初中英语 祝贺信

实战演练
假如你是李华,得知你的美国笔友Peter被他理想的高中录取, 请你给他写一封电子邮件,要点如下:表示祝贺;介绍自己目前的 学习情况;请教学习方法。
[提示词语] be admitted into…, congratulate, advice [提示问题] ·Why do you congratulate Peter? ·How is your study? ·What advice do you want to get from him?
4.我为你感到骄傲。(feel proud of…)
I feel proud of you
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5.为了演讲得更好,你应该每天坚持练习演讲。(to make it better; keep doing…) To make it better , you should keep practicing your speech every day.
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8.Keep on trying and never give up.(用It's important to…改写成复合句)
I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up
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9.Your speech is interesting.Your speech is meaningful, too.(用not only…but also…连接两个句子) _Y__o_u__r_s_p__e_e__c_h__is__n__o_t__o_n__ly__i_n_t_e__r_e_s_t_i_n_g__b__u_t__a_l_s_o__m__e_a__n_i_n_g__f_u_l_.__
Li Hua
【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:本文是一篇应用文,类型是祝贺信。根 据题目要求,可以提炼出3个要点: (1)说明祝贺的原因 (2)描述比赛中的精彩表现 (3)你学到了什么 2.时态:一般过去时和一般现在时 3.人称:第一人称和第三人称
【写作架构】
【基础写作】
Ⅰ.根据所给提示词补全下列各句
Dear Tom, _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________
I would appreciate it if you could write back to me as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua
You did a good job in the Chinese speech competition.You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful.You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you.What's more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents.
1.知道你获得了英语演讲比赛的一等奖我很高兴。(be happy to…) _I_'_m__v__e_r_y__h_a__p_p__y__t_o__k_n__o_w___y_o_u__w__o__n__t_h_e__f_i_r_s_t__p_r_i_z_e__in___th__e__E_n__g_l_is__h__s_p_e__e_c_h__c_o__m__p_e__t_it_i_o_n__._
Li Hua
拓展积累
【表达祝贺】 1.I'm writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance. 2.I'm glad to say congratulations to you because of your wonderful performance. 【描述精彩表现】 1.We were all amazed at your beautiful voice and excellent pronunciation. 2.I'm happy to know that you did a good job in the competition. 3.We were so proud of you and enjoyed your meaningful speech.
2.我们被你精彩的演讲而深深吸引。(be attracted by…)
We were attracted by your wonderful speech
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3.你在这次比赛中表现很好。(do a good job in…)
You did a good job in this competition
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类型(四) 祝贺信
典例分析
假如你是李华,在你的帮助下,交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获 得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信,表达你的真诚祝贺,回忆 他比赛时的表现,以及你从他身上学到了什么。
[提示词语] win, prize, speech competition, pronounce, practice [提示问题] ·Why do you congratulate Tom? ·What made him successful in the competition? ·What can you learn from him?
As your best friend, I know you tried your best for the competition.You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better.I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up.I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future.
【学习某人优秀品质】 1.As your best friend, I know you tried your best to make it better. 2.I know it's important to keep trying hard and never to give up. 3.You set a good example for me.I really get lots of benefit from what you said.
【连句成文】 Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech competition, so I'm writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance.
One possible version: Dear Peter,
I have received your e-mail.I'm very glad to know that you have been admitted into your ideal senior high school.First, I'd like to offer my congratulations to you on your great success and I also hope to enter a famous senior high school just like you.
10.I want to thank you for showing me the power of believing ourselves and making big efforts
to reach our dreams.(用not only…but also…改写句子) I want to thank you for _s_h__o_w__i_n_g__m___e_n__o_t__o_n__l_y__t_h_e__p_o__w__e_r__o_f__b_e__li_e_v_i_n__g__o_u__r_s_e_l_v_e_s__b__u_t__a_l_s_o__t_h_e__ _p__o_w__e__r_o__f_m__a__k_i_n_g__b__i_g__e_f_f_o_r_t_s__t_o__r_e_a__c_h__o_u__r_d__r_e_a_m___s____.
.句子升格
按括号中的要求改写句子。
6.Your performance was wonderful.We felt proud of you.(用so…that…连接两个句子) _Y_o__u_r__p_e__r_f_o_r_m__a__n_c_e__w__a_s__s_o__w__o__n_d__e_r_f_u_l__th__a_t__w__e__f_e_l_t_p__r_o_u__d__o_f__y_o_u__._______________________
Now, I want to tell you something about myself.As you know, I'm busy preparing for the final examination.Day after day I work hard and have to stay up late doing piles of papers.However, I'm always feeling stressed out because my efforts don't seem to pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted.Will you be kind enough to give me some advice?
7.Your voice was beautiful.Your pronunciation was perfect.(用both…and…连接两个句子)
We were amazed at both your beautiful voice and your perfect pronunciation