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Course requirement
• • • • 平时成绩：30％ 二次作业+一次测验+课堂表现 出勤情况：-5分 考试：mainly based on what we have talked about in class
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How to write clear sentence?
• To avoid choppy sentence: • There was a knock at the door. I asked. Nobody answered. • There was a knock at the door. I asked who it was but no one answered. • He found the kitchen window open. He put a ladder against the window. He climbed in. • Finding the kitchen window open, he put a ladder against it and climbed in.
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How to write clear sentence?
• To avoid missing necessary information: • Shanghai is said to have about eighteen million. • Shanghai is said to have a population of about eighteen million. • Bicycle were ringing all the way to warn others to move out of the way. • Bicycle bells were ringing all the way to warn others to move out of the way.
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• We should give the classroom. • We should give the classroom a thorough cleaning and a good airing. • Lubrication makes the machine. • Lubrication makes the machine work more efficiently.
Practical writing
Juliet Jia
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“On Studies”
• Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an exact man. • 阅读使人充实，讨论使人机智，写作使人 准确。
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• A complex sentence consists of one independent clause and one or more dependent / subordinate clauses （复合句） • What he said made me angry. • The students said that they needed loan. • He denied the fact that he needed a car. • He is the person whom i’m looking for. • When I pressed the button, the lift stopped. • Although I have tried many times, tennis is one sport that I cannot master. 无忧PPT整理发布
• If a color-blind woman marries a man with normal vision, all the daughters will have normal vision, but all the sons will be color-blind.
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Simple sentence
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• 并列连词：and, but, for, so, or, nor, neither…nor, not only…but also • 连接副词：however, therefore, moreover, nevertheless, besides, furthermore, then, consequently • All figures have been checked; however, the totals are still wrong.
• The old and the young, the man and the woman, the strong and the weak unite in defending their country. • The students can express fluently and exactly. • The students can express his idea fluently and exactly.
How to write clear sentence?
• Improper shifting in pronouns: • In the article it points out that the air pollution of this city is serious. • The article points out that the air pollution of this city is serious. • If anyone wants to leave the classroom, you’d better leave now. • If anyone wants to leave the classroom, he/ she’d better leave now.
• • • • • 30 teaching hours in total Chapter 1: 写作概述 (4 hours) Word — sentence— paragraph — article Chapter 2: 应用文写作 (16 hours) 1. letters( resignation, thanks, invitation, recommendation，certification，apology, congratulation, complaint) and notes（notes asking for leave, message notes, notes of I.O.U., receipts） (6 hours)
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How to write clear sentence?
• Active voice or passive voice: • A gust of wind scattered the dead leaves in all directions. • The dead leaves were scattered in all directions by a gust of wind. • An old woman was found murdered in a deserted street last night.
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How to write clear sentence?
• To avoid unnatural shifting: • The professor left the classroom after the lecture was finished. • Having finished the lecture, the professor left the classroom. • If one has talents, we will likely to succeed. • If one has talents, s/he will likely to 无忧PPT整理发布 succeed.
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Five sentence pattern
• • • • 主语+系动词+表语 (S+V+P) 主语+不及物动词 (S+V) 主语+及物动词+宾语 (S+V+O) 主语+动词+间接宾语 +直接宾语 (S+V+OI+OD) • 主语+动词+宾语+补语 (S+V+O+C)
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• 2. posters/ public announcements/ notices (2 hours) • 3. Resumes/ Curriculum Vitae (2 hours) • 4. Application letters (4 hours) • 5. Abstract & Summary (2 hours) • Chapter 3: 考试写作 考研图画图表作文写作 (6 hours) • Quiz+作文讲评( 3 hours) • Chapter 5: 课程总结 (1 hours)
variety
• A compound-complex sentence consists of two or more independent clauses and one or more dependent / subordinate clauses
（并列复合句） • she was a bit dizzy at first and then lost consciousness because she didn’t had enough sleep.
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Sentence classification
• • • • Simple sentence Compound sentence Complex sentence Compound-complex sentence
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variety
• Simple sentence: one independent clause • A compound sentence consists of two or more independent clauses (并列句) • Penguins cannot fly, but they can dive into the ocean. • I called for a reservation at a famous restaurant in town．All the tables were taken before the Dragon Boat Festival． • I called for a reservation at a famous restaurant in town，but all the tables were taken before the Dragon Boat Festival．
• Subject + predicate • It makes sense when standing alone. • Two or more subjects called “compound subjects” • A predicate may require an object and an indirect object to complete the meaning. • A predicate may require an object and an objective complement.
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Error correction
• A child running into the busy street. • I have just bought my teacher. • The other type of theft that is common these days, especially burglary. • The other type of theft, the burglary, is especially common these days. • Every advance brings problems that awaits solution.
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Course requirement
• • • • 平时成绩：30％ 二次作业+一次测验+课堂表现 出勤情况：-5分 考试：mainly based on what we have talked about in class
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content
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How to write clear sentence?
• To avoid choppy sentence: • There was a knock at the door. I asked. Nobody answered. • There was a knock at the door. I asked who it was but no one answered. • He found the kitchen window open. He put a ladder against the window. He climbed in. • Finding the kitchen window open, he put a ladder against it and climbed in.
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How to write clear sentence?
• To avoid missing necessary information: • Shanghai is said to have about eighteen million. • Shanghai is said to have a population of about eighteen million. • Bicycle were ringing all the way to warn others to move out of the way. • Bicycle bells were ringing all the way to warn others to move out of the way.
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• We should give the classroom. • We should give the classroom a thorough cleaning and a good airing. • Lubrication makes the machine. • Lubrication makes the machine work more efficiently.
Practical writing
Juliet Jia
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“On Studies”
• Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an exact man. • 阅读使人充实，讨论使人机智，写作使人 准确。
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• A complex sentence consists of one independent clause and one or more dependent / subordinate clauses （复合句） • What he said made me angry. • The students said that they needed loan. • He denied the fact that he needed a car. • He is the person whom i’m looking for. • When I pressed the button, the lift stopped. • Although I have tried many times, tennis is one sport that I cannot master. 无忧PPT整理发布
• If a color-blind woman marries a man with normal vision, all the daughters will have normal vision, but all the sons will be color-blind.
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Simple sentence
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• 并列连词：and, but, for, so, or, nor, neither…nor, not only…but also • 连接副词：however, therefore, moreover, nevertheless, besides, furthermore, then, consequently • All figures have been checked; however, the totals are still wrong.
• The old and the young, the man and the woman, the strong and the weak unite in defending their country. • The students can express fluently and exactly. • The students can express his idea fluently and exactly.
How to write clear sentence?
• Improper shifting in pronouns: • In the article it points out that the air pollution of this city is serious. • The article points out that the air pollution of this city is serious. • If anyone wants to leave the classroom, you’d better leave now. • If anyone wants to leave the classroom, he/ she’d better leave now.
• • • • • 30 teaching hours in total Chapter 1: 写作概述 (4 hours) Word — sentence— paragraph — article Chapter 2: 应用文写作 (16 hours) 1. letters( resignation, thanks, invitation, recommendation，certification，apology, congratulation, complaint) and notes（notes asking for leave, message notes, notes of I.O.U., receipts） (6 hours)
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How to write clear sentence?
• Active voice or passive voice: • A gust of wind scattered the dead leaves in all directions. • The dead leaves were scattered in all directions by a gust of wind. • An old woman was found murdered in a deserted street last night.
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How to write clear sentence?
• To avoid unnatural shifting: • The professor left the classroom after the lecture was finished. • Having finished the lecture, the professor left the classroom. • If one has talents, we will likely to succeed. • If one has talents, s/he will likely to 无忧PPT整理发布 succeed.
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Five sentence pattern
• • • • 主语+系动词+表语 (S+V+P) 主语+不及物动词 (S+V) 主语+及物动词+宾语 (S+V+O) 主语+动词+间接宾语 +直接宾语 (S+V+OI+OD) • 主语+动词+宾语+补语 (S+V+O+C)
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content
• 2. posters/ public announcements/ notices (2 hours) • 3. Resumes/ Curriculum Vitae (2 hours) • 4. Application letters (4 hours) • 5. Abstract & Summary (2 hours) • Chapter 3: 考试写作 考研图画图表作文写作 (6 hours) • Quiz+作文讲评( 3 hours) • Chapter 5: 课程总结 (1 hours)
variety
• A compound-complex sentence consists of two or more independent clauses and one or more dependent / subordinate clauses
（并列复合句） • she was a bit dizzy at first and then lost consciousness because she didn’t had enough sleep.
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来自百度文库
Sentence classification
• • • • Simple sentence Compound sentence Complex sentence Compound-complex sentence
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variety
• Simple sentence: one independent clause • A compound sentence consists of two or more independent clauses (并列句) • Penguins cannot fly, but they can dive into the ocean. • I called for a reservation at a famous restaurant in town．All the tables were taken before the Dragon Boat Festival． • I called for a reservation at a famous restaurant in town，but all the tables were taken before the Dragon Boat Festival．
• Subject + predicate • It makes sense when standing alone. • Two or more subjects called “compound subjects” • A predicate may require an object and an indirect object to complete the meaning. • A predicate may require an object and an objective complement.
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Error correction
• A child running into the busy street. • I have just bought my teacher. • The other type of theft that is common these days, especially burglary. • The other type of theft, the burglary, is especially common these days. • Every advance brings problems that awaits solution.