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Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.When people improve their living level, rest is more and more important to us, for example, going to museum, going to concert, and going to swim with friends. The government should give money to the public movement, but other people think the government should provide these money to museums and music center, but not to the rest things. I do not agree with this opinion.With the improvement of living quality of modern people, leisure activities become more and more important for them, such as go to the museum, concert, or go to swim with friends and so on. There is no doubt that government should give subsidies to support those public activities, but some people argue that it’s more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational facilities. I disagree with this opinion.improve our relation’s web. Join LinkedIn and Plaxo, and ask for advices from current and past partners. We should use Twitter to update your project, and connect with other partners. We must find the local internet groups, and join in them.Ramp up your networking. Join LinkedIn and Plaxo, and ask for recommendations from current and past coworkers. Use Twitter to update the world on your current projects as well as network with other like-minded individuals. Look for local networking groups, and start attending them.Prepare for success. You should register a website by your name.Then you can build a very impressive and professional e-mail. You can encourage other people to look at your website. Take a photo. This will prepare for your web, and advertisement, and anything can raise your professional image. You may order the name card with your name, website and telephone number on it. If you do not want to receive the telephone from other companys, you can use the skype in’s number, and it is 60 dollar/year.Prepare for success. Consider registering a web site in your name. You can then create a professional-sounding email address that will encourage people to take a journey of your web site. Get a professional photograph taken. This is for your web site, your advertising, or anything else that you will be doing to promote your image as a serious professional. Order your own business cards in your name with your web site and business number. If you don’t want your cell phone ringing with business calls at work, consider a Skype In number, which will cost you just $60 a year.If you want to make a achievement, there are two parts you have to do: You must have time to make a dream, and you must make a movement. You should have time to make a visualization every day. You must think about it and make a note of them. You should make a rule that you should make some time every day to make your dream real. If you are an artist, you should make an artistic production. If you are a writer, you should write something. If you do not do any thing, the dream will never come ture.There are two halves to achieving a new reality: You must have time to dream, and you must take action. Give yourself time for creative visualization daily. Note ideas that come, and keep a record of these. Make a rule that you spend X amount of time daily taking action on your dreams. Artists produce artwork. Authors write. If you are not taking action, you will not achieve your dream.You should find another job. This is the key when you waiting in your position. When you get a positive life out of your job, it is easier to bear your job. Good life is good for keeping the ability of insight.Get a life outside of work. This is vital to biding your time in a job you hate. When you have an active social life outside of the office, it becomes so much easier to tolerate mundane or stressful work. A balanced life helps to keep things in perspective.[dialogues of Inception]No, you taught me to navigate people’s minds but after what happened.That’s one of the ways that we extract information from a subject.I do hope you understand the gravity of that request.No, no, no. Don’t show me specifics.Subconscious is motivated by emotion, right? Not reason.Well he was a very inspiring figure.But, if we do not connect with the world，humor is not useful. Roommates should share their experiences, and these will make their relationship closer. In this condition, humor is a very important quality. for example, a joke may break the silence, and make everyone very happy. Nevertheless, it would not work either if everybody just keep to themselves without communicating. It is also essential for roommates to share their experiences with one another and thus get close in their relationship. In this case, a good sense of humor can be a such a valuable quality as a single joke may break the silence and open up a nice conversation.First, recreational facilities are more important than art museums and music performance center. We believe art museums and music performance center values a lot. Confucius, greatest Chinese philosopher, said art may give more pleasure. Watching art in the art museums, and Listening the music in the music performance center can improve our spirit world. But it does not mean recreational facilities is less improtant than art museums and music performance center.Firstly, art museums and music performance center is no more important than(正话反说) recreational facilities. Admittedly, art museums and music performance is of great importance. Confucius, greatest Chinese philosopher, commented, “Art helps a person gets a better life.” To go to art museums to appreciate those art works and to go the music performance center to listen to symphony help people get improvement in mental life. But it does not mean that recreational facilities take the second place.However, There are many factors contributed to success, such as time, work hard, and luck. This list could be very long. Just as a book writed by by Bryan Tracy says that the success involves 21 pieces. If one want to make success, no matter what time it is, they must try their best at the right time, at the right position, but also with a little luck. If a person live in this society, he could not succeed without trying one’s best.However, success depends on many conditions, such as time, hard work and luck. The list goes on and on. As one of the books by Bryan Tracy says, the success consists of 21 secrets. No matter what era one is in, one has to tries one’s best to work at right time at right place with a little luck in order to succeed. If one lives today but does take action,one will end up no where(impossibly at all) certainly.Firstly, Swimming in the swimming pool and playing football on the playgrounds may give people healthy body. To be healthy, enjoying the art may offer the mental pleasure. Secondly, not every one like the art, but everybody need the exercising. The people who are not favorable of the art barely enter the art museums or music performance center. However, if government builds recreational facilities, they may give the average people a place to take exercise.Firstly, people need sturdy bodies by doing exercise, including swimming in the swimming pool and playing football on the playgrounds. To be healthy, people then can pursuit the enjoyment from the mental to appreciate art. Secondly, not all people enjoy art in fact, but all people need to do exercises. For those people who do not like art at all, they would seldom go to the art museums or music performance center. But if government builds recreational facilities, it will benefit all citizens by providing places to exercise.Furthermore, Students think that modern technology makes the information and real knowledge very easy to learn. The only thing that you need is hitting the mouse or watching videos. But, in fact, this is just the first step of learning useful information and making the effective learning. Because if you want to learn a knowledge, you should pay attention on the full concentration, but also thinking it through, but we can not find any of these in the popular e-learning. Furthermore, modern technology gives students an illusion that information and real knowledge is easy to learn – just by clicking mouse or watching videos. But in fact this forms only the first step towards useful information and effective learning, as learning of any kind requires full concentration and interactive thinking, which are almost absent in the process of popular e-learning experience.。

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 4

1. 托福独立写作—结尾段 *“具象拆分”角角度的归纳： Owing to the limitation of room, I am unable to give more examples, but I believe that the cases of … and….have already proven the validity of my point of view. *例题：与过去相比比，现在的广广告变得不诚实了 *结尾：To put it in a nutshell, in today’s world, advertisements are indeed less honest than they were in the past. Owing to the limitation of room, I am unable to give more examples, but I believe that the cases of restaurant and training school have already proven the validity of my point of view.
1. 托福独立写作—让步段（堵漏） [例1] 学生生是否应该兼职？ *观点：Students should take part-‐time jobs. *主题句1：Students can make some pocket money to reduce their parents’ Pinancial burden. *主题句2：Some working experience will be accumulated, which is benePicial for their future career. *让步段结构：打工工—学业下降—只要合理安排时间

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 1

*人人批&机器批？
1. 托福独立写作--评分标准
1）有效地针对话题完成任务（跑题：没看懂题目；缺少因果关系；没注意限定）；!
例1：同不同意：the government should offer the Internet access to the public free of charge.
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托福强化写作! （1）! !
@谢侃老老师!
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课程进度
课次 1! 2! 3! 4! 5-6!
教学目标独立写作评分标准（投其所好）、审题（制定策略）
如何写开头段、中间段总论如何写中间段（论点+论证+论据）如何写让步段、结尾段；*范文讲解如何处理综合写作（信息解构+信息重组）
《侃哥托福范文文》怎么用用？!
*题型：应不应该+选择 *角度：利弊分析 *观点：同意家长应该帮孩子做作业（一一种诡异的价值观，注意：托福评分无无所谓观点是否奇葩，只在乎语言言。因为他们认为“任何一一种观点都值得尊重”。逻辑上只要说得通就好了。）! a) 可以让作业出类拔萃，建立孩子信心； b) 可以引导孩子形成良好的学习思维。
• 25篇原创范文文! • 中文文翻译! • 素材整理（论证+例子子）! • 好词好句的整理!
1. 托福独立写作--评分标准（5分）
1. effectively addresses the writing task 有效地针对话题完成任务；
2. is well organized and well developed 结构清晰、充分展开； 3 . uses clearly appropriate details to support a thesis 使用适当的解释和例证去支持论点； 4. displays consistent facility in the use of language 体现出连贯性； 5. demonstrates syntactic variety and appropriate word choice, though it may have occasional errors 句式丰富，措辞合适，允许小的错误。

无老师iBT新托福,SAT作文巨讲堂

无老师满分范例：Another reason is that modern people are more effective than those in the past. And great efficiency is one fundamental way to success. We are able to make use of many tools increasing productivity today. For instance, the computer plays an important role in our life in terms of efficiency. As I want to search material concerning the “nuclear energy”, all I have to do is to type this term on Google and a great number of sources will pop out on the screen. Given the past, I had to go to the library and bury me a couple of days looking for the information on nuclear energy without the assistance of computers. The distance is conspicuous, thus modern people with advanced technology would succeed more readily.无老师优秀翻译：另外一个原因是现代的人比之前的人效率会更高。

更好的效率是成功的一个关键因素。

我们今天可以更好地使用工具来提高我们的效率。

比如，电脑就在增加我们效率这方面上起到了很重要的作用。

toefl writing 托福写作教程

就我们所知，有些事情早已是众所周知的。有些事情我们知道自己知道。我们也知道，有些事情早已是已知的未知，这也就是说，我们现在知道了，有些事情我们其实并不知道。但也有一些事情是未知的未知—— 这些事，我们并不知道自己不知道。
文如其人

This university was founded, with the support of our country, to further the ties between our two nations.
TOEFL IBT 官方满分范文

If our friend had worn a newly-purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked us if it was a worthy buy, would we freely express our opinion that we would never seen a dress as the one she wearing and just spoiled her birthday? Inarguably, hiding the truth in some situation can be quite handy indeed.

GRE 官方满分范文

Overspecialization means narrow focus on which people can lose the larger picture. One can hope to understand the human body by only inspecting one’s own toe-nails. What we learn from a narrow focus may be internally logically coherent but may be irrelevant or fallacious within the framework of a broader perspective. Further, if we inspect only our toe-nails, we may conclude that the whole body is hard and white. Useful conclusion and thus perhaps useful inventions must come by sharing among specialists. Simply throwing out various discoveries means we have a pile of useless discoveries. It is only when one can make with them a mosaic that we can see that they may form a picture

托福作文写作范文详解telev

托福作文写作范文详解Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.1. 题目翻译：电视，报纸，杂志戒其他媒体对诸如公众人物戒名人倾注过多的关注，同意与否？2. 审题关键词：Media; Personal lives of famous people; Entertainment3. 论证分析：反: It could be said that having little or no privacy in one's personal life "comes with the territory" of being a famous personality.正: Much of the media, be it television, newspaper or magazines, is primarily motivated by sales and profits.正：A prime example of the media exploiting the personal life of public figure is that of the late Princess Dinana.范文：I think the media pays too much attention to the private lives of famous people. Television, newspaper magazines and web sites dig up all kinds of past bad actions and gossip. They say that these are true reflections of a person's character. This may be true if they occurred only a few years before, but some of these are things people did as teenagers. People in their forties are expected to explain something they did when they were fifteen, which is an impossible position, because everyone grows up and reflects on their foolish and childish actions from youth. If they killed someone, obviously that's more than a youthful mistake. Usually, though, these incidents involve experiments with drugs or being reckless in a car. They're not something that the public needs to know.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。

托福作文新题型模板及范文

托福作文新题型模板及范文英文回答：Integrated Writing Task。

Task:Read the following text and listen to the lecture. Then, write an essay in which you explain how the lecture either supports, modifies, or contradicts the text. Use specific evidence from both the text and the lecture to support your analysis.Text:The primary goal of a university education is to prepare students for the workforce.Universities should focus on teaching students theskills and knowledge they need to succeed in their careers.A liberal arts education is not as valuable as a vocational education because it does not provide students with the specific skills they need to get a job.Lecture:The primary goal of a university education is to prepare students to be critical thinkers and problem solvers.Universities should provide students with a broad education that will help them adapt to the changing needs of the workforce.A liberal arts education is valuable because it teaches students how to think critically, communicate effectively, and solve problems, which are skills that are essential for success in any career.Thesis Statement:While the text argues that the primary goal of a university education is to prepare students for the workforce and that a liberal arts education is not as valuable as a vocational education, the lecture modifies this view by emphasizing the importance of criticalthinking and problem solving and the value of a liberalarts education.Body Paragraph 1:Discuss the text's claim that the primary goal of a university education is to prepare students for the workforce.Explain how the lecture modifies this claim by arguing that the primary goal of a university education is to prepare students to be critical thinkers and problem solvers.Provide evidence from the lecture to support this claim.Body Paragraph 2:Discuss the text's claim that a liberal arts education is not as valuable as a vocational education.Explain how the lecture modifies this claim by arguing that a liberal arts education is valuable because it teaches students how to think critically, communicate effectively, and solve problems.Provide evidence from the lecture to support this claim.Conclusion:Summarize the main points of the essay.Restate the thesis statement.Sample Essay:Integrated Writing Task: Education for the Workforce orBeyond?The primary goal of a university education has long been debated, with some arguing that its purpose is solely to prepare students for the workforce, while others emphasize the importance of a broader education. In this essay, we will analyze a text that advocates for the former view and a lecture that modifies this perspective, highlighting the significance of critical thinking and problem-solving skills as well as the value of a liberal arts education.The text maintains that the primary goal of auniversity education is to equip students with the skills and knowledge necessary for immediate employment. It argues that a vocational education is more valuable than a liberal arts education because it provides students with specific job-related skills. However, the lecture challenges this view, asserting that the primary goal of a university education is to cultivate critical thinkers and problem solvers. According to the lecturer, universities should provide students with a broad education that will enablethem to adapt to the constantly evolving demands of the workforce.Furthermore, the lecture refutes the text's claim that a liberal arts education is less valuable than a vocational education. The lecturer argues that a liberal arts education teaches students how to think critically, communicate effectively, and solve problems, which are essential skills for success in any career. By engaging with diverse disciplines, students develop analytical and cognitive abilities that are highly sought after by employers.In conclusion, while the text advocates for a narrow focus on workforce preparation, the lecture offers a more nuanced perspective. The lecture emphasizes the importance of critical thinking, problem solving, and a liberal arts education, arguing that these attributes are crucial for success not only in the workforce but also in life beyond it. Therefore, we can conclude that the lecture modifies the text's position by broadening the scope of a university education's purpose and highlighting the value of aholistic approach to learning.中文回答：综合写作任务。

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 3

1. 托福独立写作—中间段总论 *意义不重合 *例题：Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. *A同学的理由 1）说真话可以建立好人际关系 2）说真话可以得到朋友的信任 3）说真话可以不用圆谎
1. 托福独立写作—中间段主题句 3）与主观点构成直接的因果关系 *主观点是果，主题句是因；【题】苹果手手机和三星手手机，哪个好？ A同学：苹果手手机好：1）well-‐honed hardware；2） user-‐friendly software B同学：苹果手手机好：1）a big fan of Steve Jobs；2） have a dislike for Korea
1. 托福独立写作—中间段说理论证 3）对比比论述【题】 Agree or disagree: it is easier to be well-‐ educated than it was in the past. *主题句1：互联网网的出现 *说理论证：Before the emergence of the Internet, traditional classroom was where students received education, yet the scarcity of educational resources deprived many people of the opportunity to be well educated. Thanks to updated information technology, everyone can enjoy high-‐quality education equally in front of a computer with Internet access.

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 5

1. 托福独立写作—综合写作（解构） *如何深度解构听力力材料 1）听力力开头段：反驳阅读观点 *听力力开头举例：（1）Many scientists have problems with the arguments you read in the passage. They don’t think those arguments prove that dinosaurs were endotherms. （2）Unfortunately none of the arguments about what the Chaco great houses were used for is convincing.
1. 托福独立写作—综合写作（解构） *如何深度结构阅读材料 2）阅读中间段：主题句1+说理论证2 *开头中间段例1： Paradoxically, “vast working experiences”, which were believed to be the precious asset of old workers, were turned against them. This is because after many decades of working on the same position and dealing with similar situations, employees in their Cifties feel bored of going to ofCices every day. Therefore, retiring early seems to be a luring remedy for exhausted old workers. à 怎么速记？记完整因果链！
1. 托福独立写作—综合写作（解构）

托福iBT作文范文（14）

If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specificreasons and details.Students graduating from colleges today are not fully prepared to deal with the "real world." It is my belief that college students need to be taught more skills and information to enable them to meet the challenges that face everyone in daily life. The areas in which student need training are playing the credit game, planning their personal financial strategy, and consumer awareness.Learning how to obtain and use credit is probably the most valuable knowledge a young person can have. Credit is a dangerous tool that can be of tremendous help if it is handled with caution. Having credit can enable people to obtain material necessities before they have the money to purchase them outright. But unfortunately, many, many young people get carried away with their handy plastic credit cards and awake one day to find they are in serious financial debt. Learning how to use credit properly can be a very difficult and painful lesson indeed.Of equal importance is learning how to plan a personal budget. People have to know how to control money, otherwise, it can control them. Students should leave college knowing how to allocate their money for living expenses, insurance, savings, and so forth in order to avoid the "Oh, no! I'm flat broke and I don't get paid again for two weeks!" anxiety syndrome.Along with learning about credit and personal financial planning, graduating college students should be trained as consumers. The consumer market today is flooded with a variety of products and services of varying quality and prices. A young person entering the "real world" is suddenly faced with difficultdecisions about which product to buy or whose services to engage. He is usually unaware of such things as return policies, guarantees, or repair procedures, information of this sort is vital knowledge to everyday living.For a newly graduated college student, the "real world" can be a scary place to be when he or she is faced with such issues as handling credit, planning a budget, or knowing what to look for, when making a purchase and whom to purchase it from. Entering this "real world" could be made less painful if persons were educated in dealing with these areas of daily life. What better place to accomplish this than in college?[380 Words]。

如何有效提升TOEFL-IBT Writing写作语言表达

各位TOEFL-IBT综合版的版友们，大家好，我是Gter-TOEFL-ibt综合版的版主：Saavedro。在这里我想谈谈关于如何在相对短的时间内最大最有效的提升自己的TOEFL Writing Section写作语言屈驾和运用的能力。鉴于最近很多版友们（包括GRE版和TOEFL版）都在问这个问题，可见这个问题的关注度越来越高，很多人一直苦于找不到好的方法而处于事倍功半的囧境，苦苦练习了2个月才发现自己的写作语言能力还是没有什么本质性的进步。最后考试的时候，或自己准备模板生搬硬套，或是考前强行背诵以图当场复制等等，虽然洋洋洒洒的写了不少字，但殊不知正是因为自己的对考试的认识和其练习方法不当，最后才得到了一个不尽人意的分数。我相信收到IBT成绩单的同学都可以清楚的看到ETS对于各个分数段的评价和解释，你会发现低分作文的评语很明显的强调了：语言上错误很多，包括用词的不精确，语法的错误，句子的语病等等。也就是说低分同学的文章先不说思路和构架如何如何的有问题，光是语言的缺陷就已经足够把这篇文章打入到低分群体中了。
(2)Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured.
(3)May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning.
词汇部分：
先来看看ETS官方评语针对低分作文语言方面缺陷的说明吧：weak control of sentence structures and language usage, with errors that often result in vagueness or lack of clarity. 由此可见低分作文一个很重要的flaw就是由于遣词造句能力不佳直接导致语言上的失误，评分人根本无法理解作者写作的本意，严重影响了文章语言表达的clarity.

托福写作详解

托福写作详解托福写作是托福考试中的第一个部分，涵盖了综合写作和独立写作两个部分。

在综合写作中，考生需要听一篇2-3分钟的录音，并阅读一篇相关的短文，然后在20分钟的时间内写一篇150-225字的综合写作。

在独立写作中，考生需要在30分钟内就一个给定的话题写一篇300字左右的独立写作。

对于托福写作，以下是一些详细的建议和技巧：1.掌握写作结构：在写作中，一个清晰的结构可以帮助你更好的组织你的思路，同时也使得读者更容易理解你的观点。

在综合写作中，要遵循以下结构：介绍文章和录音的主题和主旨；列出文章和录音的相似点和不同点；表达你自己的观点并阐述你的理由。

在独立写作中，一个标准的五段式结构是最好的选择：介绍你的观点；列出3个支撑观点的理由；具体解释每个理由；列出反面观点并驳斥它；总结你的观点和内容。

2.抓住关键信息：在听或阅读给定的文章录音时，要抓住关键的信息。

划分出每个段落的主题句并做好笔记是一个非常好的习惯。

同时，在做笔记时，需要掌握一些基本的写作技巧：要使用简洁的词汇和短语；要使用正确的语法和拼写；要努力运用自己的创造性思维和逻辑推理。

3.确保文篇流畅：在写作时，要确保文思流畅并保持连贯。

使用恰当的过渡词和短语来连接不同段落和思想非常关键。

同时，要注意使用正确的语法和拼写，这将使你的文章更加可读。

4.注意时间：在进行托福写作时，需要注意时间。

综合写作给你20分钟，其中大约需要花费5-6分钟来听力并做笔记，而独立写作给你30分钟，其中大约需要花费5分钟来构思和制定计划。

所以在进行写作时，需要特别关注时间。

5.适当使用范例：在写作中，使用范例是一种非常好的方法来支持自己的观点。

使用范例可以使你的文章更加深入，更加有说服力。

在综合写作中，需要合理地使用听力和阅读材料中的范例来支持你自己的观点。

在独立写作中，许多考生在例子方面花费过多的时间，因此需要合理分配时间，并避免滥用范例。

6.避免常见错误：及时发现和避免常见的语法、拼写和表达错误是非常重要的。

新东方网络课堂雅思写作task2完整笔记(万能议论写作,基本上包括了老师说的绝大部分内容,听写极其不易)

雅思写作(留学类)——Task 2新东方网络课堂主讲人：张驰新第一节：文章题型判断Task2是考试的重头戏，首先来看审题的过程：浏览文章出题的最后一句话（写作指令句），一个有经验的考生就会这样做，现在现行的考题一共有四种题型：一，discursive （50%）讨论性题型凡是以下五种，都被认为是discursive，前三种回答没有任何限制1, T o what extent do you agree (or disagree)2, How far do you agree (or disagree)3, What`s your opinion towards the statement?4, Discuss both opinions/statements (and give your own one)5, Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?discursive的四种写法：,1，单边同意一个观点2，单边反驳一个观点3，两个观点一起论述，支持观点可以多写一点（有倾向性）4，同时论证两个观点，表示中立（无倾向性）总体来说是两种大的写法，单边写和双边写，单边写就是同意不同意，双边写就是七三开和五五开。

五种类型的后两种就必须使用双边写。

二，agree or disagree（只能单边写）三，PRR（Problem + Reason + Recommendation）why + what 25%给你一个问题，你提出原因和解决方案，这种文法类似why+what，考生在写作过程中一定要注意比例，原因和建议的比例控制在6:4。

Reason : Recorn = 6:4，如果原因很多，建议很少甚至没有那是不可能高于5分的。

这个题型在近几年开始重要记起来，占据25%。

四，A&D（双边写，五五开，保持中立的写法）A: advantageB: disadvantage这样的文法是直接问好坏处，只要把好坏处加在一起，各写50%就到位了，是保持中立的一种写法，本身比较极限，没有自由，最近已经没落了下来，07年也只考了两次。

新托福考试专项进阶-中级写作-概述说明以及解释

新托福考试专项进阶-中级写作-概述说明以及解释1.引言1.1 概述在"新托福考试专项进阶-中级写作"这篇文章中，我们将探讨新托福考试中级写作的相关内容。

新托福考试是目前全球范围内广为接受和认可的英语水平考试，其中写作部分是考生们需要迈过的一道重要关卡。

在本文的正文部分，我们将重点介绍三个要点，分别是第一个要点、第二个要点和第三个要点。

通过深入研究这些要点，我们旨在帮助考生们全面提升中级写作能力。

在结论部分，我们将对本文进行总结，并对所述要点进行结果分析。

同时，我们还将对未来的展望给出一些建议和思考。

本文的目的是帮助考生们更好地理解新托福考试中级写作的要求和考点，通过提供相关的策略和技巧，使考生们能够在考试中取得更好的成绩。

在接下来的内容中，我们将逐一介绍这些要点，并提供详细的解释和示例，希望这些内容能为考生们的中级写作提供实质性的帮助和指导。

1.2 文章结构文章结构是指文章的组织和安排方式，它决定了文章的逻辑顺序和内容呈现方式。

一个清晰和有条理的结构可以使读者更容易理解和跟随文章的思路。

在本篇文章中，我们将按照以下结构安排写作内容。

首先，我们将引言部分作为文章的开头。

引言部分需要包括一些背景信息和说明文章的目的。

在本文中，我们将介绍新托福考试中级写作的专项进阶，以及本文的目的是为了提供一些关键要点和技巧，以帮助读者提高中级写作能力。

接下来，我们的正文部分将会包括三个主要要点。

每个要点将会单独作为一个小节，并在正文中详细阐述。

我们将提供一些具体例子和解释来说明这些要点。

每个要点的标题将说明其主题，读者可以清楚地知道该部分将会讨论的内容。

然后，我们将进行结论部分的总结。

总结部分将回顾文章中的主要观点和要点，并对它们进行简要的概括。

在结果分析部分，我们将分析我们在正文中提出的要点，并讨论它们对读者的影响和意义。

最后，在对未来的展望部分，我们将讨论中级写作的进一步发展和提高，以及可能的应用领域。

toefl 综合写作

托福综合写作（Integrated writing）是托福考试中的一个重要部分，它要求考生在有限的时间内阅读一篇文章，然后听一段与该文章主题相关的讲座录音，最后在规定的时间内写一篇文章。

综合写作的流程如下：
1.阅读文章：考生会看到一篇大约250字的文章，通常会涉及一些社会、文化或学术主题。

文章的内容可能包含一个事实声明或一个普遍接受的
观点。

2.听力讲座：考生会听到一段与文章主题相关的讲座录音，通常会包含对文章的评论或反驳。

讲座的内容可能会与文章的观点相反，或者提供一些
额外的信息来补充或反驳文章中的观点。

3.写作：在听完讲座后，考生需要在大约20分钟内写一篇文章。

文章需要回应讲座的内容，解释讲座是如何反驳或补充文章的，并给出自己的观
点。

综合写作的评分标准主要包括以下几个方面：
1.内容回应：文章需要明确回应讲座的内容，解释讲座是如何反驳或补充文章的。

2.逻辑结构：文章需要有清晰的逻辑结构，包括引言、主体和结论部分。

3.语言表达：文章的语言表达需要清晰、准确，语法和拼写错误不能过多。

4.词汇使用：文章需要使用适当的词汇来表达观点。

以上是关于托福综合写作的一些基本信息和评分标准，希望对你有所帮助。

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 2

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新托福写作与SAT写作诉求及对策

新托福写作与SAT写作诉求及对策众所周知，新托福(TOEFL iBT)和SAT考试都是美国教育考试服务中心(ETS)旗下的考试产品，而这两者中的写作部分的诉求体现出ETS对于这两种考试的定位。

从本质上来说，托福本身是较为生活化的一类语言考试，要求考生能够通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度，并且能够具体、准确的组织论点，有逻辑地针对论点进行论证。

相对而言，SAT的要求是考生能够达到出色的批判性思维(critical thinking)，并且在论证过程当中更注重例子的有效展开、对论点的清晰支持以及超强的逻辑表达能力。

这里引用网上流行的一个对于新托福与SAT写作区别度的调侃，帮助大家一起更加直观地认知这两种考试的诉求。

网上的段子是这么说的：托福写作是这样的：我有一个黄色的皮球，我用它来锻炼投篮。

SAT写作是这样的：在我童年之时，我就怀揣着成为NBA巨星的梦想，你知道上海4点的样子吗?那时候，我正沐浴在黎明中，拍打着我的黄色皮球，笨拙地练习着，这也培养了我日后吃苦耐劳的精神。

所以托福写作的要义是：话要说清楚，把要干嘛，观点简单地说出来，加上细节，就行了。

而SAT写作是：在语言清晰，表达明确的基础上，把你的思想情感价值观进行论证、讨论、推敲，用一定的修辞比喻，去论证一个观点。

一、关于语言的灵活度鉴于新托福在独立写作之前还有一个综合写作，所以可以说托福还是有相当一部分考察点还是落在了对于阅读和听力的转述能力上。

因为照抄原文并不是英文能力的体现，所以在综合写作这一块，托福尤其强调了总结和转述，希望考生可以用自己的话去重新组织一个类似的意思，这样才算是满足了对于语言灵活度的考察。

而在新托福的独立写作和SAT作文当中，更多地是鼓励考生带着批判性思维去看待题目，并且有逻辑地进行论证。

在这个部分中，语言的灵活度展现在对于词汇及搭配的精准使用，另外也强调了语法的多样性。

所以，考生应该谨记，写作是在有限的时间有限的字数内去展现一个考生的写作能力，内容很重要，但是写作手法更重要。