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夹叙夹议

田间劳动

【内容提示】

假定你是上海某中学高二年级学生。你们前些日子参加了一次社会实践活动——到农村去劳动。请根据下面提供的内容，写一篇夹叙夹议的文章：

①田间劳动与教室学习全然不同。

②头一天大失所望。不是耕地，而是拔草，共拔了3天草。

③第四天，让你们班的男生去罱河泥，往田里运。

④还有的同学往塑料杯里装土，也有的从一处往另一处扛铁管。

⑤空余时间你们走访农民家庭，看到他们生活水平提高了，你们非常高兴。

⑥你们在农村劳动两周，学到了好多东西。

【作文示范】

Students Working in the Fields

Working in the fields is new to the students. It is entirely different from classroom studies. With great curiosity① and excitement, we students of Senior Two began our learning-from-peasants activities in Jianxing village, Jiang Wan Township, not far from Shanghai.

To our disappointment, the first day's work was not to till② the land; rather we were asked to pull up weeds③ in the fields. Weeding seems to be as easy as turning over one's hand, but not at all. The weeds clustered④ together and there were so many of them, that we could hardly see the crops. Some weeds were so deeply rooted they wouldn't be pulled up even by two people. Weeding went on for t hree days. We all had aching back and legs, yet we were ha ppy to see the fruits of our work.

On the fourth day, the boys in our class were required to scoop⑤ up the mud from a riverbed and carry it into the fields. The mud is quite fertile and is used for planting tomatoes. We used handcarts to carry the sludge. It w as hard for one boy to push the cart along the muddy path. We exerted⑥ all our strength to move the carts forward.

Besides carrying sludge and pulling up weeds, ot her students filled small plastic cups with soil, while still others carried iron pipes from one place to another.

During our spare time, we paid visits to peasant houses. We were happy to see that the living standard of the peasants is rising rapidly. Families have colour TVs, washing machines, and refrigerators. We were shocked to learn that an ordinary peasant can earn 5,000 yuan a year----ten times more than in 1977. Five thousand yuan a year! How much it is! However, I'm sorry to say that the level of literacy⑦ is still very low.

We came back to school last week. Though we only worke d for two weeks, we learned a lot. It is an experience I shall remember all my life.

（选自1987年12月22日《上海学生英文报》）

【词语解释】

①curiosity [?kju+ri'&siti] n. 好奇（心）

②till[til]v. 耕种，耕作；耕（地）

③weed[wi:d] n. 杂草；野草

④cluster['kl)st+] v. 丛生；群集

⑤scoop[s ku:p] v. 用勺（或铲）取出；罱（泥）

⑥exert [ig'z+:t] v.尽（力）；发挥（威力）

⑦ literacy ['lit+r+si] n. 识字；有文化

【写法指要】

本文写了作者及其班集体开展到农村向农民学习活动的情况。全文分两大部分：第一部分按时间顺序分为前三天和第四天以后他们在田间劳动的情况；第二部分写他们劳动之余走访农家的情况。总的来看，这是一篇粗线条记叙文。但是，作者每叙述到重要的地方总要发表自己的议论，如文章开头两句，第二段第二句和第五句，第五段从第二句开始的每一句都是作者的议论。所以，我们说这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。