如何写求助信PPT课件
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More expressions：
3. Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for some help.
4. It would be very helpful if you could do me a favor. 5. I really don’t know what to do and expect you to
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Presentation
Useful expressions for writing the letter:
• A. 点明目的 • B. 描述困难 • C. 恳求帮助 • D. 表示感谢 • E. 期盼回复
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A. 点明目的 我写信是为了向你寻求帮助。
1. _I’_m_w__ri_t_in_g_t_o_y_o_u_t_o_g_e_t_/_a_s_k_f_o_r_s_o_m_e_h_e_lp_. 2. I__a_m_w_r_i_ti_n_g_t_h_is_l_e_tt_e_r_t_o_a_s_k_y_o_u_t_o_d_o__m_e
I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.
Yo16urs, Li Hua
Example 2：
（2017 汕头一模）假如你是李华，最近在学习美国风 俗，但国内有关这方面的地道书籍较少。你想麻烦你的 美国笔友Mike帮你买一些这方面的书。现在请根据以下 信息给Mike写一封信。
（提取信息）
Para 2
说明买书的理由（书籍少）； 书的数量，寄送时间；会转账
Para 3 感谢，期待回复
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Step 2：提笔
Dear Mike, ①（问候）_H_o_w__is_e_v_e_r_yt_h_i_ng__g_oi_n_g___? ②（写信目
a．询问Tom的生活和学习情况； b．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； c．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 注意：a．词数：100左右； b．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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Step 1：构思
审题
时态 人称
一般现在时 第一、第二人称
Para 1
Tom上个月来到北京学习， 询问Tom的生活和学习情况。
提纲 （提取信息） Para 2
appreciated.
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Practice
Example 1：
（2011山东卷） 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上 个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学 生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、 语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom 写一封电子邮件：
Here are my email address and phone number: 恳求帮助
lihua@1236.com; 12345678. Thanks for your kindness in
advance. Look forward to your reply.
表示感谢
yours, Li Hu4a
I came here last month and I find my courses 描述困难
interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-
making and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students
我将去参加英语演讲比赛， 在……等方面遇到了困难。
求助，感谢
Para 3 打算赛后去看Tom
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2019/12/23
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Step 2：提笔 Dear Tom,
Step 3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章 （如时态，主谓一致等）
It has been a month since you studied in Beijing. ① (问候)
_I__a_m___n_o_w___c_o_n_f_r_o_n__t_e_d__w_i_t_h__d__if_f_i_c_u_l_t_y____ when I collect useful
materials. Meanwhile, ③（语言运用困难）_I__s_t_i_ll_h__a_v_e__s_o_m_e__t_r_o_u_b_l_e_
_i_f__y_o_u__c_o__u_ld___g_iv_e___m_e__a___h_a_n_d__a__n_d__t_h_a__n_k__y_o_u__f_o_r__y__o_u_r__h_e_l_p_.
Hopefully, the great effort I am making will pay off.
__H__o_w__i_s__e_v_e_r_y__t_h_in__g__g_o_i_n_g__w_i_t_h__y_o__u________?
I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle
school students in July this summer. However, ②（搜集资料困难）
and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on
Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me
know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me.
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假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习
暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导
中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规 定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1. 本人简历 2. 求助内容 3. 约定时间 4. 你的联系方式 （Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678) 注意：1. 词数100左右。
How to Write a Letter of Asking for Help
1
Lead in
• Read a sample of a writing passage and find out the structure and characteristics of a letter for help.
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B.描述困难
我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。
1. _I_h_a_ve__s_om__e_d_if_f_ic_u_lt_y_/_t_r_o_u_b_le_i_n_d_o_in_g_…___ _(b_e_c_a_u_se__…_)______________________
2. _I_f_in_d__it_d_i_ff_i_c_ul_t_f_o_r_m_e__to__d_o_s_th_.______
__su_g_g_e_s_ti_o_ns__(o_n_h_o_w__t_o_s_o_lv_e_t_h_e_p_r_o_b_le_m_)_.
2. I would _a_p_p_re_c_i_at_e_ it _i_f_y_ou__c_ou_l_d_o_f_f_er__
_m_e__h_el_p_. __________________________
More expressions：
3. I would like to express my thanks/ gratitude in advance (for your kindness).
4. Thank you for …
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E.期盼回复 希望尽快收到你的来信。
1. _L_o_o_k_in_g_f_o_r_w_a_rd__to_/__H_o_p_in_g_f_o_r_y_o_u_r _e_a_rl_y_
2. 阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，注意语气委婉、 真诚；情态动词多使用____w_o_u_ld_/_c_ould
3. 注意使用过渡性词汇，如：first, besides, also, what’s more, at the same time, meanwhile, in addition, unfortunately, luckily, thus, however, so that 等等。
1. 说明买书的理由； 2. 对书的要求（如数量，寄送时间等）； 3. 会转账给他。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
生词：转账 transfer money 17
Step 1：构思
审题
时态 人称
一般现在时 第一、第二Βιβλιοθήκη Baidu称
Para 1 问候Mike，请他帮忙买书
提纲
_r_e_p_ly__(a_n_d_I_’l_l_b_e_g_r_a_te_f_u_l _f_or__yo_u_r_h_e_l_p)_. 2. _E_x_p_e_c_ti_n_g_y_o_ur__w_r_it_in_g_b_a_c_k_s_o_o_n_. ______
More expressions： 3. I sincerely hope to get your timely reply. 4. Your kind early reply will be highly
More expressions： 3. I am now confronted/faced with the
difficulty with …/ following difficulties.. 4. The reason why I write this letter is that I
have trouble when I do sth.
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 结束语已为你写好。
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Dear Sir/Madam,
点明目的
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in
your university. I’m writing to ask for help.
give me your advice/ suggestions. 6. I have no idea what I should do and long for your
advice. 10
D.表示感谢 如果你能帮助我/给予我建议，我将不胜感激。 1. I would be grateful _if_y_o_u_c_o_ul_d_g_i_ve__m_e_s_o_m_e
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C.寻求帮助/建议
你可以帮助我吗？
1. _C_o_ul_d_y_o_u_p_l_ea_s_e_g_i_v_e_m_e_a__h_an_d_?_________
2. _I__w_o_n_de_r__if_y_o_u_c_a_n_h_e_l_p_m_e_w__it_h_t_h_e____
_d_if_f_ic_u_l_ty_._______________________
in using English properly. ④ __B_e_s_i_d_e__s_, I may be too nervous to speak in
face of thousands of audience. ⑤（求助并感谢）_I__w_o_u__ld__a_p_p_r_e_c_i_a_t_e__i_t
_a_f_a_v_o_r/_g_iv_e__m_e_a_h_a_n_d_. _____________
More expressions： 3. I am sorry to bother you, but I really need
your help (with …) 4. I’m writing to ask whether you can help me.
Common structure
• 1. 交代背景 / 询问对方，___点_明__目_的__； • 2. 叙述现状，_描__述_困__难__，_恳__求_帮_助___； • 3. 寻求帮助，__表_示__感_谢__，期盼回复。
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Characteristics
1. 通常使用的时态：__一__般_现__在__时______；
3. Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for some help.
4. It would be very helpful if you could do me a favor. 5. I really don’t know what to do and expect you to
6
Presentation
Useful expressions for writing the letter:
• A. 点明目的 • B. 描述困难 • C. 恳求帮助 • D. 表示感谢 • E. 期盼回复
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A. 点明目的 我写信是为了向你寻求帮助。
1. _I’_m_w__ri_t_in_g_t_o_y_o_u_t_o_g_e_t_/_a_s_k_f_o_r_s_o_m_e_h_e_lp_. 2. I__a_m_w_r_i_ti_n_g_t_h_is_l_e_tt_e_r_t_o_a_s_k_y_o_u_t_o_d_o__m_e
I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.
Yo16urs, Li Hua
Example 2：
（2017 汕头一模）假如你是李华，最近在学习美国风 俗，但国内有关这方面的地道书籍较少。你想麻烦你的 美国笔友Mike帮你买一些这方面的书。现在请根据以下 信息给Mike写一封信。
（提取信息）
Para 2
说明买书的理由（书籍少）； 书的数量，寄送时间；会转账
Para 3 感谢，期待回复
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Step 2：提笔
Dear Mike, ①（问候）_H_o_w__is_e_v_e_r_yt_h_i_ng__g_oi_n_g___? ②（写信目
a．询问Tom的生活和学习情况； b．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； c．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 注意：a．词数：100左右； b．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
13
Step 1：构思
审题
时态 人称
一般现在时 第一、第二人称
Para 1
Tom上个月来到北京学习， 询问Tom的生活和学习情况。
提纲 （提取信息） Para 2
appreciated.
12
Practice
Example 1：
（2011山东卷） 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上 个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学 生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、 语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom 写一封电子邮件：
Here are my email address and phone number: 恳求帮助
lihua@1236.com; 12345678. Thanks for your kindness in
advance. Look forward to your reply.
表示感谢
yours, Li Hu4a
I came here last month and I find my courses 描述困难
interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-
making and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students
我将去参加英语演讲比赛， 在……等方面遇到了困难。
求助，感谢
Para 3 打算赛后去看Tom
14
2019/12/23
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Step 2：提笔 Dear Tom,
Step 3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章 （如时态，主谓一致等）
It has been a month since you studied in Beijing. ① (问候)
_I__a_m___n_o_w___c_o_n_f_r_o_n__t_e_d__w_i_t_h__d__if_f_i_c_u_l_t_y____ when I collect useful
materials. Meanwhile, ③（语言运用困难）_I__s_t_i_ll_h__a_v_e__s_o_m_e__t_r_o_u_b_l_e_
_i_f__y_o_u__c_o__u_ld___g_iv_e___m_e__a___h_a_n_d__a__n_d__t_h_a__n_k__y_o_u__f_o_r__y__o_u_r__h_e_l_p_.
Hopefully, the great effort I am making will pay off.
__H__o_w__i_s__e_v_e_r_y__t_h_in__g__g_o_i_n_g__w_i_t_h__y_o__u________?
I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle
school students in July this summer. However, ②（搜集资料困难）
and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on
Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me
know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me.
2
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习
暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导
中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规 定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1. 本人简历 2. 求助内容 3. 约定时间 4. 你的联系方式 （Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678) 注意：1. 词数100左右。
How to Write a Letter of Asking for Help
1
Lead in
• Read a sample of a writing passage and find out the structure and characteristics of a letter for help.
8
B.描述困难
我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。
1. _I_h_a_ve__s_om__e_d_if_f_ic_u_lt_y_/_t_r_o_u_b_le_i_n_d_o_in_g_…___ _(b_e_c_a_u_se__…_)______________________
2. _I_f_in_d__it_d_i_ff_i_c_ul_t_f_o_r_m_e__to__d_o_s_th_.______
__su_g_g_e_s_ti_o_ns__(o_n_h_o_w__t_o_s_o_lv_e_t_h_e_p_r_o_b_le_m_)_.
2. I would _a_p_p_re_c_i_at_e_ it _i_f_y_ou__c_ou_l_d_o_f_f_er__
_m_e__h_el_p_. __________________________
More expressions：
3. I would like to express my thanks/ gratitude in advance (for your kindness).
4. Thank you for …
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E.期盼回复 希望尽快收到你的来信。
1. _L_o_o_k_in_g_f_o_r_w_a_rd__to_/__H_o_p_in_g_f_o_r_y_o_u_r _e_a_rl_y_
2. 阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，注意语气委婉、 真诚；情态动词多使用____w_o_u_ld_/_c_ould
3. 注意使用过渡性词汇，如：first, besides, also, what’s more, at the same time, meanwhile, in addition, unfortunately, luckily, thus, however, so that 等等。
1. 说明买书的理由； 2. 对书的要求（如数量，寄送时间等）； 3. 会转账给他。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
生词：转账 transfer money 17
Step 1：构思
审题
时态 人称
一般现在时 第一、第二Βιβλιοθήκη Baidu称
Para 1 问候Mike，请他帮忙买书
提纲
_r_e_p_ly__(a_n_d_I_’l_l_b_e_g_r_a_te_f_u_l _f_or__yo_u_r_h_e_l_p)_. 2. _E_x_p_e_c_ti_n_g_y_o_ur__w_r_it_in_g_b_a_c_k_s_o_o_n_. ______
More expressions： 3. I sincerely hope to get your timely reply. 4. Your kind early reply will be highly
More expressions： 3. I am now confronted/faced with the
difficulty with …/ following difficulties.. 4. The reason why I write this letter is that I
have trouble when I do sth.
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 结束语已为你写好。
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Dear Sir/Madam,
点明目的
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in
your university. I’m writing to ask for help.
give me your advice/ suggestions. 6. I have no idea what I should do and long for your
advice. 10
D.表示感谢 如果你能帮助我/给予我建议，我将不胜感激。 1. I would be grateful _if_y_o_u_c_o_ul_d_g_i_ve__m_e_s_o_m_e
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C.寻求帮助/建议
你可以帮助我吗？
1. _C_o_ul_d_y_o_u_p_l_ea_s_e_g_i_v_e_m_e_a__h_an_d_?_________
2. _I__w_o_n_de_r__if_y_o_u_c_a_n_h_e_l_p_m_e_w__it_h_t_h_e____
_d_if_f_ic_u_l_ty_._______________________
in using English properly. ④ __B_e_s_i_d_e__s_, I may be too nervous to speak in
face of thousands of audience. ⑤（求助并感谢）_I__w_o_u__ld__a_p_p_r_e_c_i_a_t_e__i_t
_a_f_a_v_o_r/_g_iv_e__m_e_a_h_a_n_d_. _____________
More expressions： 3. I am sorry to bother you, but I really need
your help (with …) 4. I’m writing to ask whether you can help me.
Common structure
• 1. 交代背景 / 询问对方，___点_明__目_的__； • 2. 叙述现状，_描__述_困__难__，_恳__求_帮_助___； • 3. 寻求帮助，__表_示__感_谢__，期盼回复。
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Characteristics
1. 通常使用的时态：__一__般_现__在__时______；