英语作文实用开篇句的改写方法讲解

英语作文实用开篇句的改写方法讲解
Since ①the beginning of the industrial revolution,②techonology and economic growth have conspired to create a world in which the flexing of muscles is more and more ③an option rather than a necessity.
自从工业革命开始后，科技和经济发展共同创造了一个新世界。

在这个新世界里，锻炼身体越来越成为人们的一种选择，而非迫切需要。

依旧是竞争压力与成绩的例子o╯□╰o
1.竞争压力：①将the beginning of the industrial revolution替换为the social competition becoming more fiercer。

②将techonology and economic growth have conspired to create a world in which the flexing of muscles替换为finding a satisfactory job or standing at a higher stage is necessity for people so that the pressure of competition。

③将an option ...a necessity 替换为 a difficulty...a small problem。

→Since the social competit ion becoming more fiercer, finding a satisfactory job or standing at a higher stage is necessity for people so that the pressure of competition is more and more a difficulty rather than only a small problem.
自从社会竞争愈加激烈后，找到一份令人满意的工作或者站在一个更高的平台对人们来说非常必要。

由此带来的竞争压力越来越成为人们的难题，而非仅仅是个小问题。

接着可以和昨天一样说一下社会竞争带来的问题，1-2句，然后亮明自己观点→第一段结束
2.成绩是否总是有益：
①将the beginning of the industrial revolution替换为the frequency of education。

②将techonology and economic growth have conspired to create a world in which the flexing of muscles替换为there has been an increasing awareness that higher education will bring more oppotunities for us that the progress 。

③将an option ...a necessity 替换为 a means ...an end。

→Since the frquency of education, there has been an increasi ng awareness that higher education will bring more oppotunities for us that the progress is just more and more a means rather than an end.
自从教育普及后，人们越来越清楚意识到接受高等教育会给我们带来更多机遇。

成绩只是手段而非目标。

接下来可以直接多写1-2解释句→第一段结束
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