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英语书面表达写作技巧
写作第三步

加(add)
加首尾，使结构完整。 These days, more and more students become volunteers. Here is the result of the survey 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结 about_________________________________ what volunteer work 300 students usually ______________________________________ do 尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。 in their free time.
Hale Waihona Puke Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today.
英语书面表达写作技巧
写作第五步：
美(beautify)
修改词句，美化文章。 在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加 语句，展示自己的语言功底。
妙用词汇
尤其妙用高级词汇
Which is better?
我希望你能帮助我。
(the body) ______________! Come and become a Don’t put it off volunteer today. （the ending）
英语书面表达写作技巧
写作第四步： 连(connect)
恰当运用关联 词句，使 得文章层次清晰，各个 部分衔接自然。
Let’s try
Though\Although _____________ I am tired, I keep 妙用关联词 on working till midnight. He didn’t go to movies, he went to instead the concert ______. We like doing kinds of sports like/including _____ swimming, running and hiking. First _____, he stood up. Then he got out. Next he went back. _____, Finally\At last ____________, he smiled.
Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today.
写作第五步 美(beautify)
These days, more and more students become volunteers. They take part in________________________.Here is all kinds of volunteer work the result of the survey about what volunteer work 300 students usually do in their free time. According to it, a lot of students choose to help clean up the City Parks to make our city more beautiful. And to do chores for some students visit Old People’s Home_______________ _________.Also helping sick children in the hospital the old makes some students feel helpful ______________________________.However, a few feel like teaching students ________________in the village school. As for me, I would like to visit Old People’s Home. I not only do some cleaning, but also sing and will__________________________________________ dance so that the old people will feel less lonely. _________________________________
调查报告
Help clean up the City Parks
Teach in the village school
Help sick children in the hospital Visit Old People’s Home
发出倡议
你的选择
写作第二步 列(list) 用简单的句子列出文章要点。
A I hope you can help me. = forward to your help. B I’m looking ______ ________
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early. = as early as they could. B They arrived___ ___ ___
Teach in the village school
Help sick children in the hospital Visit Old People’s Home
英语书面表达写作技巧 写作第一步
审(analyse)
认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。
当前，越来越多的人们在业 余时间加入了志愿者服务行列， 且形式丰富多样。右图是我们对 某所中学300名学生参加志愿者 服务情况的调查结果。请根据此 图用英语写一篇调查报告。同时 告诉我们你会参加那种形式的志 愿者服务并提倡大家都加入志愿 者服务行列。
妙用例子 （多用于“the body”）
加例子
青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。
We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example,_______________ we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using _______________________________ napkins, plant more trees and save water. _______________________________
加例子
在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。
I often help my parents do housework, washing dishes, folding the such as_________________________ clothes, taking out the trash and so on. ______________________________
Writing Skills
Liu Jiali
Tianzhuang Middle School
Ya’an Earthquake
volunteers
Plenty of soldiers, doctors and workers help save people in danger.
Are you a volunteer? If you had a chance to be a volunteer, what kind of volunteer work would you do? What do you think of being a volunteer?
Help clean up the City Parks 调查报告 Teach in the village school 你的选择 Help sick children in the hospital 发出倡议 Visit Old People’s Home A lot of students____________________________. help clean up the City Parks Many students___________________________. Some visit Old People’s Home students________________________________. A few help sick children in the hospital students__________________________. （调查报告） teach in the village school I would like to___________________. （你的选择） visit Old People’s Home Come and become _________________today! a volunteer （发出倡议）
Let’s try!
____, as students, we’re supposed to try our best to study hard.
我们可以用 all in all, in short, in a word,
generally speaking 来表示结论。
连(connect)
Many students are volunteers. Here is the result of the survey about what volunteer work 300 students usually do in their free time. According to it, a lot of students help clean up the City Parks. And many students visit Old People’s Home. Also some students help sick children in the hospital. However, a few students teach in the village school. As for me, I would like to visit Old People’s Home.