浙江省杭州市部分学校2020-2021学年上学期九年级英语12月月考试卷分类汇编：书面表达

浙江省杭州市部分学校
2020-2021学年上学期九年级英语12月月考试卷分类汇编
书面表达
2020-2021学年浙江省杭州市余杭区临平第一中学九年级上12月月考英语试卷第二节书面表达(共1小题,满分15分)
假如你是李华,你的朋友Tom将来杭州。

到杭州后,你计划带他去参观中国伞博物馆。

请你根据以下提示给Clark写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。

Dear Tom,
I am happy to know that you are coming to Hangzhou! I'd like to take you to. visit China Umbrella Museum.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I am happy to know that you are coming to Hangzhou! I'd like to take you to visit China Umbrella Museum. China Umbrella Museum was built in 2009. There are many kinds of umbrellas on show, such as the umbrellas made of silk and paper. It's a good place to enjoy the local traditional art. We can go there from Tuesday to Sunday It is open from 9 a. m. to 4: 30 p. m., but it is closed all day on Monday. One great thing is that it is free to visit the museum! While visiting the museum, we must be quiet. Besides, we are not allowed to touch the exhibitions.
Hope to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2020-2021学年浙江省杭州市余杭区信达外国语九年级上12月月考英语试卷浙第二节:书面表达（共1小题，满分15分）
假定你是李雷,请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行回复,你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥。

邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;词数:80左右;邮件开头已给出,不计入总词数。

【答案】
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too! You really don't have to
worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know. (点题)
We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind
of cold when you are here so you' d better bring some warm clothes. 【高分句型一】We are not
allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside
during the break. 【高分句型二】(建议)
Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know. (希望)
Love,
Li Lei
浙江省杭州市下城区春蕾中学2020-2021学年九年级第一学期12
月英语试题卷
71.假如你是生活在杭州的一名中学社李华，请根据邮件提示，给你的美国朋友Mary 回复一
封邮件。

请认真阅读她给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容进行回复，字数不少于80词。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】
Dear Mary,
I’m really excited for your mail, how’s it going there?Speaking of campus,where teachers and students work,a lot of things need to be done to make it more beautiful and pleasant.I do appreciate your idea to make the school greener,which,in a sense,is also something that has been turned into reality here in Hangzhou.To establish a healthy and harmounious environment,the authorities have made an effort to plant more trees while outdated infrastructures are under renovation now.As for students,all kinds of slogans were made to contribute to forming a correct mindset.
I hope this mail helps. Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua
浙江省杭州市余杭区树兰中学2020-2021学年九年级上学期12月月考英语试卷第二节:书面表达（共1小题，满分15分）
假如你是Chen Xu，请阅读以下邮件并回复。

内容必须至少包括关于中国礼仪三个不同方面的注意事项。

注意:
1.词数:80词左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
How is everything？I’m very happy that the holiday is coming and I will I drop by my Chinese friend, Li Ming in China. Would you please tell
me something that I should pay attention to？
I’m looking for ward to your reply.
Tom
Dear Tom,
Yours
Chen Xu 【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Learning that you will visit one of your Chinese friends, I’d like to give some advice. First, you should give him a phone call to assure the exact arriving time. Besides, it would be better if you buy some gifts for his families. And the fruit is the best choice. Get there early before 5 minutes. You shouldn’t be late or you will give them a bad impression. Of course, remember to say the dishes are delicious when you’re having a meal. And don’t stay here by a long time. Wish you have a good time!
Yours
Chen Xu 浙江省杭州市十三中教育集团2020-2021学年第一学期12月九年级英语试题卷第二节:书面表达（共1小题，满分15分）
假如你是李平，请你对你的韩国笔友Emily的电子邮件进行回复，开头结尾要得体，词数80个左右。

Dear Emily,
I’m very delighted to receive your email. Everything is going f ine with me these days. I like the movies that can teach me many lessons. The cartoon called Kongfu Panda is my favorite one
because its main character Abao always tries his best to achieve his dream no matter how many difficulties he faces, which inspires me so much.
As for my family rules, I am not allowed to do many things by my parents, including going out with friends freely and staying up too late. As the saying goes, “nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards”. I think our parents know us best and they only want the best for us. Do you also think so? Look forward to your reply.
浙江省杭州市钱塘新区2020-2021学年九年级上学期12月英语检测
第二节:书面表达（共1小题，满分15分）
假如你是Li Ping，以下是你的美国笔友Mario给你发来的邮件，请阅读后回复。

词数80左右。

One possible version: (80 words)
Dear Mario,
I’m so glad that you’ll come to live in my city.
Hangzhou is famous for tea. As far as I know, tea plants are grown on the sides of the mountains. When the leaves are ready, they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing. After that, the tea is packed and sent to many different countries and places around China. It seems that many people all over the world drink Chinese tea.
As China develops so fast, many foreigners start to learn Chinese. So y ou don’t have to worry at all. I’d like to give you some advice. To improve your Chinese quickly, it is a good idea for you to take a course in a Chinese language school. Then, why not watch Chinese programs on TV? Of course, I’ll take you around here, especially the We st Lake. You can practice speaking Chinese with local people. It’s very helpful.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
评分原则：
1. 按5个档次给分。

中档属第三档（9分—7分）。

2. 按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次（内容分和语言分各占一半）。

3. 总词数不足40个或超过120个可在本题总得分中扣去1分；如书写整齐美观，可在本题
总得分中加1 分。

4. 内容要点：
(1) how is tea produced；（6分）
(2) how I can improve my Chinese quickly；（6分）
(3) 语言得体；（2分）
(4) 卷面整洁、词数符合要求。

（1分）
5. 各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档（很好）：（15分—13分）完全完成试题规定的任务。

①信息全。

②语言可读性强，语言结构基本正确，有少量错误。

第四档（好）：（12分—10分）完全完成试题规定的任务。

①有主要信息。

②语言基本正确，有一些错误。

第三档（还好）：（9分—7分）基本完成试题规定的任务。

①有主要信息。

②语言尚可读，有一些错误，但尚能达意。

第二档（较差）：（6分—4分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。

①信息不全。

②只有个别句子可读，语言错误较多，且不能达意。

第一档（差）：（3分—1分）未能完成试题规定的任务。

①不能表达有关信息。

②只有几个相关单词，语言错误很多，不能达意。

注意：凡不写任何内容、抄袭其它内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。