九年级下册英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题及解析

九年级下册英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题及解析
一、英语书面表达
1．近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。

请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减
少对空气的污染。

要点提示：
（1）我国空气污染的现象。

（至少写2点）
（2）空气污染产生的原因。

（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染的措施。

（至少写2点）
要求：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious
airpollution_____________________________________________________________________ _______
【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。

所提供的
材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，
原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时。

注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有
信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中
适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。

这里had better表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽车。

【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。

这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用的是动词的ing形式。

2．书面表达
栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。

她在信中诉
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”
说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。

要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
_______________________________________
All the best!
Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
oks.
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBo
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will
make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation
which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.
All the best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。

同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so
convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which
is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意
总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富
有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。

3．马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。

班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School”　
主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。

请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

美好的回忆 1.与同学融洽相处； 2.得到老师的帮助；
3.获得交换生机会；
4.参加志愿者活动。

不开心的事情 1.好朋友李华转学； 2.不擅长语文写作。

未来展望1. 升上理想的学校；
2. 能结识更多朋友；
3. 请你补充（至少两点）
My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.
【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they
are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an
exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。

题目中利用表格的形式，展示
了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。

审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般
现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。

内
容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自
己未来的高中生活。

表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们
变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。

写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不
能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上
文很好地衔接。

另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。

句式结构
可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。

同时
语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。

短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。

短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中
给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开
心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。

各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。

其次短
文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。

句式
结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。

短文中使用了丰富
的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

4．书面表达
根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
过去现在
1旧房1高楼
2河水肮脏2河水清澈（clean and clear）．
3步行、骑自行车上班3乘公交车、小汽车上班
4道路狭窄（narrow）．4街道宽阔（wide），干净整洁
5居住条件（living conditions）差5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适．
6你的感想…（写两到三句）
Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．
【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to
be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were
terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall
buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish
in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment
around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remembe the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如
take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better
and better，more and more等。

而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that
we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，
是本文的最大亮点。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。

5．书面表达
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

一直以来，同学们对作业持有不同的观点。

在你班的主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily
homework necessary？”的讨论，请你根据提示和要求，并结合自己的实际经验，发表你的
观点。

Yes No
Help us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...
Your opinion：
要求：
1．80词以上。

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”
．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日的作业到底
是不是必要的。

首先需要陈述正反两方面的观点，其次结合自己的实际经验，发表自己的
观点。

写作过程中要注意逻辑准确，注意正确使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自己
的观点。

写作亮点：首先用一个自然段来阐明写作的主题，表达出自己的观点（认为作业是很必要
的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…
这样的句型。

其次，开始具体陈述观点，陈述的
时候要适当使用实例，相关用到的短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…的时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little 一点一点地。

恰当的谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”
熟能生巧这个谚语。

最后可以用说理的方式来介绍做作业的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills 提高我们的技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了
作者的深度思考，总体来说出色地完成了既定的写作任务。

6．为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事,
“程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。

请你
根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：
1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口
2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.
2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher,
Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it
was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher
woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the
teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for
Master Cheng respectfully）”。

目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。

时态为一般过去时，
灵活运用动词的过去式。

作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或
者观点。

写作时，避免汉语式英语。

注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/
were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

7．你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关
心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。

要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。

你认为自己学习上还要
多花工夫。

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。

（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……
（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。

他们希望你们实现自己的理想。

他们说（适当发挥2—3
句）……
注意：
（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results
in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.
My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.
My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学
习和生活情况。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可
适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习
惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be
以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of
增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符
合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给
出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中
心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确
性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意
使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还
要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词
数是否符合要求等。

8．现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。

请你根据下面的
提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？
2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？
3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________
【答案】例文：The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a
smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and
learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful.
However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the
smartphone and get bad results in exams.
So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看
法。

文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。

首先认真审题，看清题目
中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然
后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要
点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表
达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼
写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核
检查，确保正确无误。

9．随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。

“网购”已成
为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。

请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网
上购物的文章。

优点 1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累
（advantage） 2.价格通常比较便宜
3.可供选择的范围广，品种多
缺点（disadvantage）1.只看到图片，看不到商品本身
2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费
你的观点……
提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.
【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has
become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you
interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds
and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods,
whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy fo to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on
the Internet. On the other hand, shopping
online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时
态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习
惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如convenient，disadvantage，in
good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of
等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符
合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给
出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中
心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确
性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意
使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

10．上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。

现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。

注意：
1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；
2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；
3.80-100词。

生词提示：electric adj.电
讨论结果25人表示同意35人不同意
理由1.这样很方便； 2.能节约上学
途中的时间。

1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；
2.早上交通拥
挤，骑电动车也快不起来。

【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride
electric bicycles to go to
school.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and
it could take
them less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was
not safe for
the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said
in the morning
the traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。

根据所给要点写一
篇80-100词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。

根据所给要点
可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。

要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一
个，书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。

观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。

并
注意上下文要语句贯通。

并且要围绕主题适当发挥。

写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结
构清晰，要点全面。

时态运用正确，书写工整规范。

该文中以下几个句子用得很好。

Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school.
They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycle quickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。

考点：提纲类作文。