、车票等一切由自己安排。这种方式因为住宿没有折扣和购买车票浪费时间等，目前只适用于个别“背包旅游者”。

a. all tours: refers to after arriving at the resort, accommodation, tickets, etc all arranged by

themselves. this way because there is no discount and accommodation to buy tickets to waste time, etc., currently only applies to individual backpack tourists.

b.半委托方式：指抵达旅游区后，由旅游单位安排您的住宿、车票等部分项目。这种方式因为住宿可以有20-60%的折扣和行程紧凑等优点，目前已非常普遍。旅游单位的服务项目有：①接送服务(飞机场、火车站、汽车站、码头)②代办、确认和改签世界各地之间的机车船票③订房、订餐④提供导游⑤办理签证或签证延期⑥出租旅游车辆及其他旅游用具⑦代客设计旅游路线⑧代客计算旅游价格⑨免费咨询

b. half entrust way: after arriving at the tourist area, by the travel unit to arrange your accommodation,

c.准全委托方式：指出发前，旅游单位已为您安排了住宿、车票；出发后或抵达旅游区后，就由导游(此种导游称“全陪”)带队，由游客自己决定饮食标准(或自行就餐)、交通档次、参观内容、住宿天数、要否当地导游(此种导游称“地陪”)等。这种方式因为考虑到游客的不同兴趣和不同经济条件，因此，此种方式的游客数目和国别正在日益增加。

c. must entrust way: all pointed out before, travel unit has arranged accommodation, tickets for you; or arrived after the start of the tourist area, then by a tour guide (the tour guide said all accompany) solver, decided by the tourists themselves diet standard (or dinner), visit the content, accommodation, transportation, class number, and no local tour guide, the tour guide said local guide), etc.

this way because of considering the tourists of different interests and different economic conditions, therefore, this way is increasing the number of visitors and national identity.

c. 全委托方式：指出发前，旅游单位已为您安排了住宿、车票等一切项目；出发后或抵达旅游区后，

就由全陪带队，旅游单位按与游客的协议提供饮食、车辆和地陪，

并按行程表活动。这种方式下，游客只需跟着导游乘车、参观、购物、就餐、住宿、娱乐等，非常轻松。

c.all entrust way: pointed out before, travel unit has arranged accommodation and tickets for you all projects; or arrived after the start of the tourist area, then by all with led, tourism unit according to the agreement to provide food, vehicles with tourists and local guide, and according to the schedule

activities.this way, visitors just guided by bus, visit, shopping, dining, accommodation, entertainment

and so on, very easy.

自助旅游按交通方式可分为：自驾车旅游，自行车旅游和徒步旅游，按旅游目的可分为休闲度假自助游和专业目的自助游两类，而专业

目的自助游又包括修学求知自助游、极限探险自助游、特殊兴趣自

助游（如摄影、登山）等。

self-help travel according to the transportation can be divided into: self-drive travel, bicycle traveling and hiking, according to the tourism can be divided into leisure tours and professional purposes of two types of self service travel, purpose and professional tours tours, including the study of knowledge, extreme adventure tours, special interest tours, such as photography, mountain climbing, etc.

[3]生态旅游：

单纯就字面意思可解释为观赏动植物生态的一种旅游方式，也可诠

释为具有生态概念、促进生态保护的游憩过程。一般来说，生态旅

游包装的行程普遍具有下列几项特色：1. 强调独特的自然与文化之旅，行程往往安排到原始未开发的生态环境或与现代文明差异甚大

之原住民部落；2. 强调深度体验自然生态与原住民部落生活。然而

越是原始隔离的自然或社会环境，越不善于抵抗外来力量带来之改

变因子，而越是深度的旅游方式对当地的影响深度越大，换句话说，观光发展的结果很有可能对这些地区造成不可复原的冲击。

除以上几种，还有短途休闲的野营、郊游及新兴的农家乐等旅游方式。

in addition to the above several, and short leisure camping, hiking, and emerging way of rural tourism.