1011短文改错陈英

步骤一
浏览全文，掌握大意
I feel it is pity that you didn't want to take part in the speech contest. In my view, the speech contest can benefit from you in different ways. Firstly, it makes you look for more informations about your favorite scientists on the Internet or in the library, and learning more about them. Secondly, it is a challenge to prepare for a speech contest. You not only have to write a good article, and also have to perform them properly. What's more, after the contest, you can find yourself with some newly good friends, or even a prize. I suggest you consider participating in the contest, that will really do good to you. If you change your mind, please let me know as sooner as possible.
learn more about them. 修改：第三句没有错误；第四句将informations改为information；将 learn改为learning。 解析：information表示“信息”，为不可数名词，没有单复数形式。此 处符合名词数。learn为动词，是look for的宾语，for为介词，所以用 doing形式。此处符合习惯用法要记住。
4.单词拼写不改
sooner as possible. 修改：将sooner改为soon 解析：as soon as possible为固定搭配。此处符合口诀--习惯 用法要记住。
步骤三
检查核对，攻克难点
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做完改错以后，有些可能拿不准，那么需要返回去重新仔细斟酌。
四不改须谨记
1.标点符号不改；
2.大小写不改；
3.词序错误不改；
步骤二
分句阅读，逐行改错
原文句1.-- I feel it is pity that you didn't want to take part in the speech
contest. 修改：1，在pity前面加上a; 2，将didn't改为don't 解析：错误一，pity是可数名词，前面加a；错误二：文章整体用的是一般现在时态， 故将didn't改为一般现在时态don't,此处符合口诀“动词形，名词数，” 原
动词形 非谓语，细辨别--注意动词时态，语态错误；主谓不一致；动词及物非及物； 名词数--名词单复数 还要注意形和副--形容词修饰名词，副词修饰形容词，动词和句子；注意形容 词和副词比较级和最高级 代词格，细领悟--注意人称代词，物主代词 介词短语需关注--固定短语，固定介词 介词连词常光顾--an,a,the和so,and but 等连词的用法
原文句 2,3--In my view, the speech contest can benefit from you in
different ways. Firstly, it makes you look for more informations
about your favorite scientists on the Internet or in the library, and
Proof
Reading
短文改错三步走
第一步 浏览全文 掌握大意 第二步 分句阅读 逐行改错 第三步 检查核对 攻克难点
短文改错口诀 动词形，名词数， 还要注意形和副； 非谓语，细辨别， 代词格，细领悟； 介词短语需关注， 冠词连词常光顾。 句子成分多分析， 逻辑错误需关注。 习惯用法要记住。
口诀解释
that will really do good to you. 修改：将that改为which 解析：此处考查的是非限定性定语从句，从前面的逗号可以判断出， that不能引导非限定性定语从句，只能用which。
原文句8--If you change your mind, please let me know as
原文句4,5--Secondly, it is a challenge to prepare for a
speech contest. You not only have to write a good article,
and also have to perform them properly. 修改：错误一；将and改为but; 错误二：将them改为it。 解析：not only...but also为固定搭配，此处符合口诀-- 习惯用法 要记住；write 和perform是并列动词，二者的宾语都为a good article，为单数，但hem代指复数，it代指单数，故用改为it。此 处符合口诀--代词格，细领悟；
原文句6--What's more, after the contest, you can find yourself
with some newly good friends, or even a prize. 修改：将newly改为new 解析：newly意思为副词最新；new意思是新的。此处new修饰的是 frends，故应该用形容词来修饰。此处符合口诀还要注意形和副。 原文句7--I suggest you consider participating in the contest,