专四作文辅导5图表作文讲解
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1. Compared with 1990, there was a lower percentage of British people donating money to charity in 2010. 举例：1990年，捐款比例最小的年龄组17%，其他年龄组都超过30%，最高值42%。 2010年，捐款比例最小的年龄组7%，其他年龄组超过20%, 最高值39%。
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LINE GRAPH
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PIE CHART
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BAR CHART
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PIE CHART
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图表作文结构 分成两大类:描述类和描述+分析建议类
1. 题目只要求描述图表类（见P6） （1）开头：概述图表的主题思想和总体特点（2句左右） （2）正文：用文字有条理地客观描述图表传递的信息，并找出某种规律。（可以分成两三段） （3）结尾：总结图表的主要规律（1-2句） 2. 题目要求描述并分和提建议的 (见P7) （1）开头：概述图表主题思想，描述数据的总体特点并用数据支持，根据题目要求提出个人观点（3-4
food, clothes etc. if they have less money in possession.
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LANGUAGE EXPRESSION: 百分比
1. X accounts for xx per cent of Y (总数) (也可用take up) X占Y的百分之xx
1. The number of …increased/rose+ suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably /sharply/steeply from 1900 to 2000. 在1900到2000间，……的数量有了急剧的增长。 2. There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of …… from 1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量有了急剧的增长。 3. The number of …… increased/rose steadily/gradually/slowly/slightly from 1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量在持续稳定的增长。 4. There was a steady/gradual/slow/slight increase/rise in the number of …… from1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量在持续稳定的增长。 5. decrease/fall/drop; a decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of ……（可替换上述表明增长的词）
(2) The first two months of 1990 showed an increasing trend. ⑶ The rate rose to 32 in March but fell to 26 in June. ⑷ From June on, the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. ⑸ After August the rate began to decline remarkably, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year.
2. 年龄组比较
（1）总体：参与慈善捐款的人口比 例在不同年龄段有显著差异。 （2）两年相比：与20年前相比， 中青年人的捐款人口比例显著下降， 老年人的捐款人口比例略有上升。
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提纲
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Introduction: mini research project, bar chart
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比较
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1. On the top of the list is ……, which accounts for 60% of …. 占比重最高的是……，占60%。
2. At the bottom is ……, which accounts for 10% of …. 占比重最低的是……，占10%。
⑴主题句/概述表格反映的内容 ⑵—(5)反映交通事故的变化情况 (6)小结：总结表格数据反映的总趋势
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图表描述+分析建议类作文
(1) According to the line graph, the number of car accidents in Walton city fluctuated during the year of 1990. (2) From January to March of 1990, the car accidents increased from 22 to 32 but fell to 26 in June. ⑷ From June on, the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. ⑸ After August the rate began to decline remarkably, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year. ⑹ Therefore, it is obvious that that the number of car accidents in Walton city declined in 1990. ⑺There are several reasons for the decline. ⑻ First, a new traffic law was made and came into force. ⑼ It provided August, when humidity and high temperature make drivers impatient and easily lead to car accidents, dropped steadily. ⑾ Second, new roads were built and some narrow streets were widened, which quickened the flow of traffic. ⑿ Finally, the city administration made great efforts to heighten people’s awareness of observing traffic rules. ⒀ With all these new measures, I’m sure the rate of car accidents in Walton city will go on falling this year. ⑺主题句 ⑻原因/措施一⑼解释措施一/次要辅助⑽采取措施一后的结果⑾原因/措施二⑿原因/措 施三(这部分的原因是根据材料内容结合数据趋势分析出来的) ⒀总结：展望未来的情况
2. In general, the percentage of British people giving money to charity vary among different age groups. Compared with 1990, there is a significant decline of the percentage among three age groups under 50, and only a slight rise of the percentage among two age groups over 50. 举例：下降组的数据对比，上升组的数据对比
3. A is ranked/rated first, accounting for 60% of…. It is followed by B at 30% and C at 25%.
A占最高比重，占……的60%。紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C。
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变化趋势-上升/增长、下降/减少
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专四作文辅导:图表作文
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主要辅导内容
1. 模拟3图表作文讲解（含提纲） 2. 图表作文概述（四种类型的图表） 3. 图表作文的结构（2类） 4. 图表作文的开头 5. 图表作文的数据描述 6. 图表作文的结尾 7. 几个范文
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模考3作文
审题： 1. Introduction: mini research project,
Conclusion: 发现：The percentage of British population contributing money to charity is declining and the decline is found
most significantly among the young and middle aged people. 建议：People should be encouraged to participate more actively in charity. They could be suggested to donate
bar chart 2. Body: 图表中的趋势 3. Conclusion （也许有未来行动方向？材料的附加 信息可以用）
3பைடு நூலகம்
纵轴：
某年龄段参与慈善捐款的人口占本 年龄段人口的比例
横轴：
5个不同年龄组
变量：
两个年份：1990年和2010年
趋势分析 1. 年份比较
参与慈善捐款的人口占总人口数的 比例: 1990>2010
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图表作文概况
1. 图表作文要求对图表相关的信息进行归纳，对其重点和主要趋势进行汇报。 2. 图表主要有四种 (图例见P11-12) （1）line graph线型图-描述某事物的发展变化 （2）pie chart饼图-描述一个总体的不同部分的比例 （3）bar chart柱状图-用来比较两个以上数据的值 （4）table表格-用一行/多行单元格中的文本和数字展示数据的方式。 3. 图表作文注意事项： （1）时态一致（根据图表描述的事物的时间确定时态，无特定时间的用一般现在时） （2）采用正式书面文体 （避免Let’s look at…, Let me show you, It shows us之类带有口语性质的 描述 （3）客观描述图表，逻辑条理清晰，不增加个人主观猜想
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变化趋势-达到顶点
1. The situation/figures reached/hit a peak/a high at 60% in ……. 2. The situation/figures peaked at 60% in ……. 情况(数据)在……达到顶点，为60%。 3. The situation/figures bottomed out at 20% in ……. The situation/figures hit a trough at 20% in ……. 情况(数据)在……达到最低点，为20%。
⑹ Therefore, it is obvious that the first eight months of 1990 witnessed a fluctuated increase in car accidents in Walton and it was followed by a trend of decline in car accidents in the last four months of the year.
句） （2）正文：对个人观点进行论述 （3）结论：总结、提建议或方案（2句）
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纯描述类图表作文
(此文字数不足，如果是纯描述类作文，图表应该比这个复杂，比如会有两条线，此 文只用来展示作文结构)
(1) As is indicated in the line graph, the number of car accidents in Walton city fluctuated during the year of 1990.
E.g. Male respondents accounts for 48% of the total respondents. Female respondents takes up 52% of the total respondents.
2. The percentage of X among Y is xx%. Y中X的含量是百分之xx
E.g. The percentage of the 18-25-year-old group donating money to charity is 15% in 1990. 3. The number of X is…, accounting for xx per cent of Y.
X值为……，占Y的百分之xx The number of smokers is 10 million, accounting for 6.2% of the entire population.
1. Compared with 1990, there was a lower percentage of British people donating money to charity in 2010. 举例：1990年，捐款比例最小的年龄组17%，其他年龄组都超过30%，最高值42%。 2010年，捐款比例最小的年龄组7%，其他年龄组超过20%, 最高值39%。
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LINE GRAPH
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PIE CHART
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BAR CHART
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PIE CHART
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图表作文结构 分成两大类:描述类和描述+分析建议类
1. 题目只要求描述图表类（见P6） （1）开头：概述图表的主题思想和总体特点（2句左右） （2）正文：用文字有条理地客观描述图表传递的信息，并找出某种规律。（可以分成两三段） （3）结尾：总结图表的主要规律（1-2句） 2. 题目要求描述并分和提建议的 (见P7) （1）开头：概述图表主题思想，描述数据的总体特点并用数据支持，根据题目要求提出个人观点（3-4
food, clothes etc. if they have less money in possession.
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LANGUAGE EXPRESSION: 百分比
1. X accounts for xx per cent of Y (总数) (也可用take up) X占Y的百分之xx
1. The number of …increased/rose+ suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably /sharply/steeply from 1900 to 2000. 在1900到2000间，……的数量有了急剧的增长。 2. There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of …… from 1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量有了急剧的增长。 3. The number of …… increased/rose steadily/gradually/slowly/slightly from 1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量在持续稳定的增长。 4. There was a steady/gradual/slow/slight increase/rise in the number of …… from1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量在持续稳定的增长。 5. decrease/fall/drop; a decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of ……（可替换上述表明增长的词）
(2) The first two months of 1990 showed an increasing trend. ⑶ The rate rose to 32 in March but fell to 26 in June. ⑷ From June on, the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. ⑸ After August the rate began to decline remarkably, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year.
2. 年龄组比较
（1）总体：参与慈善捐款的人口比 例在不同年龄段有显著差异。 （2）两年相比：与20年前相比， 中青年人的捐款人口比例显著下降， 老年人的捐款人口比例略有上升。
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提纲
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Introduction: mini research project, bar chart
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比较
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1. On the top of the list is ……, which accounts for 60% of …. 占比重最高的是……，占60%。
2. At the bottom is ……, which accounts for 10% of …. 占比重最低的是……，占10%。
⑴主题句/概述表格反映的内容 ⑵—(5)反映交通事故的变化情况 (6)小结：总结表格数据反映的总趋势
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图表描述+分析建议类作文
(1) According to the line graph, the number of car accidents in Walton city fluctuated during the year of 1990. (2) From January to March of 1990, the car accidents increased from 22 to 32 but fell to 26 in June. ⑷ From June on, the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. ⑸ After August the rate began to decline remarkably, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year. ⑹ Therefore, it is obvious that that the number of car accidents in Walton city declined in 1990. ⑺There are several reasons for the decline. ⑻ First, a new traffic law was made and came into force. ⑼ It provided August, when humidity and high temperature make drivers impatient and easily lead to car accidents, dropped steadily. ⑾ Second, new roads were built and some narrow streets were widened, which quickened the flow of traffic. ⑿ Finally, the city administration made great efforts to heighten people’s awareness of observing traffic rules. ⒀ With all these new measures, I’m sure the rate of car accidents in Walton city will go on falling this year. ⑺主题句 ⑻原因/措施一⑼解释措施一/次要辅助⑽采取措施一后的结果⑾原因/措施二⑿原因/措 施三(这部分的原因是根据材料内容结合数据趋势分析出来的) ⒀总结：展望未来的情况
2. In general, the percentage of British people giving money to charity vary among different age groups. Compared with 1990, there is a significant decline of the percentage among three age groups under 50, and only a slight rise of the percentage among two age groups over 50. 举例：下降组的数据对比，上升组的数据对比
3. A is ranked/rated first, accounting for 60% of…. It is followed by B at 30% and C at 25%.
A占最高比重，占……的60%。紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C。
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变化趋势-上升/增长、下降/减少
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专四作文辅导:图表作文
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主要辅导内容
1. 模拟3图表作文讲解（含提纲） 2. 图表作文概述（四种类型的图表） 3. 图表作文的结构（2类） 4. 图表作文的开头 5. 图表作文的数据描述 6. 图表作文的结尾 7. 几个范文
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模考3作文
审题： 1. Introduction: mini research project,
Conclusion: 发现：The percentage of British population contributing money to charity is declining and the decline is found
most significantly among the young and middle aged people. 建议：People should be encouraged to participate more actively in charity. They could be suggested to donate
bar chart 2. Body: 图表中的趋势 3. Conclusion （也许有未来行动方向？材料的附加 信息可以用）
3பைடு நூலகம்
纵轴：
某年龄段参与慈善捐款的人口占本 年龄段人口的比例
横轴：
5个不同年龄组
变量：
两个年份：1990年和2010年
趋势分析 1. 年份比较
参与慈善捐款的人口占总人口数的 比例: 1990>2010
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图表作文概况
1. 图表作文要求对图表相关的信息进行归纳，对其重点和主要趋势进行汇报。 2. 图表主要有四种 (图例见P11-12) （1）line graph线型图-描述某事物的发展变化 （2）pie chart饼图-描述一个总体的不同部分的比例 （3）bar chart柱状图-用来比较两个以上数据的值 （4）table表格-用一行/多行单元格中的文本和数字展示数据的方式。 3. 图表作文注意事项： （1）时态一致（根据图表描述的事物的时间确定时态，无特定时间的用一般现在时） （2）采用正式书面文体 （避免Let’s look at…, Let me show you, It shows us之类带有口语性质的 描述 （3）客观描述图表，逻辑条理清晰，不增加个人主观猜想
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变化趋势-达到顶点
1. The situation/figures reached/hit a peak/a high at 60% in ……. 2. The situation/figures peaked at 60% in ……. 情况(数据)在……达到顶点，为60%。 3. The situation/figures bottomed out at 20% in ……. The situation/figures hit a trough at 20% in ……. 情况(数据)在……达到最低点，为20%。
⑹ Therefore, it is obvious that the first eight months of 1990 witnessed a fluctuated increase in car accidents in Walton and it was followed by a trend of decline in car accidents in the last four months of the year.
句） （2）正文：对个人观点进行论述 （3）结论：总结、提建议或方案（2句）
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纯描述类图表作文
(此文字数不足，如果是纯描述类作文，图表应该比这个复杂，比如会有两条线，此 文只用来展示作文结构)
(1) As is indicated in the line graph, the number of car accidents in Walton city fluctuated during the year of 1990.
E.g. Male respondents accounts for 48% of the total respondents. Female respondents takes up 52% of the total respondents.
2. The percentage of X among Y is xx%. Y中X的含量是百分之xx
E.g. The percentage of the 18-25-year-old group donating money to charity is 15% in 1990. 3. The number of X is…, accounting for xx per cent of Y.
X值为……，占Y的百分之xx The number of smokers is 10 million, accounting for 6.2% of the entire population.