英语写作
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when the receiver of an action
is more important than the doer,the passive voice is preferable. Jack's house was decorated with a red clock,which looked harmonious whth the other furniture. Another student dormitory will be built next year in Wuhan Polytechnic University.
In enumerating things or ideas ,we should start from the important and end with the most important ,or in the climactic sequence.
For example:In order to potest world peace,she says that she is willing to sacrifice her life ,family and even time. In order to potest world peace,she says that she is willing to sacrifice her time ,life and even family.
The use of verbs in the active voice
What impressed me most was the beautiful scenery in the village. What made a good impression on me was the beautiful scenery in the village.
Placing: the end and the beginning of a
sentence usually attract the reader's attention.
For example:English is more interesting than math in many ways,some students say. Some students say that English is more interesting than math. English,some students say,is more interesting than math.
another example:the active voice is more
natural and emphatic than the passive. The book which had beautiful blue cover was read by an old man.
The old man read the book which had beautiful blue cover.
another example:
While Jack in Beijing,he visited the Great Wall,the Palace Museum and the Zoo.
While Jack in Beijing,he visited the Zoo ,the Palace Museum and the Great Wall.
Making Correct and Effective Sentences
Emphasi Placing s
Climactic sequence The use of verbs in the active voice Subordination Repeating important words Short sentences Balanced sentences Periodic sentences Negative-positive statements Rhetorical questions
another example:
The teacher tells me that Jack can work out the problem. The teacher tells me that the person who can work out the problem is Jack.
Climactic sequence
is more important than the doer,the passive voice is preferable. Jack's house was decorated with a red clock,which looked harmonious whth the other furniture. Another student dormitory will be built next year in Wuhan Polytechnic University.
In enumerating things or ideas ,we should start from the important and end with the most important ,or in the climactic sequence.
For example:In order to potest world peace,she says that she is willing to sacrifice her life ,family and even time. In order to potest world peace,she says that she is willing to sacrifice her time ,life and even family.
The use of verbs in the active voice
What impressed me most was the beautiful scenery in the village. What made a good impression on me was the beautiful scenery in the village.
Placing: the end and the beginning of a
sentence usually attract the reader's attention.
For example:English is more interesting than math in many ways,some students say. Some students say that English is more interesting than math. English,some students say,is more interesting than math.
another example:the active voice is more
natural and emphatic than the passive. The book which had beautiful blue cover was read by an old man.
The old man read the book which had beautiful blue cover.
another example:
While Jack in Beijing,he visited the Great Wall,the Palace Museum and the Zoo.
While Jack in Beijing,he visited the Zoo ,the Palace Museum and the Great Wall.
Making Correct and Effective Sentences
Emphasi Placing s
Climactic sequence The use of verbs in the active voice Subordination Repeating important words Short sentences Balanced sentences Periodic sentences Negative-positive statements Rhetorical questions
another example:
The teacher tells me that Jack can work out the problem. The teacher tells me that the person who can work out the problem is Jack.
Climactic sequence