初三英语书面表达试题类型及其解题技巧含解析

初三英语书面表达试题类型及其解题技巧含解析
一、英语书面表达
1．近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。

请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减
少对空气的污染。

要点提示：
（1）我国空气污染的现象。

（至少写2点）
（2）空气污染产生的原因。

（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染的措施。

（至少写2点）
要求：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious
airpollution_____________________________________________________________________ _______
【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。

所提供的
材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，
原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时。

注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有
信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中
适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。

这里had better表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽车。

【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。

这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用的是动词的ing形式。

2．书面表达
假如你是Amy，德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中，
她询问如下信息：1．你家情况； 2.有关餐桌礼仪； 3. 她要承担的家务劳动； 4. …现在，你就她提出的问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！
要求：1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 字数约110词。

Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________ Love，
Amy
【答案】Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear fro m you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.
I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.
As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.
Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.
Love,
Amy
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。

而复杂并列结构In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的
亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达
更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。

3．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。

你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一
定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！
要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。

2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。

100
词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions
to the young.
As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should
arrange both your study and life properly.
Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.
Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study,
you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well
I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate
from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，
as well等。

而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内
容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定
句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。

4．书面表达
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。

对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。

但很多人缺乏
的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。

请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正
能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。

你从他/她身上可以学
到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。

注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实的人名及校名。

Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?
【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the
bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works
hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect
them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞的事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。

结
合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致
问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I
should……，He is……
，so they can……
等句式的应用。

写作
，He always helps……
，I want to……
中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我要点赞的人，接下来介绍他的情况，最后
指出我从他身上学到的东西。

此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5．书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：（1）What was the event?
（2）How did you make it?
（3）What’s your feeling?
要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________________
____
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are
difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn
understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will,
there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me
to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found
I made great progress. My parents
when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult.
and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the
future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I
will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。

题目中用问题的形
式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的
事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。

写
作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的
英语表达出来。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作
时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需
要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。

其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不
能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。

应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行
表达。

句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。

为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词
以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。

文章有以下几个优点：
首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

各部分内容安排合
理，层次清晰。

短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。

其次短文使
用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，
尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。

文章中句式变化丰富，有简
单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。

短文中使用了较丰富的句
型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult
、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

6．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。

假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。

内容包括：应该读什么样的
书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua 【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should
read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
e books and read good books.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read mor
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开
头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡
议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

7．李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。

假如你是李华, 请你
给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。

内容须包含以下所有要点：
1. 中秋节的时间；
2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；
3, 我最期待的活动。

要求：1.80--100词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）； 2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。

Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to
you.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-
Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest.
With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.
For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious.
They look like the moon, big and round.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。

全文
可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的
活动。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习
惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together，enjoy the full
moon， share our stories等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连
贯。

8．中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。

读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。

请根据以下要点提示，以“Growing up with Reading”
为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或—首诗，并建议大家多读
书，读好书。

要点提示：
读书的重要性
1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；
2. 提升自我，增强自信……
读过的一本书或一首诗1. 作品内容简介；
2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。

多读书，读好书
1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；
2. 多读经典文学作品……
注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。

3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：classic 经典作品；open up one’s eyes
开阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。

Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics.
【答案】Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.
These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book's writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816.She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.
【解析】
这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己读过的一本书。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材
料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗
漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一，三人称，一般现在时态和过去
时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语
意连贯。

9．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100词．
丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩．请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程，按内容及
要求，用英文完成写作．
内容包括：
1．Which course（s）do you like？
2．Why do you like it/them？
3．What can you learn from it/them？
写作要求：
1．依据你的兴趣选择课程（数量不限）；
2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名．
Of all the courses，I like __________
________________．
【答案】例文
Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot
of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose
sports.
I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional
Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.
I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious
food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.
I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读。

本题属于材料作文，主要讲述你喜欢的学科、原因以及你从你选择的学科中
学到了什么。

注意时态的运用，灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。

切记不要遗漏要点。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，很好地完成了试题中所规定的内容。

条理清晰。

前三
段分别讲述他所喜欢的学科（体育、剪纸和厨艺），并解释愿意以及收获，最后一段讲述
这些学科对他的生活的意义。

3.高分亮点：
单词短语：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb
do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面。

高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引导的表语从句。

【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点
中可能要用到的表达，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork,
want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词
时，形容词放后面等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段
之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡
平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法
结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

10．书面表达
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”
----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》
“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”
----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。

但既然选择了远方，
便只顾风雨兼程。

所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。

请以
Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。

要点提示：
1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；
2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；
3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；
4.补充自己的观点。

写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may
feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes
we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal.
But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves
stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can
learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many
difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these
challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。

主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学
习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。

2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何
）。

承接文章开头，句意完
实现自己的目标（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…
整，避免汉语式英语，叙述条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：
高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。

高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。