【高考】英语二轮复习写作之句式变化ppt课件
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②变为名词性从句(主语从句)
注意：Use them wisely!
原句：Jane could just stay in the car 新句：What Jane could do was just stay in the car, not knowing what to do.
“Go away!” was her warning.
原句：The wolf went back a little but it still wouldn’t give up. 新句：The wolf went back a little, not giving up.
原句：Then Tom returned and he shouted and waved a torch at the wolf. 新句：Then Tom returned, shouting and waving a torch at the wolf.
and
didn’t
know
what
she
could
do.
It was no use.
同一人多套动作可把其中某动作变非谓
新句：What Jane could do was just 新句：No sooner had she got out than a big wolf with his eyes shining and
5、自己不对自己负责任的后果
knowing what to do. 24、不是每个人都能遇到自己想要的那个人，但是每个人都会遇到一个合适自己的人。——卢思浩
44、人生如痴人说梦，充满着喧哗与骚动，却没有任何意义。——莎士比亚 2、汉族以外的其他民族被称为少数民族. 15、一个有事业追求的人，可以把“梦”做得高些。虽然开始时是梦想，但只要不停地做，不轻易放弃，梦想能成真。——虞有澄 9.人若志趣不远，心不在焉，虽学不成。
Picking up a small rock first, she threw at it.
Picking up a small rock first, she threw at it.
并列句变为主从复合句
拥有什么样句子/句式的作文算f her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying.
原句：The wolf seemed to be more aggressive and was ready to jump at her. 新句：More aggressive ,the wolf was ready to jump at her.
同一人多套动作可把其中某动作变非谓 80、春天没有花，人生没有爱，那还成个什么世界。──郭沫若
我们生活的社会是一个整体，我对他人负责，他人也对我负责;我对自己负责，同时也就是对他人负责，对社会负责。 32、一个民族的年轻一代人要是没有青春，那就是这个民族的大不幸。——赫尔岑
27、英雄就新是对句任何：事都H有全e力l以e赴f，t,自s始a至y终i，n心g无n旁o骛t的h人i。n—g—.波德W莱尔hat Jane could do was just stay in the car, not
4.使用特殊句式(感叹、倒装、强调)
Tool 1.单句合并为主从复合句； 并列句变为主从复合句
用主从复合句就是用从句！ ①变为定语从句(attributive clauses) ②变为名词性从句（nominal clauses）:(主语从句/宾语从句/表语从句/同位语从句) ③变为状语从句(adverbial clauses):(时间、让步…)
D. 其它
e.g. He found his waiting family immediately he got in.
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Tool 2. 单句变非谓语(纯非谓语/with结构/独立主格)
A. 纯非谓语
原句：He left and he didn’t say anything. Jane could just stay in the car and didn’t
原句：She thought of her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying.
stay
in
the
car,
not
knowing
what
to
do.
(纯非谓语/with复合结构/独立主格)
Jane was scared but she got only herself there in the forest.
nowhere.
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C. 独立主格 形式上依附于主句，有自己的主语和动词
原句：She thought of her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying.
新句：Her warm days with Tom flashing back, she couldn’t help crying.
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Tool 1.单句合并为主从复合句； 并列句变为主从复合句
①变为定语从句 原句：Jane picked up more rocks and even branches near her to try to make the wolf scared. It was no use.
前后有修饰指代关系考虑用定从 新句；Jane picked up more rocks and even branches near her to try to make the wolf scared, which was (of) no use.
A little while later, she got out to look for water but at that moment a big wolf appeared from nowhere.
The wolf had fierce green eyes and its mouth was watering.
9
原句：She thought of her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying. 新句：Thinking of her warm days with Tom, she couldn’t help crying.
原句：First, she picked up a small rock and threw at it. 新句：Picking up a small rock first, she threw at it.
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B. with复合结构 掌握：with+名词+补语(非谓语3种形式) 原句：…a big wolf appeared from nowhere. The wolf had fierce green eyes and its
mouth was watering. 新句：…a big wolf with its green eyes shining and its mouth watering appeared from
anything. Jane could just stay in the car and didn’t know what she could do. She thought of her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying. A little while later, she got out to look for water but at that moment a big wolf appeared from nowhere. The wolf had fierce green eyes and its mouth was watering. It was really frightening.
2020高考二轮专题复习 课题：英语写作之句式变化
一 案例简评：好句式成就好作文
Everybody can write. But quality varies.
句子人人会写，质量参差不齐
What compositions are good in terms of sentences?
拥有什么样句子/句式的作文算是好作文？
二 句式变换分类击破
1.单句合并为主从复合句 并列句变为主从复合句
2. 单句变非谓语 (纯非谓语/with复合结构/独立主格)
3. 单句变形容词/副词
目的：使句式丰富更加高级， 使内容精炼更加生动。
注意：Use them wisely! 不要只为了高级感 而变，要注意语境， 变化要恰当,长短结合。
主语
非谓动
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Tool 3. 单句变形容词/副词
If one word can do, don’ use one sentence.
原句：Tom was angry. He left and he didn’t say anything. 主系表结构=一个词
新句：Angry, he left，saying nothing. 伴随/方式
know what she could do.
7
③变为状语从句(时间、让步…)
原句：A little while later, she got out to look for water but at that moment a big wolf appeared from nowhere.
新句：A little while later, a big wolf appeared from nowhere the moment she got
Jane was scared but she got only herself there in the forest. First, she picked up a small rock and threw at it. “Go away!” That was her warning. The wolf went back a little but it still wouldn’t give up. Though Jane was anxious, she picked up more rocks and even branches near her to try to make the wolf scared. It was no use. The wolf seemed to be more aggressive and was ready to jump at her. Then Tom returned and he shouted and waved a torch at the wolf. The wolf was scared and ran away. Love made these two together again. 句法优点：1.无语法错误。2. 有使用个别从句。3.长短句结合流畅。 问题：1. 句式结构不够丰富高级，并列成分太多，从句类型单一 2. 句子冗长不精练 3
11、人生诚然有许多烦恼，但在满怀信心，意志坚定的人看来，无难不可摧，乐观努力，就是秘诀。——彭歌
know what she could do. 1)对外开放有利于现代化建设，在对外开放中必须坚持独立自主的原则。独立自主、自力更生是我国现代化建设的立足点;
40、忙碌是一种幸福，让我们没时间体会痛苦；奔波是一种快乐，让我们真实地感受生活；疲惫是一种享受，让我们无暇空虚。
An example writing
A couple was having their weekend in a a forest but they had a quarrel… The quarrel didn’t stop until it was dark. Tom was angry. He left and he didn’t say
out to look for water.
还不够高级？别急
时间状从引导： A. 名词类the moment, the minute, the instant,
B. 副词类immediately, directly, instantly C. 短语类each/every time, any time, the first time
②变为名词性从句(主语从句)
注意：Use them wisely!
原句：Jane could just stay in the car 新句：What Jane could do was just stay in the car, not knowing what to do.
“Go away!” was her warning.
原句：The wolf went back a little but it still wouldn’t give up. 新句：The wolf went back a little, not giving up.
原句：Then Tom returned and he shouted and waved a torch at the wolf. 新句：Then Tom returned, shouting and waving a torch at the wolf.
and
didn’t
know
what
she
could
do.
It was no use.
同一人多套动作可把其中某动作变非谓
新句：What Jane could do was just 新句：No sooner had she got out than a big wolf with his eyes shining and
5、自己不对自己负责任的后果
knowing what to do. 24、不是每个人都能遇到自己想要的那个人，但是每个人都会遇到一个合适自己的人。——卢思浩
44、人生如痴人说梦，充满着喧哗与骚动，却没有任何意义。——莎士比亚 2、汉族以外的其他民族被称为少数民族. 15、一个有事业追求的人，可以把“梦”做得高些。虽然开始时是梦想，但只要不停地做，不轻易放弃，梦想能成真。——虞有澄 9.人若志趣不远，心不在焉，虽学不成。
Picking up a small rock first, she threw at it.
Picking up a small rock first, she threw at it.
并列句变为主从复合句
拥有什么样句子/句式的作文算f her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying.
原句：The wolf seemed to be more aggressive and was ready to jump at her. 新句：More aggressive ,the wolf was ready to jump at her.
同一人多套动作可把其中某动作变非谓 80、春天没有花，人生没有爱，那还成个什么世界。──郭沫若
我们生活的社会是一个整体，我对他人负责，他人也对我负责;我对自己负责，同时也就是对他人负责，对社会负责。 32、一个民族的年轻一代人要是没有青春，那就是这个民族的大不幸。——赫尔岑
27、英雄就新是对句任何：事都H有全e力l以e赴f，t,自s始a至y终i，n心g无n旁o骛t的h人i。n—g—.波德W莱尔hat Jane could do was just stay in the car, not
4.使用特殊句式(感叹、倒装、强调)
Tool 1.单句合并为主从复合句； 并列句变为主从复合句
用主从复合句就是用从句！ ①变为定语从句(attributive clauses) ②变为名词性从句（nominal clauses）:(主语从句/宾语从句/表语从句/同位语从句) ③变为状语从句(adverbial clauses):(时间、让步…)
D. 其它
e.g. He found his waiting family immediately he got in.
8
Tool 2. 单句变非谓语(纯非谓语/with结构/独立主格)
A. 纯非谓语
原句：He left and he didn’t say anything. Jane could just stay in the car and didn’t
原句：She thought of her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying.
stay
in
the
car,
not
knowing
what
to
do.
(纯非谓语/with复合结构/独立主格)
Jane was scared but she got only herself there in the forest.
nowhere.
11
C. 独立主格 形式上依附于主句，有自己的主语和动词
原句：She thought of her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying.
新句：Her warm days with Tom flashing back, she couldn’t help crying.
5
Tool 1.单句合并为主从复合句； 并列句变为主从复合句
①变为定语从句 原句：Jane picked up more rocks and even branches near her to try to make the wolf scared. It was no use.
前后有修饰指代关系考虑用定从 新句；Jane picked up more rocks and even branches near her to try to make the wolf scared, which was (of) no use.
A little while later, she got out to look for water but at that moment a big wolf appeared from nowhere.
The wolf had fierce green eyes and its mouth was watering.
9
原句：She thought of her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying. 新句：Thinking of her warm days with Tom, she couldn’t help crying.
原句：First, she picked up a small rock and threw at it. 新句：Picking up a small rock first, she threw at it.
10
B. with复合结构 掌握：with+名词+补语(非谓语3种形式) 原句：…a big wolf appeared from nowhere. The wolf had fierce green eyes and its
mouth was watering. 新句：…a big wolf with its green eyes shining and its mouth watering appeared from
anything. Jane could just stay in the car and didn’t know what she could do. She thought of her warm days with Tom and couldn’t help crying. A little while later, she got out to look for water but at that moment a big wolf appeared from nowhere. The wolf had fierce green eyes and its mouth was watering. It was really frightening.
2020高考二轮专题复习 课题：英语写作之句式变化
一 案例简评：好句式成就好作文
Everybody can write. But quality varies.
句子人人会写，质量参差不齐
What compositions are good in terms of sentences?
拥有什么样句子/句式的作文算是好作文？
二 句式变换分类击破
1.单句合并为主从复合句 并列句变为主从复合句
2. 单句变非谓语 (纯非谓语/with复合结构/独立主格)
3. 单句变形容词/副词
目的：使句式丰富更加高级， 使内容精炼更加生动。
注意：Use them wisely! 不要只为了高级感 而变，要注意语境， 变化要恰当,长短结合。
主语
非谓动
12
Tool 3. 单句变形容词/副词
If one word can do, don’ use one sentence.
原句：Tom was angry. He left and he didn’t say anything. 主系表结构=一个词
新句：Angry, he left，saying nothing. 伴随/方式
know what she could do.
7
③变为状语从句(时间、让步…)
原句：A little while later, she got out to look for water but at that moment a big wolf appeared from nowhere.
新句：A little while later, a big wolf appeared from nowhere the moment she got
Jane was scared but she got only herself there in the forest. First, she picked up a small rock and threw at it. “Go away!” That was her warning. The wolf went back a little but it still wouldn’t give up. Though Jane was anxious, she picked up more rocks and even branches near her to try to make the wolf scared. It was no use. The wolf seemed to be more aggressive and was ready to jump at her. Then Tom returned and he shouted and waved a torch at the wolf. The wolf was scared and ran away. Love made these two together again. 句法优点：1.无语法错误。2. 有使用个别从句。3.长短句结合流畅。 问题：1. 句式结构不够丰富高级，并列成分太多，从句类型单一 2. 句子冗长不精练 3
11、人生诚然有许多烦恼，但在满怀信心，意志坚定的人看来，无难不可摧，乐观努力，就是秘诀。——彭歌
know what she could do. 1)对外开放有利于现代化建设，在对外开放中必须坚持独立自主的原则。独立自主、自力更生是我国现代化建设的立足点;
40、忙碌是一种幸福，让我们没时间体会痛苦；奔波是一种快乐，让我们真实地感受生活；疲惫是一种享受，让我们无暇空虚。
An example writing
A couple was having their weekend in a a forest but they had a quarrel… The quarrel didn’t stop until it was dark. Tom was angry. He left and he didn’t say
out to look for water.
还不够高级？别急
时间状从引导： A. 名词类the moment, the minute, the instant,
B. 副词类immediately, directly, instantly C. 短语类each/every time, any time, the first time