最新 中考英语书面表达英语期末复习(word)1

最新中考英语书面表达英语期末复习（word）1
一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
1．如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。

请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。

要点提示：
注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势）However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。

【点睛】
本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。

写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。

2．世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。

2019年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。

以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。

参考词汇：近视 nearsighted
注意： 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in
China.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______
【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。

所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。

主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时。

注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。

本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.
【高分句型二】
And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。

when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。

3．书面表达
假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信
询问讨论情况。

请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：
1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕
4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、
参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾
词数：100词左右。

开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。

此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。

请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。

参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。

根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。

内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。

（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。

常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

5．写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。

请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。

2. 陈述自己的理由。

3. 提出至少2条建议。

【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介绍自己的建议。

此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

6．书面表达
初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。

就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。

请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试
2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习
3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；……
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, everyone!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _____
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
【答案】Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.
I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。

审题可知，文章中应主要包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。

题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。

学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。

文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。

句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。

但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。

短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。

句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。

也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾语从句、状语从句等。

短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students can't get on well with
their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。

7．“美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。

自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。

作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere.
At the same time, we shouldn’t bre ak traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【解析】
【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。

这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。

题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。

通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。

根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。

整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we来叙述。

写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。

首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。

文章条理清晰，有层次。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。

8．题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。

”坚持是一种可贵的品格。

生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。

某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。

提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提示问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling
myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

【详解】
1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。

书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。

2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。

比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。

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9．2019年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。

时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on.
Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

10．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计
划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

写作内容：
1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。

写作要求：
1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I
decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.
I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
【解析】
试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。

文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。

所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。

用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。

用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：考查提纲作文。