图表作文(班长)

• While about 54% students pay most attention to maths homework, and 18% students regard English homework as the most important one, only 7% spend most time on Chinese. There are also 21% students say that it is other subjects takes most of their attention.
审题
主题： 主题：What kind of person can be a monitor？ ？ 文体： 文体：说明文 人称：第三人称（调查结果）、第一人称（ ）、第一人称 人称：第三人称（调查结果）、第一人称（阐 述个人观点 时态：现在完成、 时态：现在完成、一般现在
文章结构： 文章结构： 1. Introduction of the survey 2.The result of the survey different opinions among the pupils of the … 3.Personal opinion about the problem 要点： 要点： 1.a survey has been made on … 2.be friendly with others 5.8% 3.be responsible 11.04% 4.look beautiful or handsome 11.7% 5.be loved by teachers 4.41% 6.be good at academic study 66.91% 7.personal idea
• While about 54% students pay most attention to maths homework, and 18% students regard English homework as the most important one, only 7% spend most time on Chinese. There are also 21% students say that it is other subjects takes most of their attention.
近日， 近日，某报对我市几所小学的学生展开了一项关 什么样的人可以当班长”的调查。 于“什么样的人可以当班长”的调查。请根据下 面的图表写一篇英语短文，介绍调查结果并 面的图表写一篇英语短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈 你认为什么样的人可以当班长。词数不少于80。 你认为什么样的人可以当班长。词数不少于 。
问题： 问题： 1.数字表达不准确、不正确；丢落数据、没有数据 数字表达不准确、不正确；丢落数据、 数字表达不准确 •11% -- about 11%, 11.04% •11.4% students, 11.04 percent students --11.4 percent of the students /about eleven percent of the students •another 11.04% of the students
11.04%
老师喜欢, 老师喜欢 学习成绩好, 学习成绩好 66.91%
11.76%
情景作文 ： 最近，你参加了高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业” 的调查，结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇短文, 介 绍调查结果，并根据其中两个数据 两个数据谈论自己的看法。 两个数据 注意：1. 短文的开头已为你写好。2. 词数不少于60。 最重视各科作业的学生比例示意图 其它学科 21% 21% 英语 18% 18% 语文 7% 数学 54% 54%
情景作文： 情景作文： 近日，某报对我市几所小学的学生展开了一项关 于“什么样的人可以当班长”的调查。请根据下 面的图表写一篇英语什么样的人可以当班长
有责任感, 5.80% 有责任感 有人缘, 有人缘 4.41%
长得漂亮, 长得漂亮
问题：审题
Recently, a heated discussion about what kind of students can become the monitor was held in some primary schools.
From what has been analyzed above, we may safely arrived at the conclusion that a good monitor should be responsible and do well in his study. These can ensure he sets a good example to the fellow students.
最近，你参加了高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业” 最近，你参加了高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业” 的调查，结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇短文, 的调查，结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇短文 介 绍调查结果，并根据其中两个数据谈论自己的看法 两个数据谈论自己的看法。 绍调查结果，并根据其中两个数据谈论自己的看法。 注意： 短文的开头已为你写好。 词数不少于60。 注意：1. 短文的开头已为你写好。2. 词数不少于 。
根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每 根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每 描述 百人手机用户增长的， 试分析其增长 百人手机用户增长的，并试分析其增长 的原因。 的原因。
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As is shown in the above diagram, more and more people have mobile phones in recent years. In 1995, only one person in a hundred had a mobile phone in some city. In 1997, 10 persons in a hundred had mobile phones. The number of the people who had mobile phones was ten times as many as in 1995. In 1999, there were 20 persons in a hundred had mobile phones. In 2001, a half of the persons in a hundred had mobile phones.
2.主要动词的时态 主要动词的时态 said, thought, believed--think, believe, suppose, insist, consider, hold the view/opinion,
3. 词语重复，句式单一 双谓语。 词语重复，句式单一, 双谓语。 There are 11.04 % of the students think the monitor should beautiful. ---There are 11.04% of the students thinking / who think the monitor should be beautiful or handsome. 4.定语从句（拿人不当人） 定语从句（ 定语从句 拿人不当人） …while 11.70% insist that the person which the teacher like most will be the best condition of becoming a monitor. 11.76% believe that a monitor is who teachers are fond of. 5.重心偏移（自我观点占 重心偏移（ 重心偏移 自我观点占2/3;1/2） ）