中考英语书面表达真题汇编(含答案)及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·北京中考模拟）（题文）假如你是李华，本周六与好友相约去北京植物园。

你的美国网友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。

请你向他发出邀请，告诉他去哪儿，做什么以及你的建议。

提示词语：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a picnic
提示问题：When and where are you going this Saturday?
What will you do there?
·
What do you advise him to do?
【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plant s there. We are going to have a picnic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
【解析】试题分析：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

本题根据提示内容应该用一般现在时，邀请对方并给出建议，需使用表达邀请和用于提建议的相关短语和句式，注意长短搭配，并在行文中增加细节和过渡，使文章读起来比较流畅。

动笔前，一定要认真分析提示要点，理解要点要表达的含义。

平时除了加强词汇积累和写作练习以外，还应该适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a picnic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，come back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。

而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.等多种从句和be going to结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

2．（·四川中考模拟）近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。

雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。

请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：
1. 雾霾的危害
2. 雾霾产生的原因（2个）
3. 应对雾霾的措施（3个）
提示：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒的
注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。

首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。

其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。

最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。

还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。

3．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
“小手拉大手,同做文明人。

”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。

作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。

请根据以下所给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

1.种植花草树木；
2.遵守交通规则；
3.公共场合不大声喧哗；
4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）
参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守
【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.
As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For
example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.
Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。

而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。

作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文（80字左右）
内容包含：1.遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。

2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。

4.你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
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【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra –crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
【解析】本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述，谈论有关交通安全的相关内容。

实际上就是要求书写一份倡议书。

人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。

动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充个人的观点。

注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。

可能用到的词组：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。

5．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
某英语教育网站正在举办有关分享的主题征文活动，请你根据图示内容，结合自己的经历写一篇题为“Sharing”的英语短文。

注意：
1.短文需包括图示内容，并适当发挥。

2.词数80左右，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Sharing
It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other.
【答案】It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like QQ or Wechat.
Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot.
In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.
【解析】
此篇书面表达的话题是“分享”。

首先我们根据给出的图表确定要写的内容的提纲，包括：分享什么？为什么分享？怎么分享？然后根据每个提纲给出的一些关键词，列出写作要点及每个要点可能用到的表达，拓展思维，写出自己的看法。

最后，我们还要注意“分享”的情感教育，让我们学有所获。

文章时态要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。

在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。

同时要注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

6．（·天津中考模拟）假设你是 Susan，在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求，你是否有时感到厌烦？你是怎样解决的？请你根据下列要点提示用英语写一篇短文。

（1）父母要求你每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉
（2）你觉得父母虽太严厉，但理解他们。

（3）你决定与父母多交流，为父母做些家务。

（4）你认为……。

My name is Susan. There are many rules in my
family.____________________________________________________
【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，针对父母对你要求过多你感到厌烦这一问题，你是如何解决的。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, communicate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。

请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点：
1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：
（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。

（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。

（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关
系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。

此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

8．（·安徽省蚌埠龙湖中学中考模拟）当前，我市各学校正在开展“好书伴我成长”活动。

请你根据活动主题并结合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”为题，用英语写一篇约80个单词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。

要求：1.倡议书应包含所有要点；2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。

Growing up with Good books
My dear friend,
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【答案】My Dear Friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will become. However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play
games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。

而非谓语动词结构Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games.和Our study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等复杂从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

9．（·安徽中考模拟）近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。

你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。

假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

要点提示 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;
4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。

注意 :
1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.
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In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours
Daming 【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions.
First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours,
Daming 【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了建议。

通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先应和Sam先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。

文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。

写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。

如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。

为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。

首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。

文章主要分成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。

这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。

语法规范、准确，用词得体。

文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章的结构。

文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

10．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
61.针对运用微信投票越来越流行的现象，英语俱乐部就“是否愿意为别人投票选举”这一话题展开来讨论。

请你根据提示，以“ I ____ （am/am not）willing to vote for others” 为题写一篇短文，向校刊投稿，选择你认同的一种观点，并阐述自己的理由。

注意：1. 根据你认同的方式，将标题补充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相应内容，省略号内容必须补充完整
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名，词数：80-100
3. 短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。

I _____ willing to vote for others
Would you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people have
different ideas. ________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
【答案】I am willing to vote for others
Would you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.
Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.
In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇是一篇议论文，首先要要题目补充完整，说明自己的观点是赞成还是反对。

文章分为三步走：第一段摆出自己的观点；接下来第二段陈述自己的观点，即说明自己的理由；最后一段对自己的观点进行总结。

本篇文章观点明确，在陈述自己观点时，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很条理性和连贯性。

最后In a word, I think….对自己观点进行最后总结。

非常好的一篇文章。

11．（·长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达
健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。

你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。

内容：1、健康饮食；
2、早睡早起，不熬夜；
3、参加运动，强身健体。

要求：
1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、80词左右；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

_______________________________________________________________________________ __
_______________________________________________________________________________ __
_________________________________________________________________
【答案】Healthy habit
I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?
First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not le ast, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.
As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，阐述你认为健康的生活习惯是什么样的。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及last but not least。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

12．（·江西中考模拟）健康的体魄离不开好的生活习惯。

同样，对于学生来说优异成绩的取得也需要好的学习习惯。

请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”为题写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。

提示：1. 养成好的学习习惯的好处；2. 学生中不良学习习惯的表现；3. 对养成好的学习习惯的建议（至少提三条建议）。

要求：1. 内容必须包括以上提示要点可以，适当发挥；2. 90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Develop Good Study Habits
Every student wants to study well, but it′s not
easy.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
【答案】How to Develop Good Study Habits
Every student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. However, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?
First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you aren't feeling sleepy. Second, find a comfortable place to study, but not too comfortable or you may go to sleep! Third, you'd better ask for help when having trouble studying.
Always reme mber these suggestions and follow them. Then you’ll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达要求学生写出如何培养良好的学习习惯。

【详解】
考生要根据提示的3点进行发挥。

在内容方面，首先要写出好的学习习惯的好处，也就是为什么要培养好的学习习惯；其次是在学习中发现的不好的学习习惯；最后提出自己对养。