读后续写NurturingDreamsThroughAdversity(逆境中孕育梦想)讲义-高三英

读后续写原题目：
As a single mother, I’ve never doubted my daughter Jane’s dream to be a singer on the stage. At an early age, she was crazy about singing. Whenever she had a chance, she would sing to her heart’s content. Her sweet and charming voice tended to get people around attracted to her songs.
作为一个单身母亲，我从未怀疑过我女儿简成为舞台上歌手的梦想。

她很小的时候就迷上了唱歌。

只要有机会，她就会尽情地唱歌。

她甜美迷人的嗓音使周围的人都被她的歌曲所吸引。

Living in a small city, I took several odd jobs, determined to do everything in my power to support her. Soon after Jane attended school, her music teacher Mary noticed her talent by chance and volunteered to give her some guidance on how to sing. Jane practiced so hard that before long she made great progress in singing.
住在一个小城市，我打了几份零工，决心尽我所能养活她。

简上学后不久，她的音乐老师玛丽偶然发现了她的才华，并自愿给她一些唱歌的指导。

简练习得很刻苦，不久她在唱歌方面就取得了很大的进步。

Unfortunately, one noon a year later, Jane was crossing the street when a careless driver knocked her down. She was rushed to hospital. When I hurried there, the doctor told me that my daughter would probably not stand on her own feet. I froze with shock, feeling as if I had been thrown into a dark world. Weak and dizzy, I was about to fall to the ground when someone took hold of me.
不幸的是，一年后的一个中午，简正在过马路时，一个粗心的司机把她撞倒了。

她被紧急送往医院。

当我匆忙赶到那里时，医生告诉我，我女儿可能无法自立。

我震惊得僵住了，感觉自己好像被扔进了一个黑暗的世界。

我虚弱而眩晕，正要摔倒在地，突然有人抓住了我。

It was Mary, who got the news and raced here. She forted me, saying firmly, “Grace, Jane needs you. You must stay calm and strong.” I nodded. Having calmed down, I entered the ward with Mary.
是玛丽，她得到了这个消息并赶到了这里。

她安慰我，坚定地说：“格蕾丝，简需要你。

你必须保持冷静和坚强。

”我点点头。

冷静下来后，我和玛丽一起进了病房。

That night, Jane recovered her consciousness (知觉) and opened her eyes. Holding her hand, I said, “My dear, everything would be fine.” Mary forted her gently, “I know you are a strong girl, Jane. Don’t worry. We’ll be standing by you.” I was heartbroken to see tears streaming down Jane’s cheeks.
那天晚上，简恢复了意识(知觉) 然后睁开眼睛。

我拉着她的手说：“亲爱的，一切都会好起来的。

”玛丽温柔地安慰她：“我知道你是个坚强的女孩，简。

别担心，我们会支持你的。

”看到简的眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，我心碎了。

After two months, we returned home from hospital. Her teachers and friends frequently visited her. Jane eventually accepted the fact that she would have to get around in a wheelchair. Never did she refer to the subject of singing again. I knew she was a nice and understanding girl, who was afraid that talking about her original dream would upset the two of us.
两个月后，我们从医院回家。

她的老师和朋友经常来看望她。

简最终接受了这样一个事实：她将不得不坐在轮椅上四处走动。

她再也没有提到唱歌的话题。

我知道她是一个善良善解人意的女孩，她害怕谈论她最初的梦想会让我们两个感到不安。

注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
One day, however, Mary came with good news.___________________
When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the
stage._____________________________________________________
文章大意
This article tells the story of a single mother's support for her daughter's dreams and the impact of an unexpected event on their lives. My daughter Jane has loved singing since she was young, and my mother has always supported her music dream. However, one noon, Jane was knocked down by a careless driver, causing her to need a wheelchair. This accident changed her life and made her give up her music dream. The mother's support and understanding of her daughter are reflected in the article, as they went through difficult times together and eventually accepted a new reality of life.
续写思路发展
According to the prompt sentence "However, one day, Mary brought good news." It can be seen that the first paragraph first introduces the good news Mary brought to Jane related to singing Jane's reaction Mary and my encouragement Jane continued to practice singing finally, it was the big day when she could show up. According to the first sentence of the second paragraph, it should be written that it is finally the big day when she can appear
According to the second paragraph, "When the host announced it was Jane's turn, she was pushed onto the stage." It can be seen that in the second paragraph, Jane's response during her performance the congratulations she received at the end of the performance Jane's reaction and future.
写作三大原则
1.Reasonable plot design: The development of the sequel's story plot is driven by the characters in the original text, so forcibly adding characters may deviate from the plot development. The question requires candidates to continue writing based on the given plot, with the aim of continuing the storyline of the original materials, rather than developing new plots. The imagination of the plot and details should be reasonable, in line with mon sense and logical. The requirement for the title is "to make it a plete short article". If a suspense is set at the end of the article, it will give people a feeling that it is not over yet, and such a story is inplete.
2.Multiple ways of description: a. Displaying dialogue in continuation writing can enrich content and language, enhance discourse coherence, but using too much dialogue can make the space cumbersome and it is difficult to plete the entire subsequent plot development within a limited number of words. b. When describing actions, it is important to refine them and break down the process into a series of subtle actions, forming a chain of actions; To accurately grasp the characteristics of a character's actions in a specific situation, the selected actions should reflect the character's characteristics, such as age, personality, gender, identity, environment, situation, etc; By bining actions with facial expressions and psychology, one can describe the expressions and thoughts exhibited by a character's actions, thus more vividly depicting their personality. c. When describing the psychological activities and emotional changes of characters, it is important to highlight the details, as all emotions are reflected in the subtle aspects. Therefore, try not to use vague words such as smile, cry, etc., and use relevant and delicate vocabulary or phrases to express themselves. When describing the psychology of characters, try to avoid being straightforward and use the "three sources and four sources" model ("three sources" refer to the three major clauses: attributive clauses, noun clauses, and adverbial clauses; "four sources" refer to using 34 of the most proud expressions, such as non finite verbs, emphasis sentence patterns, inverted sentences, with structure, etc.), in order to make the description accurate and reflect the diversity of grammatical structures. In addition to selecting detailed psychological descriptive vocabulary and diverse sentence expressions, another way to enhance language proficiency is to flexibly use rhetorical methods.
3.Positive energy ending: The story content must convey positive energy, design the plot around the main theme of "truth, goodness, and beauty", and promote the core socialist values. Like getting lost but eventually returning home; Failed or encountered difficulties, but ultimately succeeded; We had an argument, but the final oute was to reconcile and live in harmony; If you make a mistake, you will eventually reform and bee a new person; The thief escaped, and in the end, he must be brought to justice, and so on.
范文赏析
One day, however, Mary came with good news. She told Jane the school music festival was to be held the next month and that her classmates all expected her to sing on behalf of her class. _______________________________________简的眼睛闪闪发光，但她怀疑地回答:“我能……吗?”_______________________________Mary and I immediately assured her that she could make it. 玛丽和我立即向她保证，她一定能做到。

In the following month, with the help of Mary, Jane kept on practicing singing. Beautiful songs echoed in our house again and smiles began to appear on her face. Finally came the big day when she could present herself.
When the host announced it was Jane's turn, she was wheeled onto the stage. Jane was greeted with warm applause. As she began to sing, the audience got absorbed in her beautiful voice. _________________________________________她表演完几秒钟后，所有的观众起立，发出雷鸣般的欢呼声。

Jane was moved to tears.
_____________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________老师和同学的善意和鼓励激发了Jane对生活的热情，让她重拾追求最初梦想的信心，我会全心全意地支持她。

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