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假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Robert最近给你发了一封内容如下的电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容和写作要点用英语给他回复。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m really upset at present, I had many friends, but now none of them want to talk to me. At lunch time, nobody likes to share a table with me. I feel really puzzled and lonely. And I can’t understand why they are trying to avoid me. Would you please give me some advice? Thank you.

Robert 写作要点：

1.对他的处境表示理解；

2. 给他提出合理的建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数量。

对比修改前后：

One possible version 1

Dear Robert,

I'm sorry to hear you have some trouble getting along with your friends. I can understand what a hard situation you are in. In order to help you, I’d like to give you some advice.

Firstly, you'd better find out what got you into such a mess, and then you will probably know how to solve the problem. Secondly, why not try your best to communicate with your friends frankly? If you do so, it shows you really cherish the friendship between you. Besides, in your daily life, it's wise to be ready to help your friends and people around you. In this way, you can not only win back your old friends but also make some new ones.

I hope my suggestions can make a difference. I'll continue to offer help if you need.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

One possible version 2

Dear Robert,

Nice to hear from you again. I really understand you, because I once had similar experience as you. Therefore, I'm writing to give you some advice.

First of all, you should try to figure out the reason why they are avoiding you. In this way, you may find a way to solve the problem. Secondly, don't be too depressed for things may not be as bad as you think. You can always turn to your teachers or parents for help if you have no idea what to do.

I would be glad if my suggestions can be helpful. And I hope things will work out. If you need further help, please let me know.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua