高考英语二轮复习：如何写求助信 学案

如何写求助信
写作任务
假定你是李华，正在新西兰某校做交换生。

为了弘扬中国传统音乐，你校来自中国的交
换生将举办一场音乐会。

请给好友Fred写封邮件，请他就有关事宜给予帮助，要点包括：
1.举办目的；
2.求助内容；
3.约定时间和地点。

注意：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Fred,
Yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求给好友写封邮件，就音乐会的有关事宜请对方给予帮助，体裁属于应用文。

二、谋篇布局
本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出，根据提示可将正文分为三部分：
第一部分：表明写信意图；
第二部分：说明问题，提出请求；
第三部分：表达感谢，期待回复。

三、组织语言
第一部分：表明写信意图。

普通表达I’m writing to ask you for some help with...
高级表达★I wonder if you could do me a favor and help with...
★I am sorry to bother you,but I have to ask you for/to do me a favor.
第二部分：说明问题，提出请求。

★To help those who...,we plan to hold such a concert.
★To make the concert...,I need your help.
★I’d like you to help...
普通表达★We’re in need of...and I hope you can talk to the school music club so they can provide...for us.
★If possible,let’s discuss it together...
★I believe you can help make the concert...
高级表达★The concert aims to(想要)help...learn more about...
★I’d appreciate it if you could help...
★Lacking...,I sincerely hope you can contact the school music club so they can
provide...for us.
★I wonder/am wondering if it’s convenient for us to have a discussion
together...
★With your generous help,I believe the concert...第三部分：表达感谢，期待回复。

★I’d be thankful.
普通表达★Thank you for your kindness.
★Looking forward to your reply.
★Please reply to me as soon as possible.★I’d appreciate any help.
高级表达★I would appreciate it if you could lend me a helping hand.
★Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply.★Your early reply would be highly appreciated.
范文展示
普通范文
Dear Fred,
I’m writing to ask you for some help with the Chinese traditional music concert to be held in our school.
To help those who are interested in Chinese traditional music learn more about it,we plan to hold such a concert.To make the concert more attractive,I need your help.First,I’d like you to help advertise the concert.Moreover,we’re in need of some equipment and I hope you can talk to the school music club so they can provide some for us.If possible,let’s discuss it together in our classroom tomorrow afternoon.I believe you can help make the concert unforgettable.
Thank you for your kindness.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
高级范文
Dear Fred,
I wonder if you could do me a favor and help with the preparation of the concert to be held in our school.
The concert aims to help foreign students learn more about Chinese traditional music.First, I’d appreciate it if you could help advertise it.Moreover,lacking some equipment,I sincerely hope you can contact the school music club so they can provide some for us.I wonder if it’s convenient for us to have a discussion together in our classroom tomorrow afternoon.With your generous help,I believe the concert will be unforgettable.
Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练
假定你是校英语报兼职编辑李华，请你给外教Miss Christine写一封邮件，请她给新开设的栏目Sharing Feelings提一些建议。

要点包括：
1.栏目介绍；
2.求助内容；
3.栏目意义。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

答案
One possible version:
Dear Miss Christine,
I’m writing with the hope that you can give us some advice on the newly-opened column Sharing Feelings of our school English newspaper.
The column aims to help students express their feelings on their school life and their inner mind.As you are popular with the students and know quite a lot about them,you surely have some wonderful ideas about the specific content and how to make it benefit the students more.This column will help students release stress and enjoy a better school life.I believe your advice will make this column more beneficial.
Thanks for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua。