九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编各地方试卷集合汇编及解析

九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编各地方试卷集合汇编及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
生命就像是一种回声，你送出什么它就送回什么，你播种什么就收获什么，你给予什么就得到什么。

因此，人们常说“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。

请以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 为题写一篇短文。

要求：1. 思路清晰，观点明确，语法正确，有说服力；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右。

Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
【答案】Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves
Nobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into trou ble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.
All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，主要讲述“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

2．（·阜宁县新世纪实验中学中考模拟）书面表达
初中的生活美好而短暂。

临近中考，压力骤增，父母的唠叨，老师的殷殷期望，自己的学业与梦想……倾诉是一副良方。

请给七月的你写一封信，谈谈你身边存在的问题，你打算如何解决，鼓励自己生活还有诗和远方。

请根据以下提示写一封给自己的信。

要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，语句通顺，上下文连贯；
2．必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3．词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Future Me,
It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that …
Your sincerely
【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two aspects.First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second,
there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself.
In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and communicating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic （悲观的）. So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.
【解析】
【详解】
本文写给未来的自己，目的在于倾诉压力，寻求方法，并重拾信心。

第一段指出导致压力的两个方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every day.用First, Second点出。

第二自然段提到释放压力的方法，应用In order to表目的。

用What’s more表递进结构。

并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily点题呼吁。

整篇文章层次分明，结构紧凑。

3．（·宁夏中考模拟）书面表达
难忘的初中生活即将结束。

你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。

假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。

要点如下：
1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容：
1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。

参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。

Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be
going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。

而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．（·河北中考模拟）书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：（1）What was the event?
（2）How did you make it?
（3）What’s your fe eling?
要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just cou ldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。

题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。

写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。

其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。

应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。

句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。

为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。

文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。

短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。

文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

5．（·广州市第十六中学中考模拟）书面表达
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。

假定你是李华，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。

要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。

3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony wil l be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。

【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

6．（·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟）写作
“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。

某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We shoul d honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。

内容包括:
What do you often do for your parents?
Why should we honor our parents?
How should we honor our parents?
要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of
China.____________________________
【答案】We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.
First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.
【解析】
【分析】
本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文
【详解】
这是篇材料作文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。

这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，…众所周知；.I think it's our duty to do sth等等，其次文章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。

7．（·山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。

请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：
1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口
2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.
2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。

目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。

时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。

作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。

写作时，避免汉语式英语。

注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

8．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。

请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。

写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。

A hoarding school or a day school
We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________
【答案】
We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.
If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.
As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。

可以分三段写。

第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。

第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。

第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。

【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？
说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。

4.写下关键词、短语、句型。

5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。

6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。

写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。

运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。

用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。

【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。

做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

9．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
某英文报社组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。

请从下面两句谚语中
任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：
1. 该谚语的含义；
2. 体现该谚语含义的个人经历。

a） A friend in need is a friend indeed.
b）Where there’s a will, there’s a way.
参考词汇：谚语 proverb
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend Indeed
A life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.
Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.
Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.
Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always come to you when you need help.
【解析】
【分析】
这是命题作文。

二选一，第一个是“患难见真情”，第二个是“有志者事竞成”。

【详解】
标题都是以谚语的形式出现，所以考生第一步做的是理解这两个言语的意思，选择自己较有把握的。

在选择标题之后，根据所给内容提示，进行写作。

写作时，先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。

同
时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体
10．（·浙江中考模拟）
如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。

请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？
句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】
It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

11．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
时间过得飞快，似乎几个月前才进入初三，现在中考却近在眼前。

请以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容要点如下：
1．你发现老师现在上课语速很快。

由于有太多的作业和考试，学生没有足够的时间来进行课外活动；
2．有的同学以前学习不太努力，但现在他们已经意识到这次考试的重要性，并且全身心投入到学习中去；
3．你在这最后一个月里的打算和安排……
注意：
1．短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第3要点的内容须用2至3句话作适当发挥；
3．词数90左右，短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Are We Ready for the Challenge?
How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!
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I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!
【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?
How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have enough time for any after-school activities．Some students did not study hard enough before, but now they have realized the importance of the exam and are putting all their effort into study．During the last month, I am going to listen carefully in class and pay more attention to details, and it is also important for us to keep a balance between study and rest．
I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!
【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达如今的学习和以前的区别以及你的计划和打算。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如usual，so much，after-school activities，the importance of，put ones effort into，pay attention to，it is adj for sb to do。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

12．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
共享单车为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。

假设你是红星中学九年级学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国最新出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。

请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；2. 这种单车的优势；3. 你对这种单车的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：智能手机smartphone；扫码scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。

Dear Jim,
I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter. ______
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.
It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do i s to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.
Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍关于共享单车的一些事情。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

13．（·北京中考模拟）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的中华传统节日”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的传统节日是什么，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢这个节日。

提示词语:festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time
提示问题: What's your favorite traditional festival?
What do you usually do during the festival?
Why do you like it?
There are many traditional festivals in
China.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________
【答案】There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Mid-autumn Festival and it usually comes on August 15 of the lunar year.。