【英语】 中考英语书面表达基础知识汇编及练习测试题(word)1
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【英语】中考英语书面表达基础知识汇编及练习测试题(word)1
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1.假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
要点提示如下:(1)几个月前,奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞(do square dancing)。
(2)从那时起,奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。
(3)现在,奶奶比以前健康了,有了很多朋友。
(4)有些邻居有意见,认为音乐很吵,无法入睡。
(5)你认为人们可以跳广场舞,但……
要求:(1)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(2)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.
In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。
要注意随着文章推进时态的变化,一开始应该选择一般过去时,而后面应该选用一般现在时,最后表达自己观点的时候也应该使用一般现在时。
人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致关系,构思文章框架,列举出可能会用到的好词好句,记住千万不能漏写信息要点。
参考词汇就是必用词汇,一定要运用到文章当中。
在写作中注意运用恰当的连词,使文章更加顺畅,自然。
2.书面表达
假如你是九年级学生李华,你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。
请你根据以下信息,给Billy回封电子邮件,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点:
1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试(physical test)做准备。
2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况:
(1)每天锻炼的时间:不到一个半小时。
(2)偶尔不锻炼的原因:作业多,没时间。
(3)擅长的体育运动:球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.
___________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homew ork that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,给Billy回封电子邮件,介绍自己平时的锻炼情况,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I am busy……,because I have……,Doing exercise can help……,So I advise you to……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关
系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信,接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况,最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。
此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3.最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示,学生近视率仍维持在高位水平,且越来越低龄化。
请根据下表所提示的内容,用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的观点。
参考词汇:近视的 shortsighted
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。
根据题干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作,人称用第三
人称复数和第一人称。
内容包括:学生近视原因:1.睡眠不足(not enough)2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等(for a long time)防止近视的方法:1.做眼睛保健操,多进行体育活动(eye exercises)2.养成正确的用眼习惯(have the good habit of)个人观点:如:我认为,我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性,尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。
(I think ⋅⋅⋅;try one's best to do sth.)。
常用的重点句型和短语有:sb. spend some time doing sth.,in order to do sth.,try to do sth.,the importance of…等。
4.写作
假定你是李华,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。
请你根据博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法。
2. 陈述自己的理由。
3. 提出至少2条建议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her
have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,对学生家长的博客进行回复。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some all-A students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头表明自己的看法,接下来陈述自己的理由,最后介绍自己的建议。
此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
5.近来,美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。
你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。
假如你是大明,请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。
要点提示 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;
4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。
注意 :
1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________
In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours
Daming 【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours,
Daming 【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信,告诉他如何学好汉语,题目中从四个方面提出了建议。
通过审题可知,这是要求写一封建议信,内容应包括以下几个方面:首先应和Sam先做一个交流,然后引出写信的目的;接下来给出具体的建议,依据题目中给出的这四条,用正确的英语表达出来,还应注意补充一些内容,使文章更加充实;最后写一个适当的结尾,如希望建议对你有帮助等。
文章应使用一般现在时,根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。
写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。
应从句子的整体结构考虑,写完整的句子。
如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主,简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。
为提升文章档次,可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。
语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文章意思连贯,表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信,对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。
首先短文内容完整,包括了题目中要求的所有信息。
文章主要分成三个部分:第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题,并介绍写信的目的;第二段中是提出的具体的建议,这是这篇文章的主体,所在篇幅最大。
这一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等词,叙述条理、有层次;最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。
其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称,句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。
语法规范、准确,用词得体。
文章中的语句以简单句结构为主,也使用了并列句和复合句,调整了文章的结构。
文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。
6.4月23日是“世界读书日”,你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书,读好书”的活动。
假如你是李华,请你写一封倡议书,向全体同学发出号召。
内容包括:应该读什么样的书,以及读书的意义。
提示词语:story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should
read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read mor e books and read good books.
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,但写作时要按照应用文格式写,写作时承接短文开头,写出对学生的倡议。
例文点评:例文采用的是一段式,写的是阅读的好处,时态采用的是一般现在时,描述倡议时,描写细致,条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:Firstly;Secondly;Finally;a good way to do sth;broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。
7.写作
某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文,标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”,请你写一篇英文稿件,内容需包括以下要点:
1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do?
4. Why did it make him/her happy?
5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意:1.词数:100左右(题目不计入总词数)。
2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。
【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural
area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.
In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析:这是一篇给定标题的材料作文,需要逐条完成要点问题的回答,描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历,是一篇记叙文,首先要读懂5个问题,其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起,变成一篇短文,同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。
写作亮点:既然这是一篇记叙文,就应该完整地呈现故事,需要加上必要的背景,指明时
间(Last summer),地点(in rural area),简要概括事件(teach children English),这是文章首句的点睛之笔,信息量丰富。
短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少,例如“adjust to…”(调整以适应…),“as time went by”(随着时间的流逝),“made great progress”(取得巨大进步),“keep on learning”(继续学习),“In a word”(总而言之)等等短语使用正确。
在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度,表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与,这样使得这篇文章结构完整,表意更加清晰。
8.书面表达
假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。
俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式,并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。
请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件,告诉她俱乐部的活动情况,并说说网购图书的好处。
写作要点:
1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。
2介绍活动的情况:
(l)上周五,俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。
(2)本周五的下午3点,大家将共同交流读书的体会。
(3)同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。
3说一说网上购书有什么好处。
写作要求:
1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4至少80词。
Dear Angel,
How are you doing?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy
【答案】Dear Angel,
How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。
Last Friday,we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy 【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文,向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动,并且告诉外教同学们现在喜欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。
根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room 中which引导非限制性定语从句。
增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。
审好题是写好书面表达的关键。
审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。
有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。
通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。
一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。
使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。
同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。
修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。
这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
9.假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。
提示:陆地上最大的哺乳动物,可以活到80岁。
目前数量在减少,因为:
1)人们砍伐森林,大象渐渐失去家园;
2)人们捕杀大象,获取象牙。
3)应如何保护它们(不少于三条)。
要求:1)恰当运用比较级和最高级;2)80词左右。
倡议书的结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory
Dear classmates
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I believe everyone's contribution (贡献) can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【答案】Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone's contribution (贡献) can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【解析】
【详解】
本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。
文章共分为三个方面的内容,首先描述大象想在所处的现状,然后说明出现这种状况的原因,最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。
时态主要为一般现在时。
提出倡议时可以使用W e can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建议的句子。
写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型,以免出现语法错误,为使句子具有连贯性,可以适当使用连词。
本篇文章内容完整,符合材料要求,Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级;Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词的使用使文章具有层次性,条理清晰。
并且一些连词的使用,比如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性,是一篇不错的文章。
10.书面表达。
76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论,为此你采访了一些同学(结果见下表)。
请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论,并阐述你的观点。
注意:(1)短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
(2)你的观点至少两条;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:尊重respect
短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.
【解析】
试题分析:英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论,采访了一些同学参与讨论,写出他们的观点及自己的观点。
因为是叙述同学的现在的观点,所以句子应该用一般现在时,叙述同学的观点用第三人称,叙述自己的观点用第一人称。
注意不要遗漏要点,所写的句子应该符合英语语法,不能是汉语式的句子,要使用一些高级词汇及句式。
写作亮点:短文用了一些短语和句式,如:do a survey about sth关于某事做调查;respect their parents,尊敬他们的父母;look after照顾;make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的计划;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。
用了宾语从句,
如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点,也是提分的经典句子。
考点:材料作文。