(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)

（英语）九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含
答案)
一、英语书面表达
1．书面表达
我的英语学习
初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，
要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥
3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数80－100。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do
more reading，in addition，in a word等。

而感叹句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的
亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。

请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。

内容包括：
1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？
2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？
3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？
要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。

开头已给出，不计入总词数。

As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,
【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.
Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。

此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion,
try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面表达
初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。

请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

要求：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：
2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.
At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，
spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。

而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．书面表达
根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．
【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如
take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。

而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

5．写作
81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参加各种户外活动。

为了倡导中学生接近大自然，某中学生英文报举办了一次征文活动，请你根据以下问题，用英语写一篇短文参加征文。

提示：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）
2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples）
3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.
【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other
members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。

根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。

文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。

6．书面表达
以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。

请用英语写一篇约100词的短文。

要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。

2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。

【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,
“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.
Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.
【解析】
这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。

因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。

通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。

写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。

还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。

在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。

语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。

作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。

整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。

文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。

语法
规范、准确。

短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。

7．2019年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。

时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写
一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

8．为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网希望对杭州茶文化进行宣传。

请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇介绍，词数80左右。

Longjing Tea
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【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea. Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料类介绍型作文，所以我们必须要结合所给材料再适当补充内容。

时态以一般现在时为主。

亮点词汇短语：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea绿茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth对…严格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不仅．．．而且．．．。

亮点句型：
It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龙井茶对人们保持健康有好处。

It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （对某人来说）做某事是怎样的。

Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龙井是我国著名的茶叶，它不仅与龙井的气候、土壤环境有关，而且与龙井的生产工艺有关。

Which引导的限定性定语从句。

Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龙井茶出产的胜地。

Where引导的定语从句。

9．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。

假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。

要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。

3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Hello everyone,
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d l ike to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.
My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。

要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。

要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。

短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。

写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。

文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。

【考点定位】考查提纲类作文。

10．写作
某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:
1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do?
4. Why did it make him/her happy?
5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。

2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。

【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.
In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。

写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。

短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。

在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。