高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评(图画式作文)练习讲评二课件

第四步：谈谈感受
围绕“给我们学校带来变化的原因”进行展开： ①地震可怕，但是阻止不了我们重建家园； ②“我”对人们的无私奉献和支援表示感激；
③作为灾区的一名学生应该怎么做来作为报答。 Terrible as the earthquake is, it can never prevent us from rebuilding our homes. I’m very grateful for everyone’s selfless devotion and assistance. As a student in the disaster-stricken area, I’ve made up my mind to study harder to repay people’s deep love.
2.可根据图片ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้示适当发挥； 3.词数：120左右。
Great Changes I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
参考范文
• 因为是书信，最后还要加上客套话。如： • I hope you will come to see for
yourself one day.
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Dear Mr. Smith, I am so glad to hear from you, and I am writing to tell you something about our school — Wanchuan Senior High school. As you know, the earthquake, which happened in 2008, brought a terrible disaster to our school. All of the buildings were turned into ruins and the disaster claimed a lot of lives. Time flies and our school is taking on a new look. For example, a lot of tall buildings, including a standard playground, have been built. You may wonder what has brought us the changes. First of all, thousands of workers from other provinces and cities came and helped to rebuild it. Moreover, donations from home and abroad were given to us, such as money, food, clothes and so on. Additionally, local people worked day and night, which contributed to its restoration. Terrible as the earthquake is, it can never prevent us from rebuilding our homes. I’m very grateful for everyone’s selfless devotion and assistance. As a student in the disaster-stricken area, I’ve made up my mind to study harder to repay people’s deep love. I hope you will come to see for yourself one day.
12届高考英语书面表达（图画式作文）练习讲评
• 假设你是李华, 在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先 生的来信。他在网上看到两副图片, 希望了解更多的有关情 况。请结合下图, 给他写一封回信, 介绍你校的变化、带来 变化的原因和自己的感受。
Dear Mr. Smith, I am so glad to hear from you, and I am writing to tell you
第二步：译点成句
注意多重表达 Wenchuan earthquake in 2008 brought a terrible disaster to our school. The earthquake, which happened in 2008 in Wenchuan, brought a terrible disaster to our school. A terrible disaster happened to our school in 2008. All of the buildings were turned into ruins. All of the buildings fell down and into ruins. The disaster claimed a lot of lives. A lot of people lost their lives in the disaster. Our school is taking on a new look. Great changes have taken place in our school.
•1、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集体的信念。 •2、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。 •3、反思自我时展示了勇气，自我反思是一切思想的源泉。 •4、在教师手里操着幼年人的命运，便操着民族和人类的命运。一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。 •5、诚实比一切智谋更好，而且它是智谋的基本条件。 •6、做老师的只要有一次向学生撒谎撒漏了底，就可能使他的全部教育成果从此为之失败。2022年1月2022/1/102022/1/102022/1/101/10/2022 •7、凡为教者必期于达到不须教。对人以诚信，人不欺我;对事以诚信，事无不成。2022/1/102022/1/10January 10, 2022 •8、教育者，非为已往，非为现在，而专为将来。2022/1/102022/1/102022/1/102022/1/10
something about our school — Wenchuan Senior High school.
第一幅图
第一步：提炼要点
万川中学（2008）
①2008年汶川大地震给“我们”学校带来的可怕的灾难； ②所有建筑变为废墟； 以上两点可以直接从图片中得出。 根据常识可以推断：夺去很多人的生命。
搜索表达的词组或句型 Wenchuan earthquake in 2008 bring a terrible disaster to… be turned into ruins claim a lot of lives
第二幅图
万川中学（2011） 变化： 呈现新面貌； 新建了高楼和操场。
搜索表达的词组或句型 take on a new look Great changes have taken place. tall buildings put up a standard playground built
第三步：连句成篇
注意增加一些细节以及过渡词（组）、过渡句等，使上下文连 贯。 As you know, the earthquake, which happened in 2008 in Wenchuan, brought a terrible disaster to our school. All of the buildings were turned into ruins and the disaster claimed a lot of lives. Time flies and our school is taking on a new look. For example, a lot of tall buildings, including a standard playground, have been built. You may wonder what has brought us the changes. First of all, thousands of workers from other provinces and cities came and helped to rebuild it. Moreover, donations from home and abroad were given to us, such as money, food, clothes and so on. Additionally, local people worked day and night, which contributed to its restoration.
箭头中的文字表示带来变化的原因：
①其他省市援建； ②国际国内捐助； ③当地人民辛勤建设。
workers from other provinces and cities came and helped to rebuild donations from home and abroad local people worked hard day and night
Yours,
同步练习
为纪念汶川大地震三周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提 示，以“Great Changes”为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下：
1.某中学灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等； 2.发生变化的原因； 3.你的感想。 注意：1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；
Great Changes I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
On May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, including classroom and laboratory buildings, and a library. There is also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now turned into a beautiful school, full of life.
第二步：译点成句
A lot of tall buildings have been put up. A standard playground has been built. Thousands of workers from other provinces and cities came and helped to rebuild our school. Donations from home and abroad were given to us. The local people worked hard day and night to rebuild our school.