Are We More Connected or More Alone？109

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？
姓名：高青学校：天津市武清区崔黄口中学分数：95
In my eyes,you were energetic and dynamic all the time once upon a time.However,you have addicted to the Internet since half a year puters and phones are constantly playing an essential part in your life.Scarcely do you communicate with your companions to promote mutual understanding or take part in the outdoor activities to expand your scope of knowledge.
In addition,I knew from your parents that you rarely speak at home.Honestly speaking,we are overwhelmingly worried about your physical and mental health.Therefore,in front of the increasingly fierce social competition,we are faced with new opportunities and challenges,I firmly figure that you are supposed to kick the bad habit and adjust yourself to concentrate attention on acquiring more skills,which can make you get a kick out of pleasures that you've never been.In the meanwhile,on no account can you ignore the importance of taking reasonable control of online time.
From now on,every minute should be made full use of to make up for the lost time.Only in this way will you not regret it when looking back at the past.I firmly believe you can do it.。