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答案 1.One of the reasons ;too ;to 2.Another reason; think it useless 3.A third reason；are not interested in
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Now in the countryside, there are many children out of school . I think one of the reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling .As a result ,they have to stay at home to work to support their families .Another reason is that many parents think it useless for the girls to study and they would not like them to go to school .
3.还有一个原因就是部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。 _______is that some children ______their lessons ,and would not like to go to school.
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1.be too poor to afford the schooling/can’t afford the schooling 2.make money/make a living 3. support one’s family 4. think it useless to do sth 5.be not interested in… 6.have the chance to do sth 7.pay attention to/focus one’s attention on 8.play a role in…

GUIDED WRITING事理说明文

说明文事理说明文(二) 事理说明文【考例再现】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。

请你根据下列要点写封回信。

要点 1. 参加中文学习班；2. 看中文书刊、电视；3. 学唱中文歌曲；4. 交中国朋友。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。

June 8, 2008Dear Peter,I’m glad t o receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.【范文展示】June 8, 2008Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is importantto ta ke a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua (2008全国卷Ⅱ)【范文赏析】★文体分析本文为书信格式，主体部分体裁是事理说明文。

Writing景点介绍

of 900 square meters, is said to be built
between 1426 and 1435. After it was
first built, major repairs were
constantly done in different dynasties,
seven of which were recorded. It is the first discovery of ancient buildings with exact building time in our province. The local villagers and government treasure the grand relic, protect it with great care and repair it
5. 当地村民和政府珍爱文化遗产，对
它进行精心保护与修复；
6. 2003年获联合国文化遗产保护大奖
一等奖。
范文欣赏
Located in Qiangang Village of
Conghua City in Guangdong Province,
Guangyu Temple, which covers an area
5. 抒发感情，融情于景。景点介绍不
同于一般的说明文，在描写景物时
可以带个人感情色彩及生动的细节
描写。
常用词汇及句型 places of interest, historical site, cultural relics, at home and abroad, feature, wonderful, under construction, manmade, ancient times, date from, be located / situated in, be known for, be used for, cover an area of ..., has a history of ..., be open to the public, be worth visiting, ...

Guided writing

Describe a common idea or impression
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On the other hand, fast food is also popular, especially with younger people. Many go to the fast food restaurants and sometimes you can’t find a place to sit. However, they probably eat their chicken or burgers with fries later in the day or at night—not in the early morning.
Describe a contrasting idea
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So why is street food more popular for breakfast? There seem to be several reasons. First there is the huge variety: you can eat a different breakfast every day because there are so many kinds of local styles available. Then there is the price—local street food is cheaper than fast food. And, of course, having a street breakfast on your way to work is a strong local tradition, so there are cultural reasons too.

英语：三种英语写作教学法

英语：三种英语写作教学法一、成果教学法成果教学法是目前国内占统治地位的一种英语教学法，国内大多数英语写作教材也是按这种教学法设计的。

虽然成果教学法在具体实施中还存在着多样性，但总体来讲，这种教学法注重语言知识的运用，强调文章中要使用适当的词汇、句法和衔接手段（Pincas,1982）。

对于段落来讲，强调主题句、段落的组织与结构，即通过所谓的模式来展开段落，常见的模式有：事情发展过程、对比与比较、因果关系、分类、下定义等。

成果教学法一般把写作分为四个环节。

1．熟悉范文（familiarization）。

在这个阶段，教师选取一篇范文进行讲解，分析其修辞选择模式和结构模式，并介绍修辞特点和语言特点。

2．控制性练习（controlled writing）。

在这个阶段，教师就范文中所体现的相关常见的句式要求学生进行替换练习，并在教师的指导下渐渐过渡到段落写作。

3．指导性练习（guided writing）。

在这个阶段，学生模仿范文，使用经过训练的句式尝试写出相似类型的文章。

4．自由写作（free writing）。

在这个阶段，学生可以自由发挥，使得写作技能成为自身技能的一部分，并用于现实写作中。

比如说，在写作课开始时，教师可以先分析一篇有关描写房屋的文章（这样的范文通常为了教学需要进行过适当的修改，以便使得结构和语言特征更为明显），并突出描写房屋常见的表达法，如介词、房屋各部分的名称、各类房屋的名称以及常用句型等，然后要求学生进行替换练习，造出一些相关的简单句。

接着教师可以出示一张房屋的图片，要求学生模仿范文写出一篇描写房屋的段落或短文，教师进行仔细批改后，帮助学生找出其语言和结构上的问题，并督促改正。

之后可以要求学生自由发挥，描述自己家的房屋。

成果教学法以行为主义理论为依据，认为教学过程是一个教师提供刺激，学生做出反应，再进行强化的过程。

鼓励对输入信息（input）的模仿和再创造，并且由教师支配并控制着整个教学过程，学生没有太多自由发挥的空间，最后写出的作文是评价学习成果的惟一依据。

高中英语写作周练14篇(包含四大体裁)

高中英语写作周练14篇（包含四大体裁）话题类议论文写作1Guided Writing：Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.在充斥着各种电子产品的信息时代，有些人很看好科技公司的发展而有些却不。

你认为科技公司成功的关键是什么？请谈谈你的看法并举例说明。

【范文】At the dawn of information age, the rising of electronic appliances has given many tech companies an edge in the global market. However, the tide doesn’t necessarily raise all boats. Those companies who cannot cater to the majority’s needs will be easily knocked out. As far as I’m concerned, two key qualities matter a lot.First and foremost, innovation is undeniably of prime significance to the success of a tech company. Apparently, innovative skills exclusive to a company may determine its irreplaceable position in the field. It is also a combination of keeping pace with the times and constantly challenging itself, which helps to grab and retain target customers’ attention.Apart from innovation, it can be the culture that cultivates its customers’ as w ell as employees’ loyalty.For instance, Huawei boasts its customer-oriented attitudes and diligence in transforming itself from a local business to a global brand. It’s no exaggeration to say that only if a tech company occupies a decent culture can it fo ster its employees’ sense of belonging, sense of responsibility and sense of honor, thus the ultimate improved customer experience.In the final analysis, a tech company’s success may not depend on its products so much as its innovation and distinctive company culture. Therefore, it’s high time that companies should at least remember that once involved, one is sure to evolve.(226ws) 【赏析】（1）结构：典型的“三段式”。

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For example, Chinese students have to learn...
5. React against the main idea
But you can make progress in writing by… 6. Add further reaction against the main idea You can also… 7. Come to a conclusion Learning a foreign language is never easy, but…
• At present , online shopping becomes a fashion activity. • Online shopping has many advantages. For example , it is not only very convenient but also cheap than shopping in the ordinary shops . What's more, online shopping has many kinds goods which waiting for being choosing by guests. • However, everything has it's pros and cons. Of course, online shopping also has it's shortcomings . As you know , it's prestige is not very high and customers' interest be trenched. Besides, we are not sure goods' quality. • As far as I known, online shopping is a good way to buy things in this quick pace life , but we are supposed to improve the other hand , we should choose a shop which has a high prestige. Last but not least, you'd better communicate with sellers before you by things.

Guided writing

GUIDED WRITING文体介绍电子邮件(electronic mail，常缩略为E-mail，e-mail或e-mail)，是一种不用纸张的电子信函，通过网络发送，是一种非常便利的交流方式。

格式特点通常，电子邮件也包括一般信件的几个组成部分：信头、正文和结尾。

但它是一种非正式的文体，因此称呼前常常不用Dear，对同辈朋友，可以直呼其名，如：Mike；但对长辈最好使用头衔和姓，如：Mr. Smith。

一般来说，电子邮件通常由开头称呼语、正文、结尾敬语及署名构成，但有时只有正文而把称呼语、结尾敬语及署名都省略掉。

文字特点简洁明了。

为了便于阅读，E-mail通常比较简短，如果内容很多，常常以附件的形式发出。

语言精练，信尾客套话也很简单。

常用表达1. Now, let me introduce you something about ...2. I’m glad to have a chance to be your pen friend.3. I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about ...4. I learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire ... I want to get this job very much.5. If you agree with me, please write a letter to me or phone me. I live at ... My telephone number / My address / My Email address is...6. Wish you a pleasant journey.7. I hope you come and see for yourself one day.8. I expect to hear from you soon.活学活用假如你是李华，请在Email中向你的朋友Tom (Tom@)讲述你的一次旅游经历。

GUIDED WRITING

GUIDED WRITING劝说性信函写作ABC【写作指导】1. 写劝说性回信时，首先要分析来信的问题，弄清对方的意图或者真正的问题所在，然后表明自己的观点，做到回信有针对性，达到答疑解惑的目的。

2. 针对问题提出建议，并说明原因。

在回信时一定要清楚、明了、客观，紧扣主题，使收信人一目了然，感到疑惑得以解答，在给出建议的同时注意语气委婉适度。

3. 最后，提出期望，希望收信人积极行动，改进现状，并礼貌地结束全文。

【常用句型】首段：引出问题。

I am sorry you have had so much trouble (in) doing ... I have some suggestions for you. / Here are my suggestions ... / I hope the tips below will help you.You have asked for my advice on ... and I will try to make some suggestions.主体：提出建议。

In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following...First of all ... Meanwhile ... In addition...First ... Second ... At last...It’s important for you to...If you do ... it will be better.You had better do...You should (not)...It would be a good idea to...结尾：提出期望。

Cheer up! Your problems will soon be over.Where there is a will, there is a way.Don’t lose heart, whatever happens.I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.Please let me know if I can help further.I hope you can take my advice.I do hope my suggestions can help you.【实战演练】假如你是某健康专栏的顾问David，收到李华的来信，信中谈到他每天学习注意力不集中，昏昏欲睡，询问如何才能拥有健康的生活，请给他回信并提出相应的建议。

新视界大学英语1 unit 3 Guided_writing

The following are some of the most useful words and expressions we use.
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Expressions used when describing differences
but / however
These conjunctions are the most common ways of signaling a difference; however is more formal, and usually comes at the beginning of a sentence.
In most countries in the Middle East and East Asia, pointing with the forefinger is considered rude, whereas in Northern Europe it’s acceptable.
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5 If you turn your palm towards you, it means two of something in most countries, as in “Two more beers, please”. In contrast, in Britain, this gesture is very offensive.
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4 In most countries in the Middle East and East Asia, pointing with the forefinger is considered rude, in contrast to Northern Europe, where it’s acceptable.

新标准大学英语,综合教程3,第二版Guided Writingppt课件

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6 months in wilderness / follow ancestral songlines / heart of culture, discover themselves
Guided writing
Organise an essay
Think about: how much time to spend on
Semi-controlled practice
Write a short essay to describe a rite of passage in China.
Think about 1. What is the event, and where does it take
place? 2. In what way can it be seen as a rite of
an introduction; how many examples to refer to; how to link ideas; how to introduce the topic; how to conclude the essay.
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Organise an essay
Write only those few words of the source material which will be of use and later write them up as sentences.
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Take notes
Write up the notes about Bar Mitzvah ceremony as one or two sentences.

上海2022年高考英语满分作文范文_作文1450字_高考作文_

上海2022年高考英语满分作文范文【真题再现】II. Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。

你的信必须满足以下要求：1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;2. 说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)【点评解析】今年英语话题贴近生活，考生应该有话可说，但要写好，不仅要有一定的语言功底，还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆有所了解，否则话语会比较表面化。

这样的命题对英语教学有较好的导向作用，即学校和家庭要努力提供机会让孩子走出课堂，走向社会。

如何写&整体框架:考生认真审题后，作文时开章明义，用一句主题句明确自己的选择(如选择社区图书馆或博物馆)，然后另起两段分别就便利性和专业性进行比较，笔墨应重点放在你所选择的地点的优势方面，结尾部分稍作总结，呼应开头的选择。

【作文范文】Dear Sir/ Madam,I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reachShanghai Museum, located in the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway,by bus and so on. What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmentto appreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions. What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.Yours,Wang Min。

GUIDED WRITING

如何写建议信建议信是写信人对收信人就某一问题或事情表达自己的想法，提出看法、建议的信件。

建议信可以是写给个人，围绕一个事件或问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可以是写给某个组织或机构，针对该组织或机构的服务改进提出建议或忠告。

建议信不是投诉信，因此礼貌要放在首位，写信人一定要注意这一点。

建议信和普通的信件一样有固定的格式，即信头、称呼、正文、结束语、签名五部分。

其中正文是书信的主体，是高考考查的核心，而称呼、签名等其余部分一般都不在考查之列。

写信时根据内容的不同可以采用多种表述方式如叙述、说明、议论等。

[写作指导]建议信的正文一般包括三部分：1. 首先表明写作意图；2. 写出具体建议及其原因，并说明采纳建议的益处；3. 最后表达希望建议被采纳的愿望。

注意：语气要委婉礼貌，顾及对方感受。

[常用表达]开头：I am writing to make some suggestions ...I am writing to put forward some suggestions ...I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning ...I would like to offer some suggestions ...正文：I think it would be beneficial that ...It would help to ...It would be more convenient to ...It would be handy to ...结尾：I hope that you can take my suggestions into consideration.I do hope you will consider my suggestions.I would be more than happy if my suggestions could be considered. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval.[实战演练]假如你是李华，你生活的社区准备建一个大型超市，考虑到社区残疾人的需要，请你写一封信给负责该项目的建筑师，提出一些合理化建议，以方便残疾人购物。

Guided Writing

Guided Writing:1.你们学校下个月要举办一个慈善义卖会。

你准备向你们的年级组长提交一份设置个人义卖摊位的计划。

要求：说明你准备开设什么摊位，卖什么或开展什么活动。

说明你准备如何应付一些潜在的问题或麻烦。

说明你准备如何开展宣传，以便让更多的人知道你的摊位。

说明你准备如何收费，以及最后的收入准备用作何处。

(去年期末考试作文题)Sample answerI wish to submit a plan for the charity fair next month. I would like to set up a coconut stall.My friend Sarah will help me run the stall. Customers will be given three tennis balls, and will throw these at coconuts on stands five meters away. If they knock a coconut down, they will get a prize.We will need to prepare some prizes, and buy some coconuts and tennis balls. We will make the coconut stands ourselves. We plan to charge five yuan for each throw. We think we can make at least one thousand yuan, but we hope to make a lot more.If there is bad weather, we will move our coconut stall inside the school hall. If we have difficult customers, we will let them have one extra tennis ball for free. We will also make posters to advertise our stall, and put them up around our school. If no one comes to our stall at first, Sarah will encourage the crowd using a loudspeaker.All proceeds from our stall will go to the Red Cross. We chose the Red Cross because of all the good work it did to help the people suffering from the effects of the tsunami.Thank you for considering our submission.2.Next week, your class will organize an arts camp for the children in an orphanage. You mustsubmit a plan to your head teacher and your plan must outline the activities at the camp.(练习册p9)Sample writingI wish to submit a plan for the arts camp next week. The arts camp will give the children atthe orphanage the chance to use their talents and have fun at the same time.The activities will include sketching and painting, different kinds of crafts, and dancing.Each activity will have a director and an assistant in charge of the activity, stimulating the children‟s interests and helping them enjoy themselves at the camp.The children will be divided into groups to take turns participating in the activities.Finally, our camp will end with a grand art exhibition and performance, with everyone participating.In order to carry out the activities smoothly, we will select6 the directors and assistants for each activity based on their special talents. We will also need to prepare some prizes. Every child will get a prize for their efforts at the camp.3.The local government should pay women a salary if they choose to stay at home to look aftertheir houses and raise their children.Write a debate speech about the above proposition.Sample writing:I am speaking against this proposition because I think it is dangerous. I wish to give three reasons why it is dangerous and harmful to society. First, it would attract too many women away from real jobs. Second, we do not need this suggestion because families have always managed to do well in the past. Third, it would be extremely expensive for governments and would endanger our prosperity.My first point is that thousands of women would leave their present jobs if the local government paid them a salary for staying at home. There would be a labour shortage. Then we would need to have more people from other places to fill these jobs. As a result, the population would increase and this would bring big problems. Also, this suggestion would encourage more women to give up their careers. It would not help women develop themselves and use all of their abilities. Instead of helping women, it would keep them in their homes.Second, although I agree that it is difficult for women to bring up a family and have a career, most women manage to do it. They can also get help from other family members, especially grandparents. Even husbands can help sometimes! So, I feel no need to change the present system. Finally, I estimate that about half a million women would accept this scheme if it were introduced. All of the local government‟s money comes from the taxpayers. How can we suddenly afford to pay half a million new salaries? The local government would need to raise taxes a lot. Then we would all suffer, and businesses would need to raise taxes a lot. Then we would all suffer, and businesses would not come to our city.Therefore, I feel this suggestion would harm some women. It is unnecessary and would damage our economy. I ask you to vote against the proposition.4.Single-sex schools are better than co-educational schools.(练习册p18)Write a speech to oppose the motion.Sample writingChairperson and fellow studentsI am speaking against this motion.My first point is that life in co-educational schools is more like the real world. In the real world there are both males and females. If students are kept in a same-sex environment, when they leave school they will not know how to deal with the opposite sex.Second, boys and girls can often learn from each other. Faced with a task , girls and boys usually have different approaches. Neither of these approaches is right; neither is wrong. Both can be productive. Boy-girl pairs can be one way of getting boys and girls to learn from each other.Finally, education has an important task – preparing students for life as adults. When you are older you need to communicate with people of the opposite sex. You won‟t be able to gain thatskill unless you were brought up around people of the opposite sex.For these reasons, I believe students can benefit more form studying I co-educational schools than in single-sex schools. I ask you to vote against this motion. Thank you.5.Write about any celebration you have attended.(练习册p37)Sample writing:Last Saturday, I attended my cousin Jane‟s wedding ceremony. The wedding was held in Hilton Hotel. When we arrived the bride and the groom were standing outside the banquet hall, receiving guests. The couple looked very happy.We signed our names in a red book, and took a photo with the couple. Then, we were led to our table.The banquet hall was beautifully decorated. All the tables were covered with pink table cloths and had a bunch of red roses and a candle. After we were seated, the hostess announced the start of the ceremony. Then came the music ‟Here comes the bride‟. Jane and her father appeared arm in arm. She was smiling beautifully. They walked down the red carpet to the stage, where the groom was waiting. It was very romantic.During the ceremony, we ate a wonderful dinner while the couple proposed a toast at every table.6.请你以学生会的名义写一份广告，告知所有学生学生会现在成立了一个慈善基金小组，定期专门组织各类慈善活动，筹集资金，捐赠给有关机构，或去孤老院等地方进行爱心活动，主要目的是帮助他人、奉献社会。