作文书面表达微技能——复杂句式+词语替换+读后续写语料库高考英语复习之精品课件

一、书面表达复杂句式
5. 使用动名词 When we arrived at the farm, we were warmly welcomed. (一般) On our arriving at the farm, we were warmly welcomed. (高级) The driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the r oad. (一般) The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on th e road. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
7. 使用名词性从句 He didn’t turn up. It disappointed everybody. (一般) The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody. ( 高级) The little girl knows so many things. It is really surprising. (一般) What makes me surprised is that the little girl knows so many things.(高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
12. 使用介词短语 It was snowing heavily, but the workers went on with the work. (一 般) In spite of the heavy snow, the workers went on with the work. (高 级) He doesn’t give us answers immediately. He encourages us to think by ourselves. (一般) Instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
17. 状语前置 The girls felt tired but happy. They rode bikes to the school. （一般） Tired but happy, the girls rode bikes to the school. （高级） We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.(一般) Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
4. 使用过去分词 She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般) Followed by many students, she walked out of the room. (高级) Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (一般) Once seen, it can never be forgotten. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
3. 使用不定式 I hurried to school by bike and found the gate was locked. (一般) I hurried to school by bike, only to find the gate locked. (高级) It is reported that his latest novel has been translated into several foreign languages. (一般) His latest novel is reported to have been translated into several foreign languages. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
13. 使用with复合结构 The elderly lady got on the train and carried a heavy bag in her hand. (一般) The elderly lady got on the train, with a heavy bag in her hand. (高 级) There was only 30 minutes to go before the train left. I had to take a taxi to the station.(一般) With only 30 minutes to go before the train left, I had to take a taxi to the station. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
15. 使用感叹句 We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一 般) How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing very well! (高级) He leads us to a wonderful world of “why”. (一般) What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to! (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
1. 改变时态 The bell is ringing now. (一般) There goes the bell. (高级) The competition is held in our school once a year. (一般) This annual event has been held in our school for years. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
6. 使用现在分词 After he had finished his homework, he went home. (一般) Having finished his homework, he went home. ( 高级) The students headed for their destination by bus. They were talking and laughing all the way. (一般) The students headed for their destination by bus, talking and laughing all the way. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
16. 使用强调句 Our Ah Fu had saved my little sister bravely. (一般) It was our Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely. (高级) He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (一般) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. (高级)
2023 作文02 书面表达复杂句式词语替换读后续写语料库”
一、书面表达复杂句式 二、写作高级词汇替换 三、书面表达一句多译 四、读后续写高级语料 四、读后续写增分结构
一、书面表达复杂句式
依据高考英语书面表达评分细则，是否“使用较复杂 结构”是衡量一篇书面表达“具备较强的语言运用能力” 的重要标志之一。要提高语言表达的档次，在复杂结构上 就不能一味地使用简单句和陈述句，而应该根据实际情况 灵活运用所学各种结构。正如在绿荫场上，既要有长传冲 调，又要有短传渗透、下底传中、中路包抄，只有这样丰 富的战术才能擒敌制胜。同样，复杂结构有助于考生在高 考中出类拔萃，赢得高分。
一、书面表达复杂句式
14. 使用独立主格结构 If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一般) Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级) After they had done everything, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. (一般) Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
2. 改变语态 People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级) The two pictures tell us different people celebrate Earth Day in different ways. (一般) As can be seen from the two pictures, different people celebrate Earth Day in different ways. (高级)
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8. 使用状语从句 I won’t believe what he says. (一般) No matter what he says, I won’t believe. (高级) When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般) The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
11. 使用倒装句 More than 300 shops are along this 800-metre—long street. (一般) Along this 800-metre-long street are more than 300 shops. (高级) We can have enough energy to study better only in this way. (一般) Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
10. 使用虚拟语气 The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. ( 一般) But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk. (高级) I wasn’t invited to the party, so I didn’t attend it. (一般) If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it. (高级)
一、书面表达复杂句式
9. 使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般) The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. ( 高级) During the trip some students told funny jokes. The jokes made the others very happy. (一般) During the trip some students told funny jokes, which made the others very happy. (高级)