(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题(含答案)及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
你的的笔友Tom居住在北京，请根据表格中提供的信息，介绍一下他的情况。

（80词左右）
I have a pen friend named Tom.
【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 a.m. and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.
【解析】试题分析：本文是材料作文。

你的的笔友Tom居住在北京，请根据表格中提供的信息，介绍一下他的情况。

根据内容可知本文使用的时态有一般现在时，一般过去式和现在完成时。

写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。

（一）列提纲：1. 来到中国已经两年了，在北京工作。

It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing.2. 曾经去过长城，故宫等名胜。

He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest.3. 过去喜欢看科幻小说，现在对中国古典书籍很感兴趣，已经读完了2本名著。

He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics.4. 早晨8点起床，乘坐地铁去上班，空余时间练习汉语。

He gets up at 8 a.m. and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time.5. 去很多不同的地方，了解中国文化，品尝中国美食。

He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.（二）根据提纲连词成句，连句成篇，注意连词的使用。

（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。

点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。

（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。

（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。

（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。

2．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达。

为了创建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。

请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。

要求： 1.词数100个左右。

2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. First, we should choose to live a low-carbon life. ______________________________. Second,________________________________________________________________.
Third,_________________________________________________________________. Finally,________________________________________________________________.
We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!
【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.
First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need. Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.
Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be pol ite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.
Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.
We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动为话题，结合所给
的写作材料，写出中学生应从表格中的几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。

根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

文中had better，by bike, on foot，instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ，take care of, devote … to …, learn from 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中使用了固定句型It’s +形容词+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。

3．（·北京中考模拟）假如你叫李华，学校英语广播站正在招募主持人。

请你用英文给负责的老
师 Sam 写一封自荐信，内容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及
具体打算做的事情。

提示词语： like, improve, help, introduce, share
提示问题：● What’s your name and hobby?
● Why do you want to be a host?
● What are you going to do?
Dear Sam,
I’d like to be a host fo r the English Broadcasting Station （英语广播站）. __
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
I’m lookin g forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam,
I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Hua
from Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs in
my spare time. I want to be a hos t because it’s a good chance to improve my oral
English, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which they
are interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce some
western culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautiful
English music and poems. I’d be very happy if I become a host.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：
本篇书面表达是围绕一篇演讲稿展开，贴近学校生活，学生有话可写。

但是在写作上一定要注意审题，不要跑题或者偏题。

要按要点和给出的提示问题来完成写作任务，但不能生硬的写几个句子交待了事，切记，逐条生硬的翻译，没有任何的连接词。

在词汇的运用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型与词汇外，注意句型的变化，连词的使用使词义连贯流畅，同时也使得文章有层次感，有条理性。

注意高级句型的运用提升文章的档次。

写作亮点：
文章开头点明主题，表明目的，然后对自己进行简要的个人介绍。

句型变化多，有定语从句的使用，数量恰当，句式丰富，短语多样。

关于讨论自己的竞选后的工作计划，使用了正确的时态进行表达（I am going to not only introduce some western culture…），有结尾，（I’m looking forward to your early reply.）体现了文章的完整性。

4．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。

A（n） _________ I have
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I have
Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.
In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.
When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.
Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!
【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。

写作亮点：
这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。

在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。

最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。

5．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李华，你们学校打算举办一场以“感恩老师”为主题的活动。

请根据以下要点，给你的美国笔友Mike 写一封邮件，介绍这次的活动。

时间：5月30号
活动内容： 1. 给老师献花致敬；
2. 把写满感谢祝福话语的卡片贴在墙上；
3. 为老师表演节目（put on performances）
你的感触：……
注意： 1. 词数80-100；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________
What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in trouble.We will put up the thank-notes on the wall.After that we put on performances for our teachers.
What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍以“感恩老师”为主题的活动。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Our school will hold……，On the day we will……，We thank them for……，I am……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我们学校举行了一个感恩老师的活动，接下来介绍我们的活动内容，最后表达我的感触。

此处give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

6．（·天津中考模拟）你马上就要初中毕业了，恩师难忘，请你根据下面的提示，向大家介绍你的一位老师（Ms Wang）。

（1） Ms Wang的基本情况：学科、年龄、外貌；（以上内容自拟）
（2）老师的特点：严格，与学生相处融洽，和善，耐心，有创造性；
（3）你对老师的评价。

参考词汇：对某人严格的 be strict with sb. 创造性的 be creative
要求：
（1）词数：80〜100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my ________ tea cher, Ms Wang with you.
【答案】I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my favorite and unforgettable teacher Ms. Wang with you. She is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is of medium height with long straight hair. She is strict with us in our study, but she can get on well with us after class. She often tells jokes in her classs.She often helps poor students with their homework in her free time and she is always patient and creative. In my opinion, Ms Wang is the best teacher who I have met. And I will want to be a teacher like her in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达要求考生介绍自己最喜欢的老师。

【详解】
这篇写作考查考生对人物的描写。

对人物的描写主要从基本信息、外貌、性格特征以及对其评价四个方面入手。

考生结合着四个方面及所给信息，要做到信息全面，行文连贯。

写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。

为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。

同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连
接成分，使文意连贯
7．（·安徽中考模拟）近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。

你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。

假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

要点提示 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;
4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。

注意 :
1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________
In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours
Daming 【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours,
Daming 【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方
面提出了建议。

通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先应和Sam先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。

文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。

写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。

如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。

为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。

首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。

文章主要分成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。

这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。

语法规范、准确，用词得体。

文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章的结构。

文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

8．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
A small thing
提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经历过的小事。

要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数100左右；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计。

【答案】A small thing
It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father.
This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
本文要记述自己经历过的一件小事, 在时态上用一般过去时。

本篇文章,首先开篇点题,指出
事情发生的时间及所经历的事件。

It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike.中间部分叙述了时间发生的经过，词语at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章浑然一体。

最后一段是从这件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 对这件小
事进行了总结，更使文章在思想上得到了升华。

文章时态使用正确，表达准确，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不错的文章。

【点睛】
认真审题，看清题目要求，在描述事件时，要注意清晰表达事情发生的开端，内容及结尾。

必要时要适当使用连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，文章最后注意对整个故事进行总结，最好能够从故事中得出自己的感悟，在叙述故事的同时使文章具有思想性。

写完文章后注意检查有误单词拼写错误，语法使用错误，字数是否达到要求。

9．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇题为"Thank you，my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动．要点如下：
（1）严格要求
（2）耐心指导
（3）热情鼓励；
注意：（1）词数80～100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称．
（4）…
注意：（1）词数80-100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称
【答案】Thank you，my teacher!
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（严格要求）【高分句型一】
During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指导）
Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（热情鼓励）
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（表示感谢）
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇抒情记叙文。

【详解】
英语作文一般分为三个部分
第一部分：开篇点题，交代写作目的——感谢老师为我做的一切。

第二部分：交代感谢英语老师的原因
老师是一个认真工作的人。

老师对我严格要求。

在我考试失利时鼓励我。

第三部分：再次点题，对老师表示由衷的谢意。

高分句型一：
It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因为你的课非常生动有趣，对我们来说学好英语很简单有趣．
句中"because your class is very interesting and lively"为原因状语从句，主句为"itis+形容词+for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事…"结构．
高分句型二：
When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．当我考试失败的时候，你鼓励我不断努力．
句中"When I failed in an exam"为条件状语从句，主句"you encouraged me to keep trying"中有短语"encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事"、"keep doing sth一直做某事"．
提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．
10．（·福建中考模拟）宽容是一种美德，人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊，面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活就会多一缕阳光。

请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

注意：不得出现真实的校名和人名。

提示词语：forgive原谅
提示问题：What happened between you and him/her?
Why did you decide to forgive him/her?
How did you feel after forgiving him/her?
I still remember what happened between ...
【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o'clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn't show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.
I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括: 你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。

认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读提示问题（1.What happened between you and him/her? 2.Why did you decide to forgive him/her? 3.How did you feel after forgiving him/her?4.I still remember what happened between ...），提示问题就是本文的提示要点，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提
纲。

短文必须包含提示问题和提示词。

字数应在80词左右。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
我还记得我朋友迈克和我之间发生的事。

两个月前，迈克邀请我七点钟去听音乐会。

我准时到达那里。

我等了很长时间，但迈克最终没有出现。

我打电话问他发生了什么事。

他把音乐会的一切都忘了。

那时他在家里玩电脑游戏。

我生迈克的气是因为他伤害了我的感情。

迈克也意识到了他的错误。

他给我打了好几次电话，向我道歉。

他甚至送我一件礼物让我开心。

最后我原谅了他。

原谅他之后，我感到轻松愉快。

【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。

要学以致用。

（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。

（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

11．（·丹江口市习家店中学中考模拟）初级写作
今天环境变得越来越糟糕，环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境呢？
请以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”为题写一篇短文。

提示：存在问题：1.水污染越来越严重；2.砍伐森林严重；3.大气污染严重；4.白色垃圾等 .要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少3-4个方面，80-100词。

【答案】The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People's health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution． Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it's time for us to protect our world．
Firstly，we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as
possible．Don't use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．
【解析】
【详解】
写作思路：先仔细审题，这是写好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表达的内容一一呈现出来，一定要确定好文章的重点，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短语和句式，增加文章的色彩．
本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.做到开篇点题，指出环境问题变得越来越严重，然后按照题目要求逐一列出现在所存在的问题。

提出问题之后接着提出解决问题的办法，其中用到firstly,….Also…等使文章清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望We hope our world is more and more beautiful．文章做到内容完整，思路清晰，词语运用正确，是一篇很不错的文章。

12．（·济阳县第二实验中学中考模拟）书面表达
请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。

内容包括：
1.完整叙述图片内容；
2.简要陈述个人观点。

要求：1.可进行适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

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【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are coming back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also comes up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting。