上海市普陀区2019-2021年三年中考二模英语试卷精选汇编：写作专题

上海市闵行区2019-2021年三年中考二模英语试卷精选汇编
写作专题
上海市闵行区2021年中考二模语英语试题
VII. Writing （作文）（20 分）
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “My funniest family memory”（根据提示, 以“我最有趣的家庭回忆”为题, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。

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提示：回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。

请结合你的亲身经历，描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿，并谈谈感想。

（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。

抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。

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Write at least 60 words on the topic "My funniest family memory"（根据提示, 以"我最有趣的家庭回忆"为题, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。

）
提示：回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。

请结合你的亲身经历, 描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿, 并谈谈感想。

这次的全命题作文是一篇常规的记叙文经历写作, 这类作文学生平时操练已经很多了, 只需要注意funny 这个词在有趣之余其实还有弓I人发笑的意思, 在选材上选择"搞笑〃一点的内容会更加和题。

上海市闵行区2020年中考二模语英语试题
94.Write at least 60 words on the topic “Ways to improve my online learning”（以“提高我在线学习效率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

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在线学习是当代青少年需要掌握的一项重要技能，请结合居家学习期间自己在线学习中的具体事例，谈谈你有些
哪里提高学习效率的方法。

（注意；短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
范文参考
Ways to improve my online learning
Because of the coronavirus（新冠病毒）, almost all of the students took online classes during the winter vacation. But the learning effects vary from one to another. Therefore, we should find ways to improve online learning. And I have some pieces of advice about it.
First of all, we need a peaceful environment. Online learning takes strong self-discipline（自律）. For example, my mom likes to offer me snacks, which sometimes interrupts me. I have asked her to stop doing so.
A quiet and peaceful room can help us stay focused. What’s more, we should catch every chance to communicate with our teachers online. Different from school learning, we can’t easily find our teachers to ask questions, so we have to solve all our problems during the classes. By doing this, we can have no confusion after class.
These are my own ways to improve online learning. You can try taking my advice, and get better results in this period of time.
上海市闵行区2019年中考二模语英语试题
41.Write at least 60 word s on the topic “▲makes my life better”. (参考以下图示，结合你的实际，发挥你的想象，选取其中一个方面，以“▲使我的生活更美好为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

写作前先请你把题目补充完整。

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六、Writing
41.【答案】Modern technology makes my life better
Modern technology makes my life better; tools are the milestones of the technology as well as human beings progress.
Men used to cut trees with hand saw. But now, by using electronic saw they can cut down a tree in only a few minutes. Another example is more vivid: You have something urgent which has to be informed to your friend whose house is two hour's ride away. You probably want to make a phone call. But no telephone is installed in your friend's home. What could you do? Nowadays, with modern technology advancing, using internet is popular with us. Some years ago, people had to get what they wanted through looking into a lot of information; at last people could become tired and spent too much time. Now, if you use Internet, all becomes a piece of cake. Only by clucking, you will gain what you expect.
We all hope that modern technology will reach a higher level, because modern technology makes life more convenient indeed.
【考点】命题作文，提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，现代科技让我的生活更美好现代技术让我的生活更美好；工具是技术和人类进步的里程碑。

以前人们用手锯砍树。

但现在，通过使用电锯，他们只需几分钟就能砍倒一棵树。

本文人称主要第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时。

文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。

【点评】本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中by using electronic ，during the race，is popular with ，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了Now, if you use Internet, all becomes a piece of cake. Only by clucking, you will gain what you expect. 条件状语从句We all hope that modern technology will reach a higher level, because modern technology makes life more convenient indeed. 宾语从句和原因状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少。