河北省高邑县高考英语二轮复习书面表达选编(5)

河北高邑县2016高考英语二轮书面表达选编（5）
（2014江苏卷）
阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

When we read newspapers, we often come across such English words as "AIDS" and "PK." When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like "NBA" or "PM2.5." When we speak, we automatically use words like "OUT" or "Bye-bye." English words and expressions like these are getting popular. They have already become part of our daily language. And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.
The inclusion has started a heated discussion. A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words, which, they think, goes against Chinese language policies. They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However, others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language. They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇；
（2）用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

【写作要求】
1.可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据；
2.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;
3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4.不必写标题。

【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【考点】考察任务型写作
【写作指导】
本文属于任务型写作，要求简单描述短文内容并就短文内容发表个人的观点。

仍然属于议论文的范围。

所以使用一般现在时和第三人称。

本文讨论的话题是：很多英语单词进入中文词典。

要求针对这个现象发表个人观点。

要点：1.简述短文：很多英语单词进入中文词典。

；2.发表观点：支持者：随着学习英语的人越来越多，人们也能理解这些词的意思，不影响阅读。

而且这是文化融合的一种表现。

反对者：这是一种文化污染，会影响这些词的纯真的发音等，同时对于那些英语不好的人还是一种偏见等；
本文要特别注意思想的辩证性，看待问题要一分为二，不能绝对化。

写作时要注意尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【一句多译】
随着学习英语的人越来越多，在汉语的上下文里理解英语并不是很困难。

（1）As the nu mber o f English learners is on the rise, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.
（2）With the n umber of English learners on the rise, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.
【参考范文】
支持：
Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.
Generally, I a m in f avour of the inclusion. As the number of English learners is on the rise, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. Besides, it is, on some occasions, more convenient to use English words. Most people nowadays use "IT" instead of its translation " xinxi jishu. " In our global village, we can see that it's not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages. In English, there are many words borrowed from Latin, French, or even Chinese. In fact. Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages, say, "ganhu" or "minzhu" from Japanese.
So, it's safe to co nclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.
反对：
With English wor ds get ting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: "For" and "Against."
I tend to take the " Against" side for two reasons. Firstly, this inclusion has actaally polluted ou r motl ier tongue. Sooner or later, many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones. And, rules don't tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as "wifi" and "Out" in a Chinese way! Secondly, such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English. Just for one illustration, while college students take " Bye-bye" for granted when parting from each other, it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to "zaijian."
In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.
2016书面表达训练
假设你是李华，你所在的学校最近浪费现象严重，比如长流水、长明灯等。

为此学校倡导建设“节约型校园”。

请以“How to build an economized campus”为题写一篇英语作文，要点如下：
∙认识到节约资源的重要性；
∙从“我”做起节约资源，及时关灯、随手关水龙头等；
∙号召师生共建节约型校园。

参考词汇：水龙头 tap
注意：1. 字数在100字左右；
2. 可适当增减细节，使行文连贯；开头已写好，不计入总字数；
3.不能使用真实姓名与学校；
How to build an economized campus
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How to build an economized campus
Nowadays, waste on campus has become an increasingly serious problem. We can often see many students leave the water running and some let the lights on for a long time , which causes a serious waste of resources.
Therefore, it’s high time that we took some measures to dea l with the problem. Firstly, we should realize that natural resources are limited. Many parts of our country are suffering from drought and power lack. Besides, everyone has the responsibility to preserve natural resources.
In addition, We should save every piece of paper, every drop of water and turn off the lights when leaving the room. Only through these can we hope to build an economized campus.
The small efforts by a single individual may make a huge difference. Let us work together to build an economized campus!
【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】
读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Have you been asked for money by some beggars who have disabilities while you’re enjoying shopping? Do you have any pity for that kind of people or just feel afraid? For whatever reasons，the number of disabled beggars bumming(乞讨) along the street has increased rapidly.
Why are there so many disabled people begging in the street? The reasons are so various that we don’t need to understand.But at least，we know that they do not lead an easy life.So we should help them in some ways.
The treatment for disabled people should go like this: First，accept them.Don’t be
afraid of looking at the terrible shape of disabled.Try to treat them equally.Because they are a part of the society，and we can’t abandon them.The second is to help them as much as we could.If you can be a volunteer and do some work for the disabled people，that would be very nice.That does good not only to disabled people but also to yourself，because you will feel good after your kind action.
So give an air of warmth to disabled people，and the world would be much better. 写作内容
1．以约30词概括短文内容要点。

2．以约120词就“How to Care for the Disabled” 这一话题发表你的看法，并包含如下要点：
(1)对待残疾人的正确态度；
(2)举例说明我们应该如何帮助残疾人；
(3)残疾人也应该享受平等的权利。

写作要求
1．可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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读写任务【参考范文】
Though the passage doesn’t uncover the reason for disabled beggars increasing，it points out how to treat the disabled—not only should we accept them，but help and show warmth to them，making the world much better.
As is well known to us，many disabled people struggle to keep alive in our country.So not only should we hold a right attitude towards them，but also do them a favor practically.But how to help?
First，we able­bodied people must understand，accept and respect them.Don’t avoid meeting them because of being afraid of their ugly，terrible outer appearance. Second，we can make their daily life much easier and more convenient by doing many small things such as opening the doors，showing them the way，leading them across the street，picking up something for them and giving our seats to them in public places and in a word we should help them as much as we can.
In short，if all of us offer our love and show warmth to them heart and soul，they can also live as rich and full a life as we do.Our world is bound to become more beautiful and harmonious.
2016书面表达训练
假如你是李华。

你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。

3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。

请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件：
1．礼物选择；2.你的理由；3.其它和解建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.
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Best wishes，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by
bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally­friendly means of transport. It's convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】
基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
《广州日报》就中学生阅读问题在广州市6所中学的653位学生中进行了一次调查，以下是调查数据：
写作内容
根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：
1．调查组织者、调查问题以及调查对象；
2．三种不同的比例及其各自的态度；
3．在阅读内容上，休闲类和娱乐类杂志受到热捧。

写作要求
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

评分标准
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语篇连贯。

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基础写作【参考范文】
Recently 653 students from six middle schools in Guangzhou took part in a survey organised by Guangzhou Daily about students’ reading problems.According to the survey,74.5% of the students agree to read after class，saying that out­of­class reading can never be replaced by other activities.7.6% of the students also think it’s a good idea to read after class and insist on doing so for at least one hour every day after class.However,77.8% of the students can’t have time to read after class because of too much homework though they would love to.Besides，leisure and pleasure magazines are really popular among all the reading contents.。