应用文练习写作之评论+介绍有关“慈善义卖”活动的情况--2023届高三英语写作专项

应用文练习写作之评论+介绍有关“慈善义卖”活动的情况
应用文写作：
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。

请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：1．音乐会特点；
2．观看感受；
3．意见建议。

注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

This online concert is absolutely fantastic. _____________ ____________________________________
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写作分析
1.这是一篇评论，对两校线上举办的音乐会进行评论。

2.写作内容：
①音乐会特点：双语表演；两国经典音乐与歌曲；虽为线上举行，但感觉身临其境
②观看感受：精神的盛宴，不仅欣赏了音乐的美，也进一步了解了两国的经典作品，增进了相互理解
③意见建议：希望能有与演员的互动
下水作文
This online concert is absolutely fantastic. Well arranged, wonderful performances from our two schools were shown in both Chinese and English, including some classical music and songs. Though online, I felt that I was personally on the scene. Indeed, it was a feast f or our spirits. Not only did we enjoy the beauty of music, but also we had a good communication in such a kind of efficient way. However, here comes my suggestion that if possible, it’s better to provide us chances to interact with performers, which will i mprove our understanding and deepen our friendship. (90 words)
参考范文
This online concert is absolutely fantastic. The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for the students from China and our international friends to learn about and from each other. (107 words)
应用文（满分15分）
假定你是李华，你校学生会刚举办了“慈善义卖”(Charity Sale)活动。

你的澳大利亚网友David对这个活动很感兴趣，写邮件向你了解基本情况。

请你给他回一封邮件，介绍此次活动的有关情况。

要点如下：
1.活动目的和内容；
2.你的心得体会。

注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
试题分析
写作分析
1.这是一封回信，对澳大利亚网友David感兴趣的校园“慈善义卖”一事回信。

2.写作内容：
①活动目的和内容：增进同学们对慈善的意识；义卖、募捐、传播慈善理念
②你的心得体会：难忘的经历，提升了投身慈善的决心
下水作文
Dear David,
Long time no see! I’m delighted to receive your letter, asking me for some information about the activity “Charity Sale” in our school.
It was launched last Sunday by the Students’ Union, aiming to raise students’ awareness of doing something meaningful for those in need. This time, we focused on sending gifts and daily necessities for the left-behind children in remot e mountainous villages. We students showed great interest in it, selling what they cherished in their high spirits, collecting money with enthusiasm and spreading the idea of charity with efforts. It, of course, turned out to be satisfying.
As for me, not only was it an unforgettable experience, but also it strengthened my devotion to the charity cause. If possible, let’s do something together to help the needy. (128 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear David,
Delighted to learn that you have keen interest in the Charity Sale held by the students’ union last Sunday, I’d love to share some details with you.
To raise funds for the needy, we were called on to collect various gadgets from our families and sold them at prices below fair market value. So enthusiastic were our classmates and teachers that all goods were snapped up within hours.
The event was a great success, providing us with a golden opportunity to get engaged in charity work and contribute to a good cause. Have you ever participated in something simi lar? I’d love to hear from you. (105 words)
Yours,
Li Hua。