中考英语同义句转换专题复习+练习

中考英语同义句转换专题复习+练习
中考英语同义句转换专题复习及练习
【考点分析】
同义句一般考察的是句型的转换，或近义词的转换。

高频考点
1.表结果so….that +句子= too … (adj) to do= not …(adj反义词) enough to do He is so weak that he can’t play football.
= He is___ weak ____play football.
= He is not _____ ____ to play football.
2. so that….=in order to do /in order that= so as to do=to do =for doing
He got up early so that he could catch the early bus.
=He got up early to catch the early bus.
=He got up early so as to catch the early bus.
3. if not =unless
She won’t improve her handwriting if she doesn’t have enough practice.
=She won’t improve her handwriting unless she has enough practice.
4. did sth… after/when=didn’t do until
They left the place after they were 8.
=They didn’t leave the place until they were 8.
5. 四个花费
人 + spend + 钱/ 时 + (in)doing sth /on sth。

It + takes + （人）+ 时间 + to do sth
物 + cost + （人）+ 钱 + to do sth
人 + pay + 钱 + to sb/ for sth
6. be held= take place举办
7. 现在完成时中瞬间动词转换为延续性动词，如 :
join ---- have been in
became a lawyer--- have been a lawyer---have worked as a lawyer
8. used to do sth = often/usually did sth = did sth … in the past
9.high=in height EG: It is 10 meters in height. (wide= in width ; long= in length)
10. remove = take away
11． 600 square meters in size == have/cover an area of 600 square meters
12. you mustn’t do sth == be not allowed to do = Don’t do sth
13. be good at 擅长于 = do well in 【反义】 be poor at 拙劣于 = do badly in
14. care for =look after= take care of 关爱，照顾
10. stop…from = keep…from = prevent…form阻止某事发生
11. set out = set off = start/leave
12．五个成功做某事
do sth. successfully,
succeed in doing sth.;
be successful in sth.
manage to do sth. ;
be able to do sth.
以及失败fail to do sth.(fail in a test)
13.in my opinion = I think
14. be responsible for =be in charge of = take charge of 对…负责
15. make an apology to sb. for doing=say sorry to sb. for sth 想某人道歉
16. purchase sth. for money=buy sth. for money(注意和cost、spend的区别)
17. be made up of= consist(s) of 由…组成
18. prefer(red）A to B= like(d) A better than B 喜欢A胜过B
prefer to do A rather than do B=prefer to doing A to doing B 宁愿做A事情而不做B事情
19. besides A= in addition to A =What more, …除A以外（还有）
20. do harm to…= be bad for…对…有害
21. improve a lot … = make progress … 在…有进步
22. run(be) out of= use up 用完
23. consider doing = think about doing 考虑
24. decide to do= make a decision to do
25. escape from= run away from逃跑;
26. immediately= at once=right away=in no time 立即
27be held= take place举办
28. when he was over sixty= in his sixties
★案例分析
1. John always keeps calm and knows what he should do when in trouble. (保持句意基本不变) John always keeps calm and knows ________ ________ do when in trouble.
【正确答案】what to
【题目解析】宾语从句改为简单句用疑问词+to do
2. My friend Peter looked after my pet dog while I was on holiday last month. (保持句意不变) My friend Peter_______ _______ my pet dog while I was on holiday last month.
【正确答案】……cared for
【题目解析】……同义词的转换，look after = care for 照顾，注意过去时态。

3. Alice took up French in college in order to communicate with friends in Paris.(句意不变)
Alice took up French in college _________ _________ she could communicate with friends in Paris.
【正确答案】……so that
【题目解析】……表示“因此，所以”后接一个完整的句子，用 so that.
4. Our English teacher likes black coffee better than green tea. (保持句意基本相同)
Our English teacher_________ black coffee _________ green tea.
【正确答案】prefers to
【题目解析】考察同义句型比起。

更喜欢。

5. The speaker spoke loudly. All audience could hear him.(合并为一句)
The speaker spoke loudly ______ _______all the audience could hear him.
【正确答案】so that
【题目解析】由题意可知是表示目的，后面接的又是句子所以是so that
6. Tom’s cousin does a part-time job. He can get more working experience.(保持原句意思) Tom’s cousin does a part-time job to get more working experience.
【正确答案】in order
【题目解析】由前面两个简单句关系是表目的的，表目的的短语在这里用 in order to
8. The cook was too busy to notice the overcooked soup. (保持句意不变)
The cook was ________ busy________ he didn’t notice the overcooked soup.
【正确答案】so that
【题目解析】结果状语从句so+adj+that 从句
9. Mr. Green was surprised that his son didn't tell anyone that he was staying out late. （保持句意基本不变）
To Mr. Green's_____________, no one was____________of his son's staying out late.
【正确答案】 surprise; told.
【题目解析】此题考查to one’s +n.令某人…的是，故surprised 变为名词surprise,后面由主动变为被动，tell变为told.
10. Brush your teeth regularly, or you will get toothache sooner or later. （保持句意不变）
You will get toothache sooner or later _________ you ________ your teeth regularly.
【正确答案】unless brush
【题目解析】根据题意“有规律地刷牙，否则你迟早会牙痛”，那么同义句改成“除非你有规律地刷牙，你迟早会牙疼”,正确答案为unless brush（unless也可记成if not）。

11. The telephone rang and Jerry answered it immediately. （保持句意不变）
The telephone rang and Jerry answered it ________ _________.
【正确答案】at once
【题目解析】根据题意“immediately”翻译为“立刻，马上”，考纲
12. We need to design a program in order to make computers recognize our voice.(保持句意不变)
We need to design a program _______ _______computers can recognize our voice.
【正确答案】so that
【题目解析】考察同义句的改写，需要把原句中的in order to换掉，很容易确定是so that
13. They created a Children’s Fund to provide money for those who are ill. (保持句意不变)
They______ ______ a Children’s Fund to provide money for those who are ill.
【正确答案】set up
【题目解析】把create改成同意词组，可知这句话意思是建造一个儿童基金，所以是set up
14. We cannot drink salt water. We cannot take a shower with it, either. (保持句意不变)
We can_______drink salt water_______take a shower with it.
【正确答案】neither，nor
【题目解析】我们不能喝盐水也不能用盐水洗澡，两者都不。

常见的同义词组转换
1. Johnson had a chemistry lab of his own.
The chemistry lab____________ ____________ Johnson himself.
2. They are too tired to walk farther.
They are ____________tired that they ____________ walk farther.
3. My elder sister left university at the age of thirty.（保持句意基本不变）
My elder sister____________in che university____________ she was thirty.
4. Kitty and her cousins are all keen on Korean love TV series．（保持句意基本不变）
Kitty and her cousins are all____________ ____________Korean love TV series.
5. Susie went to bed after the TV play was over.（保持句意基本不变）
Susie ____________go to bed____________the TV play was over.
6. Chinese is more popular than Japanese．（保持句意基本不变）
Japanese is____________ popular____________Chinese.
7. It took her whole life to write the world-famous play.保持句意基本不变）
She____________ her whole life____________ the world-famous play.
8. Last week she spent l,000 dollars altogether buying clothes online．（保持句意基本不变） Last week she spent l, 000 dollars____________ ____________ buying clothes online.
9. You must be quick, if not, you'll miss the early bus．（保持句意基本不变）
____________ quick, ____________you'Il miss the early bus.
10. You should apologize to the old man for your rough words．（保持句意基本不变）
You should ____________ ____________ to the old man for your rough words.
11. They crossed the road after the light turned green．（保持旬意基本不变）
They____________ cross the road____________ the light turned green.
12. The mother chose some beautiful clothes for her daughter.（保持句意基本不变）
The mother
some beautiful clothes for her daughter
13，The boy can take only one of the two toys．（保持句意基本不变）
The boy can take____________ this toy____________ that one.
14. The story happened in a small town on a rainy afternoon．（保持句意基本不变）
The story ____________ ____________ in a small town on a rainy afternoon.
15.My brother joined the Party three years ago．（保持句意基本不变）
My brother____________ ____________ a Party member for three+ years.
16. It is good for Uncle Sam to stop smoking．（保持句意基本不变）
It is good for Uncle Sam to____________ smoking.
17. We will have no water to drink unless we learn to save water.（保持句意基本不变）
We will have no water to drink____________ we____________ learn to save water.
18. His fans went to the airport to say goodbye to him，（保持句意基本不变）
His fans went to the airport to____________ him____________ .
19. Tom is good at not only English but also Chinese．（保持句意不变）
Tom is good at____________ English____________ Chinese.
参考答案
1.belonged to
2.so can’t
3.stayed until
4.fond of
5.didn’t until
6.less than
7.spend on
8.in all
9.Be or 10.say sorry 11.didn’t until 12.pick out 13.either or 14. took place 15.has been 16.give up 17.if don’t 18.see off 19.both and
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．书面表达
为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。

请你以足球迷的身份，根据下
列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

注意：1. 词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：梅西 Messi
Dear classmates,
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.
Thank you for your attention.
【答案】Dear classmates，
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．
I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．
Thank you for your attention．
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。

要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。

根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。

3．环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。

某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。

提示词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action
提示问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our
daily life? ● What’s your wis h?
Now there are many environmental
problems._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.
I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.
I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to mak e a better place to live.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。

【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

4．假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结東五一小长假的旅游回到学校。

请你根据以下
内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

(1)5月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。

(2)早上7：30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。

(3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。

(4)第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。

(5)我的旅游感受……
参考词汇:京津城际铁路 Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway
王府井大街 Wangfujing Street
故宫 the Palace Museum
北京烤鸭 Peking Roast Duck
要求：
(1)词数:80～100个。

(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

A Trip to Beijing
During the May Day Holiday，
I______________________________________________________________
【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing.
First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.
On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most
famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.
During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.
【解析】
【详解】
以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

记叙自己的一次旅行，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。

用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。

在发表你的看法的时候，写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖，不能有遗漏或省略，同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。

注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。

变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。

注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。

变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。

We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.
.等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。

5．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。

最近他对母亲节你在博客里
发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信：
1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱的伟大
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.
If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】
根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。

时态是一般现在时。

人称是第一人称和第三人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。

我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱的伟大
第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。

6．假如你是李华，是某英文电台“ Say it”栏目的兼职编辑。

最近你收到一名叫王平的中学生发来的电子邮件，向你们栏目组求助。

请你根据电子邮件内容给她回复一封电子邮件，帮助她解答困惑。

Dear Li Hua,
I' m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know
Wechat has become a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 's worse, they have changed my password（密码）so that I can’t use it. There has been a "cold war" between us for over a week. What should I do?
Yours,
Wang Ping
要求：1．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2．词数80-100左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：欺骗tick；许可permission
Dear Wang Ping,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using
Wechat.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
I believe things will get better,
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Wang Ping
I‘m sorry to hear that you are havi ng problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, your problem is very common . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.
You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try telling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t us e it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.
I believe things will get better.
Yours
Li Hu 【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。

本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。

根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意
连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。

作者根据题目要求,层次非常的清晰。

短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。

文章中还用了一些比较好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?
7．三年快乐而充实的初中生活结束了，你将进入高中(中职)学校学习。

展望未来，你对高中(中职)生活充满期待。

请以“I Expect My School Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

要求：（1）内容要点：①生活、学习环境(餐厅，图书馆，运动场……)；②师生、同学关系；
③生活多彩、学业进步；④补充一点自己的想法。

（2）文章不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可以适当发挥。

（3）提示词：get along with；colorful(adj.)；knowledge；habit
I Expect My School Life
I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________
【答案】One possible version: （118 words）
I Expect My School Life
I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me.
I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.
As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。

动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。

写作中注意将以前的自己和现在的自己介绍清楚，并介绍一下自己的愿望。

根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，注意时态和主谓一致等问题。

写作中注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

8．(B) 《朗读者》第五期节目中，主持人在开场白中说道：“我们的一生，会经历很多的第一次，难忘而又宝贵，它意味着我们的成长。

”请谈谈你人生中最难忘的“第一次”，或许是第一次做家务、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并说说你从中学到了什么或有哪些收获。

不少于80词。

（文中不得出现真实的人名和校名）
【答案】The First Cooking
Last weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn't know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn't lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.
【解析】
【分析】
本文为材料作文，需要写出第一次做某事，人生中有许多第一次，可以挑选一件让自己感觉深刻，并且从中学到了许多东西的事件来写，这样的话，贴近生活实际，学生有话可说。

【详解】
本文写了我的第一次做饭，先交代背景知识，因为父母不在家，所以我不得不自己动手，动手做的过程中，由于没有经验，理所当然地失败了。

但是，我不能气馁，要从失败中找原因，从哪里跌倒，就从哪里起来，所以，第二周，我让妈妈教我做菜，获得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放弃，就能获得成功。

【点睛】
本篇作文贴近实际，每个人都有第一次，挑选一件自己有话可说的来写即可。

但是需要注意文章逻辑，语篇顺序，注意连接词的使用和长短句结合。

这样的话，文章符合英文造句习惯，更容易获得高分。

9．书面表达。

因学习压力大，部分中学生的身体健康状况有所下降，这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视。

假若你是来自九年级三班的李华，请根据以下内容，用英语写一份不少于80词的倡议书。

建议大家积极多参加体育活动，提高身体素质。

不得出现真实姓名。

要点：1. 锻炼身体的好处： strong， healthy...
2. 锻炼身体的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...
3. 请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议。

要求：1. 内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers.
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_______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
【答案】Dear shoolmates,
I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”
There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us.
In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文。

讲述锻炼身体的好处、锻炼的方式，并建议大家积极参加体育活动。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。