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（警示式结尾）
三、观点论证类 （agree or disagree）
Is money all powerful?
Is thrift necessary in modern society?
Some people think that machine translation can replace our English study. Do you agree?
一、比较选择类(A or B)
比较两个事物的优缺点并表明倾向 Television is a Better Source of Entertainment A balanced diet: A better way to stay healthy Is a big university superior to a small university? Home education outweighs oversea education for
（第二个角度：教师）
We must search for an immediate solution, because the competition for high scores becomes so intense that it actually defeats the academic goals of education.
（阐述理由，对比优缺点）
True , you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually, for instance, getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals. But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to esroutine life.
What’s your opinion about reducing children’s excessive assignment?
提示：第一段：背景(随着…有些人 的观点及他们的理由…), 我的观点。 引言句（现象陈述法，数据法，提 问法，对立法）开头，引出要评论的 事物，说明别人的看法，引出自己的 观点。
More pressure from academic studies DOES (or DOES NOT do) good to us
提示：第一段：大背景(上义背景，自己的态度： 重要？有利？有害？)用引言句（概括式，描写， 数据，提问）引出要讨论的事物或现象，表明作 者对这一事物的基本看法。某种程度上就是再现 标题所给的“定论”。
第三段：结论.如果阐述重要性，则宜用建议式 或展望式。如阐述其危害性，则用警示式结尾。
On Today ‘s Education
One of the main problems with today’s education is that too much emphasis is placed on the test score. It has become the most important criterion for college enrollment. A student, however , creative and intelligent, will not be admitted into a college if his total scores are just one point less than required. It is also one of the crucial factors either in job assignment or in employment competitions.（由面及点入题）
第二段，之所以有利、有害、重要、有优势原 因有两个，firstly,(topic sentence)+supporting details;主题句承上启下,限定本段内容即重要性 或危害性主要体现在哪些方面，接下来分述危害 性或重要性，注意层次和句式。Secondly,(topic
sentence)+supporting details
The first part (from general to specific从面到 点，从现象到具体讨论的事物，引出自己观点)
I like traveling on my own not only because it gives a great of independence and freedom. Traveling on my own, I’m my own boss, and I can decide when to start on my way, where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy and time for another spot. I can always adjust my plan. On the contrary, in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base. At the sound of the whistle, you have to jump up from a sound sleep and hurry to the gathering place where you are collected. At the sight of the little flag waving, you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to his strict schedule, regardless of the weather or your health condition.
第二段，陈述理由并举例证明 .段 首句承上启下，指出原因或理由，用 拓展句分别加以说明或论述。
第三段,得出结论，提出建议.
批驳观点，阐述自己观点，采用正面立 论法。 第一段：引言句引出要评论的事物或问题， 第二句提出自己的论点。
第二段：段首句承上启下，限定论据范围。
正面论据之一（具有概括性）：用扩展句 加以延伸。
正面论据之二（或反面论据）：用扩展句 加以延伸。
第三段：结论，进一步阐述观点。
Can Success be Measured in Terms of Money?
There is a deep-rooted concept in the minds of many people that money is the only yardstick of success. What they do not realize is that there are many types of success, and some are associated with wealth and some not. It is high time that such people opened their eyes and took a good look at the world around them.
graduation? The advantages and disadvantages of taking a part-
time job The positive and negative effects of TV advertisements
第一段:(用现象或事实陈述)引出要比较的两个 事物,用一句话表达自己的观点.//用现象陈述 法、提问法引出比较的事物，主题句指出两个 事物存在着明显的差异或不同点。
The competition for high scores among students becomes intense. Students find themselves concentrating more on strategies to achieve high scores than on acquiring the knowledge. They will play truant of some subsidiary courses, skip over the substance which will not be tested on, even pump teachers for hints on upcoming exams.
第二段:主题句承接首段观点,限定本段内容.然 后比较两事物的优缺点.(Topic sentence+ First, second, third, the advantage of A, but the disadvantage of B. + supporting details)//直接 评述A事物的主要特点+扩展句，B 事物的主 要特点+扩展句。
young children Will Phones kill letter writing? Where to live: in the city or in the country? Where to eat: in a restaurant or at home? Whether to further study or to find a job soon after
（首尾观点一致，得出结论，进一步阐明观点）
二、意义、重要性、危害性说明类作文
The importance of extracurricular activities
The importance of keeping a good mood
Travel broadens our mind
A major advantage or disadvantage of advertising on TV advertising
（第一个角度：学生）
Teachers are apt to give their students high scores. As their job is judged mainly by the students’ performance in terms of scores, some teachers tend to set easy papers to test their students or narrow down the scope of the exam. Some teachers even leak “accidentally” the exam questions or lower their criterion of scoring. As a result, the test fail to achieve the desired results.
第三段：结论，注意首尾观点一致。//得出倾 向性的结论，表明作者的态度。
Which Mode of Travel Do you Like?
With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter, more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest. While many like to join package tours for convenience, I prefer to travel on my own.
三、观点论证类 （agree or disagree）
Is money all powerful?
Is thrift necessary in modern society?
Some people think that machine translation can replace our English study. Do you agree?
一、比较选择类(A or B)
比较两个事物的优缺点并表明倾向 Television is a Better Source of Entertainment A balanced diet: A better way to stay healthy Is a big university superior to a small university? Home education outweighs oversea education for
（第二个角度：教师）
We must search for an immediate solution, because the competition for high scores becomes so intense that it actually defeats the academic goals of education.
（阐述理由，对比优缺点）
True , you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually, for instance, getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals. But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to esroutine life.
What’s your opinion about reducing children’s excessive assignment?
提示：第一段：背景(随着…有些人 的观点及他们的理由…), 我的观点。 引言句（现象陈述法，数据法，提 问法，对立法）开头，引出要评论的 事物，说明别人的看法，引出自己的 观点。
More pressure from academic studies DOES (or DOES NOT do) good to us
提示：第一段：大背景(上义背景，自己的态度： 重要？有利？有害？)用引言句（概括式，描写， 数据，提问）引出要讨论的事物或现象，表明作 者对这一事物的基本看法。某种程度上就是再现 标题所给的“定论”。
第三段：结论.如果阐述重要性，则宜用建议式 或展望式。如阐述其危害性，则用警示式结尾。
On Today ‘s Education
One of the main problems with today’s education is that too much emphasis is placed on the test score. It has become the most important criterion for college enrollment. A student, however , creative and intelligent, will not be admitted into a college if his total scores are just one point less than required. It is also one of the crucial factors either in job assignment or in employment competitions.（由面及点入题）
第二段，之所以有利、有害、重要、有优势原 因有两个，firstly,(topic sentence)+supporting details;主题句承上启下,限定本段内容即重要性 或危害性主要体现在哪些方面，接下来分述危害 性或重要性，注意层次和句式。Secondly,(topic
sentence)+supporting details
The first part (from general to specific从面到 点，从现象到具体讨论的事物，引出自己观点)
I like traveling on my own not only because it gives a great of independence and freedom. Traveling on my own, I’m my own boss, and I can decide when to start on my way, where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy and time for another spot. I can always adjust my plan. On the contrary, in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base. At the sound of the whistle, you have to jump up from a sound sleep and hurry to the gathering place where you are collected. At the sight of the little flag waving, you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to his strict schedule, regardless of the weather or your health condition.
第二段，陈述理由并举例证明 .段 首句承上启下，指出原因或理由，用 拓展句分别加以说明或论述。
第三段,得出结论，提出建议.
批驳观点，阐述自己观点，采用正面立 论法。 第一段：引言句引出要评论的事物或问题， 第二句提出自己的论点。
第二段：段首句承上启下，限定论据范围。
正面论据之一（具有概括性）：用扩展句 加以延伸。
正面论据之二（或反面论据）：用扩展句 加以延伸。
第三段：结论，进一步阐述观点。
Can Success be Measured in Terms of Money?
There is a deep-rooted concept in the minds of many people that money is the only yardstick of success. What they do not realize is that there are many types of success, and some are associated with wealth and some not. It is high time that such people opened their eyes and took a good look at the world around them.
graduation? The advantages and disadvantages of taking a part-
time job The positive and negative effects of TV advertisements
第一段:(用现象或事实陈述)引出要比较的两个 事物,用一句话表达自己的观点.//用现象陈述 法、提问法引出比较的事物，主题句指出两个 事物存在着明显的差异或不同点。
The competition for high scores among students becomes intense. Students find themselves concentrating more on strategies to achieve high scores than on acquiring the knowledge. They will play truant of some subsidiary courses, skip over the substance which will not be tested on, even pump teachers for hints on upcoming exams.
第二段:主题句承接首段观点,限定本段内容.然 后比较两事物的优缺点.(Topic sentence+ First, second, third, the advantage of A, but the disadvantage of B. + supporting details)//直接 评述A事物的主要特点+扩展句，B 事物的主 要特点+扩展句。
young children Will Phones kill letter writing? Where to live: in the city or in the country? Where to eat: in a restaurant or at home? Whether to further study or to find a job soon after
（首尾观点一致，得出结论，进一步阐明观点）
二、意义、重要性、危害性说明类作文
The importance of extracurricular activities
The importance of keeping a good mood
Travel broadens our mind
A major advantage or disadvantage of advertising on TV advertising
（第一个角度：学生）
Teachers are apt to give their students high scores. As their job is judged mainly by the students’ performance in terms of scores, some teachers tend to set easy papers to test their students or narrow down the scope of the exam. Some teachers even leak “accidentally” the exam questions or lower their criterion of scoring. As a result, the test fail to achieve the desired results.
第三段：结论，注意首尾观点一致。//得出倾 向性的结论，表明作者的态度。
Which Mode of Travel Do you Like?
With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter, more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest. While many like to join package tours for convenience, I prefer to travel on my own.