英语专四作文写作辅导2ppt课件
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原句：No one saw the bank being broken into. 优化：No one witnessed the bank being broken into. 原句：Please try our best to help this girl, help her to pass the most d可if编f辑i课c件ult period in life, and 5
专四写作辅导2
商英教研室
可编积累&检查 二如何制造亮点词语 三如何制造亮点句型
可编辑课件
2
复习 模板识记、积累&检查
可编辑课件
3
如何制造亮点词语
可编辑课件
4
1选用具体的词 平时学习时，就要注意积累具体词，并使之 成为活跃词汇。这样实战时，才能随手运用。
good food pk tasty/fresh food
6
3学会活用不同的词性
汉语则较多使用动词、形容词，而英语中常 用名词。
所以，要想地道、制造亮点，要学会多用名 词
原句：After we observed them carefully and analyzed them critically, we may identify the conceptions that will actually contribute to the social development.
issue [a topic that is often discussed or argued
about, especially a social or political matter that
affects the interests of a lot of people]尤指社会
或政治方面的〕议题可；编辑争课件 论的问题
原句: Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it becomes a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact. 优化: It is widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future, though it is unlikely to be true.
优化：Through careful observation and
critical analysis …可编辑课件
7
4恰当使用限定用语 限定用语的使用可以使论述更加客观、适度， 避免观点的绝对化，提高说服力和可信度。 常见的限定词：
mainly, generally, in general, typically, mostly, almost, for the most part; may, maybe, perhaps, probably; sometimes, to some extent, to some degree…
可编辑课件
12
学会使用并列结构
平行结构指的是将结构相同或相似、意义并 重、语气一致的语言成分并行排列的一种修 辞手法。这种结构层次清晰、语意顺畅,能够 起到加强语气、增强表达效果的作用。 原句: This phenomenon, in my opinion, has upgraded the quality of people’s life. And it has also improved the valve of consumption of our modern society 优化：This phenomenon, in my opinion, has not only upgraded the可q编辑u课a件lity people’s life but 13
2. I’m sure you will soon find a good candidate for the position.(用更具体的词)
3. People who are good at dealing with social relations admit their mistakes, and take their share of blame. (用介词短语改写)
学会使用介词短语
可编辑课件
8
亮点词语改写练习
1. I’d like to make every effort to let more people know the idea that waste is disgraceful, and call on all my schoolmates to fight against waste.(用更具体的词)
可编辑课件
9
如何制造亮点句型
可编辑课件
10
长句短句搭配使用 在实际写作中,一味地采用长句或短句都是不 可取的,要长短句交替使用。
开头&结尾：用长句，吸引阅卷老师注意力 正文：一般来说,写作中是以简单句为基础,适 当配以并列句和复合句。
可编辑课件
11
1.长句的用法
长句含有许多修饰语,适合表达准确而复杂的思想,解释观点 或理论,描写细致的事物。 写作时,考生要注意前后句子之间是否存在联系,善于发现各 简单句之间的关联,用恰当的连接方式(esp并列、从句、介词 短语、非谓语动词短语)将简单句连接起来,组成准确地道的 复杂长句,增加文章的气势。
2注意区分近义词 学习时，注意区分含义的微妙差异，从而在 运用时，用词恰当。
原句：Nuclear proliferation is always the top problem the participants have to discuss at this kind of meeting.
→issue
专四写作辅导2
商英教研室
可编积累&检查 二如何制造亮点词语 三如何制造亮点句型
可编辑课件
2
复习 模板识记、积累&检查
可编辑课件
3
如何制造亮点词语
可编辑课件
4
1选用具体的词 平时学习时，就要注意积累具体词，并使之 成为活跃词汇。这样实战时，才能随手运用。
good food pk tasty/fresh food
6
3学会活用不同的词性
汉语则较多使用动词、形容词，而英语中常 用名词。
所以，要想地道、制造亮点，要学会多用名 词
原句：After we observed them carefully and analyzed them critically, we may identify the conceptions that will actually contribute to the social development.
issue [a topic that is often discussed or argued
about, especially a social or political matter that
affects the interests of a lot of people]尤指社会
或政治方面的〕议题可；编辑争课件 论的问题
原句: Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it becomes a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact. 优化: It is widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future, though it is unlikely to be true.
优化：Through careful observation and
critical analysis …可编辑课件
7
4恰当使用限定用语 限定用语的使用可以使论述更加客观、适度， 避免观点的绝对化，提高说服力和可信度。 常见的限定词：
mainly, generally, in general, typically, mostly, almost, for the most part; may, maybe, perhaps, probably; sometimes, to some extent, to some degree…
可编辑课件
12
学会使用并列结构
平行结构指的是将结构相同或相似、意义并 重、语气一致的语言成分并行排列的一种修 辞手法。这种结构层次清晰、语意顺畅,能够 起到加强语气、增强表达效果的作用。 原句: This phenomenon, in my opinion, has upgraded the quality of people’s life. And it has also improved the valve of consumption of our modern society 优化：This phenomenon, in my opinion, has not only upgraded the可q编辑u课a件lity people’s life but 13
2. I’m sure you will soon find a good candidate for the position.(用更具体的词)
3. People who are good at dealing with social relations admit their mistakes, and take their share of blame. (用介词短语改写)
学会使用介词短语
可编辑课件
8
亮点词语改写练习
1. I’d like to make every effort to let more people know the idea that waste is disgraceful, and call on all my schoolmates to fight against waste.(用更具体的词)
可编辑课件
9
如何制造亮点句型
可编辑课件
10
长句短句搭配使用 在实际写作中,一味地采用长句或短句都是不 可取的,要长短句交替使用。
开头&结尾：用长句，吸引阅卷老师注意力 正文：一般来说,写作中是以简单句为基础,适 当配以并列句和复合句。
可编辑课件
11
1.长句的用法
长句含有许多修饰语,适合表达准确而复杂的思想,解释观点 或理论,描写细致的事物。 写作时,考生要注意前后句子之间是否存在联系,善于发现各 简单句之间的关联,用恰当的连接方式(esp并列、从句、介词 短语、非谓语动词短语)将简单句连接起来,组成准确地道的 复杂长句,增加文章的气势。
2注意区分近义词 学习时，注意区分含义的微妙差异，从而在 运用时，用词恰当。
原句：Nuclear proliferation is always the top problem the participants have to discuss at this kind of meeting.
→issue