初中英语作文写作完整ppt课件

tall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a T-shirt
Favorite food
hamburgers，fried chicken
Favorite classes
science, art, PE
Things he likes
little animals
Things he likes to do
Name
Ma Xiaotiao
Age
15
Look
tall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a T-shirt
Favorite food
hamburgers，fried chicken
Favorite classes
science, art, PE
Things he likes
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9. Pair-correction:
Exchange your composition with your partner and correct the mistakes with your red pen.
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Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述 你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。
thin
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What does he look like?
long hair
short hair
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2. Pair-work:
A: What does xxx look like?
B: He/ She is …
A: What is his / her character?
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10. 例文:
Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 years old. He is tall and thin. He has black hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He likes little animals. He often plays with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I like him very much.
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5)检查纠错（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、 习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写 及标点符号）
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7. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描 述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。
Name
Ma Xiaotiao
Age
15
Look
little animals
Things he likes to do
play with his good friends, help others
Character (性格)
开头：
kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的)
Ma Xiaotiao is my pen 完整最新ppt pal. He…
play with his good friends, help others
Character (性格)
开头：
kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的)
Ma Xiaotiao is my pen 完整最新ppt pal. He…
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8. Let’s share some compositions.
开头：
kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的)
Ma Xiaotiao is my pen 完整最新ppt pal. He…
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6. 写作步骤
1)审题（定体裁、人称、格式、时态） 2)列纲（用单词、短语列出内容要点） 3)连句（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子） 4)修饰句子 （适当运用承上启下的过渡词,使
XX 中 XXX
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本节课的学习任务:
写一篇描述人的外貌 (look)、 性格（characters）、爱好 （hobbies）的文章
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1. What does he / she look like?
short
tall
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What does he look like?
hamburgers，fried chicken
Favorite classes
science, art, PE
Things he likes
little animals
Things he likes to do
play with his good friends, help others
Character (性格)
描述穿着的短语：wear a T-shirt, wear a pair of glasses
描述性格的单词：lazy, quiet, friendly, shy, kind-hearted 善良的, polite 有礼貌的，strict 严 厉的, out-going 外向的
描述爱好的短语：like reading, like to help
B: He / She is…
A: What does he/ she like?
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3. Word collection:
描述外貌的单词： short , tall, thin ，of medium height ，strong, good-looking, nice, slim 苗条
others, like eating, like playing basketball
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4. Write something about this boy.
(3-5句话)
提示词： tall，thin，black hair; wear shorts and a T-shirt; polite(有礼貌的)，happy
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5. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描 述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。
Name
Ma Xiaotiao
Age
15
Look
tall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a T-shirt
Favorite food