2017年中考英语二轮专题书面表达课件：学校教育

【真题分析】 该任务要求针对话题“说英语”发表看法。 根据题目内容可知在写作之前先要确定角 色，再从该角色的立场发表看法。读懂图 中所给出的文字信息是完成该写作任务的 重要前提。图中的两句话就是两个中心论 点，在确定角色后，围绕相应的论点展开 论述即可。论述过程中可以讲述语言学习 经历或谈论语言学习策略。
【标准范文】
A I am Miss Wang. Your English is poor because you don't speak English! Many students find it difficult to speak English and they often keep quiet in English classes. Actually, they are afraid of making mistakes in front of others. Everyone makes mistakes.
【参考范文】 Nowadays, many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study. Let's take XXX for an example. Last weekend, he spent so much time playing computer games that he forgot to do his homework. As a result, he was punished for not finishing his homework. XXX felt very bad.
To tell you the truth, I don't believe in myself. The less I speak, the worse my English is. When my English improves, I will enjoy speaking it.
【高分突破】(因篇幅受限，这里仅以Miss Wang的观点为例进行内容展示。) I am Miss Wang. Your English is poor because you don't speak English! English, like any other language, is a tool of communication — the more you speak it, the better your English will become. So you should try to speak it as much as possible.
B I am Li Hua. I don is poor. I find it hard to speak English. I am a little shy and afraid of making mistakes. I always feel nervous when I stand up to speak English in class. I'm afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English.
【素材积累】 1. 词汇 表达观点： in my opinion, from my point of view, as far as I am concerned
2. 句子 The major reasons are as follows. It's your duty to follow the school rules. Only in this way, can they become interested in study. I strongly believe that joining the interest group can help one with his subject. Many people argue that it's important for kids to review what they learn during the school day.
If you don't make any mistakes, you won't be able to make progress. It is the same with any other subject. Remember that your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you. If you spend more time speaking English, I'm sure your English will become better and better.
【写作任务】 现在很多学生不能好好管理时间以致影响 了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看 法。内容包括： 1. 你或同学一次未能按时完成学习任务的 经历(任务内容、拖延的原因及后果)； 2. 对如何管理好时间提出两点建议。
作文要求： 1. 不能抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真 实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头 已经给出，不计入总词数。 Nowadays, many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study. ___________________________________ (2016 广东)
And don't be shy or afraid of making mistakes. You need to know that everyone makes mistakes and making mistakes is a natural part of learning. As far as I am concerned, the most important thing is that you must believe in yourself and never give up! Always remember: practice makes perfect!
【话题解读】 关于学校教育方面的话题有很多，如学校 的规章制度、家庭作业、读书的意义、学 习方法、德育教育等。此类写作任务通常 要求针对这些话题阐述观点。在表达观点 时切记分析要具体、透彻，论证要充分、 有力，忌空洞无物。同时还应考虑具体的 写作要求，不能遗漏要点。
【真题回放】 关于“说英语”问题，李华和他的英语老 师Miss Wang持不同的观点。请你仔细阅 读下图中的对话内容，从中选择一个角色， 按照所给要求写一篇短文。
If you don't know how to manage your time, here are two suggestions for you. First, find a piece of paper and write down important things you must do on the paper. Second, ask your parents for help. You can ask them to remind you to do important things.
【高分揭秘】 1. 整篇习作紧紧围绕观点Your English is poor because you don't speak English 展开，从英语的交际特点、犯错的意义 以及个人应持有的态度三个方面进行 了阐述。结构清楚，层次清晰，逻辑性 强。
2. 在阐述观点时，a tool of communication, a natural part of learning, as far as I am concerned等表达的使用，显示出作 者平时的语言积累非常到位，令人印 象深刻。 3. 习作结尾处的谚语practice makes perfect是习作的点睛之笔，与作者要表 达的观点非常契合。
要求： (1)用“Li Hua”或“Miss Wang”补全短文 首句； (2)写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由； (3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地 名； (4)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词 数)。 参考词汇：shy; make a mistake; believe in
I am ________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ (2016 河北)