2022届高考英语二轮专题应用文写作之道歉信课件

2. 道歉信常用表达
• Ⅲ.尾段常用语 • Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. • Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my
situation. • I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position
gratitude for your help in my English study and ask Li Ming to
hand it to you.
Safe journey!
Yours,
Li hua
6. 优秀习作：
评价：本篇书信 书写较好，词汇 丰富，表达流畅， 对副词，定语从 句，非谓语，等 的正确运用，为 作文增添了不少 亮点。
3. 段落分析4
思考:
如何将简单的事件，用较好的语言写成一段话？
1. 用合适的连词，使句子过度流畅。 2. 使用从句和非谓语动词，使句子不单一乏味。
4. 反思与建议
怎样才是一篇好的文章？
1. 没有低级错误，语法错误。
词性&时态
2. 要点完整，有效拓展，但不重复表达。
3. 句式多变，词汇丰富。 4. 行文连贯，连接词使用合理。 5. 语言得体，要有读者意识。 6. 用词准确！
Step 1表示歉意，简单交代对何事进行道歉 Step 2具体说明解释事情发生的原因，消除误会或矛盾。( 提出补救办法) Step 3再次表示遗憾和歉意，(表明愿意补救的愿望)，提出 建议或安排。
Tips: 写道歉信的语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实，不要献出丝 毫的虚情假意。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增 进彼此的感情。
改为： Last Sunday, due to my carelessness, I hurt my
ankle when dancing. Though I was hurriedly sent to the doctor, I was told that it would take several weeks to recover. I am indeed very sorry to disappoint you as we’ve been good friends during all these days when you stayed in China.
…… 请大家在思考理由的时候，注意：
第一、三观正；第二、合情理。
3. 段落分析4
理由如何写，才不会记录过多的细节，导致啰嗦？ 例如：腿受伤。 1. 起因
I was injured yesterday while dancing. 2. 经过
I went to the hospital and doctor said I couldn’t move for at least a month. 3. 结果
可供借鉴的句型：
…for failing to see you of
6. 优秀习作：
评价：本篇书 信书写较好， 句型丰富，内 容合理，让读 者有温馨共情 感，歉意表达 很成功
1. 阅读并思考
1. 阅读并思考
1. 阅读并思考
1. 阅读并思考
2. 道歉信常用表达
• Ⅰ.首段常用语
• I am writing this letter to express my regret… • I am writing to apologize /say sorry for (my failing to)… • I would like to give you my apology for/ to express my deepest apology for not being able to… • I am very/terribly sorry to say that / for what I said/did, but believe I had no intention to… • I must apologize about (not) doing sth…
高三应用文写作
-- 道歉信
假定你是李华，你的美国留学朋友Mark即将回国，但你 临时有事，无法去机场为他送行。请给他写封电子邮件 ，内容包括：
1. 表示歉意 2. 说明理由 3. 你的祝愿 注意：写作词数80左右
道歉信的写作
我们在工作或生活中，有时难免会犯一些错误，写封致 歉信就显得很有必要。道歉信通常包括以下内容：
I couldn’t go to see you off.
例如： I was injured while dancing. I went to the
hospital and doctor said I couldn’t move for at least a month. I couldn’t go to see you off.
needs to be in hospital for three days. I have to take care of
her because my parents were fully occupied with their work.
By the way, I have chosen a small gift to express my
2. 道歉信常用表达
• II. 中段首段常用语 • I am sorry that I will not be able to … due to… • I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what
happened. • I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience. • We assure you that such a matter will never happen again. • In order to avoid… happening again, I have … • Would you mind if I change the appointment time? • Would it be convenient for you…?
and accept my apologies.
3. 段落分析3 什么样的理由才合情合理？
注意题中的“临时有事”
1. 打球，腿部受伤，最近无法走动。 2. 家人生病住院，需要照顾。 3. 父母出差，需要照顾弟弟妹妹。 4. 亲戚出国，要去送机。（亲戚对自己非常重要） 5. 同学面临考试，需要你的帮助。 6. 某次重要的考试或者活动意外提前了，需要做准备。
7. 书写漂亮~ Perfect！
5. 参考范文：
பைடு நூலகம்
Dear Mark,
I'm terribly sorry to tell you that I’ll be unable to see you
off at the airport tomorrow afternoon.
My younger sister suddenly fell ill this morning and she