专题09 应用文分类写作-慰问信-2021高考英语写作复习大全

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专题09应用文分类写作-慰问信-2021高考英语写作复习大全应用文写作|慰问信-安慰朋友没有进入汉语才艺大赛
假定你是李华，你的英国留学生朋友John没有进入“汉语才艺大赛”的决赛，感到非常沮丧。

请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给予安慰；
3. 鼓励继续努力。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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请翻译：
1. 很遗憾你没能进入中国才艺表演的决赛。

继续努力，你迟早会成功的。

祝你每天都快乐。

I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of the Chinese Talent Show.
2. 我听说你情绪低落，我理解你的感受。

I was told that you are in low spirits and I understand how you feel.
3. 不过，我认为你应该振作起来。

However, I think you should cheer up.
4. 你已经尽力了，所以没有什么可后悔的。

You have tried your best, so there is nothing to regret.
5. 你有没有注意到，自从你参加选秀节目以来，你在中文和歌唱方面都取得了很大的进步？
And have you noticed that you have made great progress in Chinese and singing since you took part in the talent show?
6. 这就是你所获得的和真正重要的。

This is what you have gained and what really matters.
7. 此外，失败是很常见的，这会鼓励我们走得更远。

继续努力，你迟早会成功的。

祝你每天都快乐。

Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further. Keep on trying and you will succeed sooner or later. I wish you happy every day.
【答案】Dear John,
I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of the Chinese Talent Show. I was told that you are in low spirits and I understand how you feel. However, I think you should cheer up. You have tried your best, so there is nothing to regret. And have you noticed that you have made great progress in Chinese and singing since you took part in the talent show? This is what you have gained and what really matters.
Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further. Keep on trying and you will succeed sooner or later. I wish you happy every day.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国留学生朋友John写封邮件，对John没有进入“汉语才艺大赛”的决赛进行安慰。

第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时，少量一般过去时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

1. 表示理解；
2. 给予安慰；
3. 鼓励继续努力。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
be sorry to do sth.; make it; cheer up; try one’s best; make great progress; take part in sth.; encourage sb. to do sth. 第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of the Chinese Talent Show.
2. However, I think you should cheer up.
3. You have tried your best, so there is nothing to regret.
4. And have you noticed that you have made great progress in Chinese and singing since you took part in the talent show?
5. Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：And，Moreover
2.表转折对比关系：However
2.表因果关系：so
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】
[高分句型1] This is what you have gained and what really matters.用了两个what引导的表语从句。

[高分句型2] Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further. 用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。

应用文写作|慰问信-控制情绪
你是某中学健康专栏“HEART-TO-HEART”的编辑Li Hua，近日你收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。

该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。

请用英文给该同学写一封
内容要点如下：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪
Dear Worried，
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.
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Yours,
Li Hua 请翻译：
1. 我很抱歉得知你过得很不愉快。

期待您的答复。

I’m sorry to learn that you’re having such a bad time.
2. 事实上，每个人都会有这样的月经周期，所以你不必担心。

The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods, so you don’t have to worry.
3. 这里有两个关于如何控制你的脾气的有用的建议。

Here are two useful tips about how to control your temper.
4. 首先，和你信任的人谈谈你的感受，这是发泄怒气的好方法。

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out.
5. 更重要的是，去户外和你的朋友玩团队游戏，因为体育锻炼将有助于提升你的精神。

What’s more, go outdoors and play tea m games with your friends, as physical exercise will be helpful in lifting your spirits.
6. 希望你心情愉快。

期待您的答复。

I hope you’ll have a good mood. Looking forward to your reply.
【答案】Hi Worried，
I’m sorry to learn that you’re having such a bad time. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods, so you don’t have to worry. Here are two useful tips about how to control your temper.
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out. What’s more, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise will be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll have a good mood. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
这是一篇应用文。

文章主要是写一封回信，回应一位同学的求助。

第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：
1.表示理解并给予安慰
2.提出建议并说明理由
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
control one’s temper；a good way of doing sth.；let one’s anger out；what’s more；go outdoors；play team games with your friends；physical exercise；lift one’s spirits；have a good mood；looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m sorry to learn that you’re having such a bad time.
2. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods, so you don’t have to worry.
3. Here are two useful tips about how to control your temper.
4. Talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out.
5. Go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise will be helpful in lifting your spirits.
6. I hope you’ll have a good mood.
7. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand…Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out.中which引导非限制性定语从句，也使用了非谓语动词，如：Besides,doing the square dance is a good way for people to keep fit.中doing为动名词作主语。

全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的
驾驭英语的能力。

另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

应用文写作|慰问信-心情不好安慰
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说他现在心情很不好，因为在上周结束的校篮球比赛中，他所在的班级篮球队以一分之差输了。

请你给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建议。

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1. 听说你们队上周末的篮球赛输了，我很遗憾。

最美好的祝福。

I’m very sorry to hear that your team lost the basketball match last weekend.
2. 你心情不好是可以理解的。

It’s understandable for you to be in a bad mood.
3. 然而，如果你能采取不同的观点，失去可能是一件幸事。

However, if you can adopt different perspectives, the loss may be a blessing.
4. 首先，在篮球比赛中输是很正常的，因为你可以赢也可以输。

First, it’s normal to lose in a basketball match, for you can either win or lose.
5. 如果你已经尽力了，为什么不振作起来面对结果呢？
If you’ve tried your best, why not lift your spirits to face up to the result?
6. 总之，竞争的本质不在于胜利，而在于参与。

Anyway, the essence of competition lies not in victory but in participation.
7. 此外，你还可以通过找出自己的长处和短处，从中获益。

Besides, you can also benefit from your loss by figuring out your strengths and weaknesses.
8. 我希望你能发现我的鼓励对你有帮助。

最美好的祝福。

I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes.
Dear Mike,
I’m very sorry to hear that your team lost the basketball match last weekend. It’s understandable for you to be in a bad mood. However, if you can adopt different perspectives, the loss may be a blessing.
First, it’s normal to lose in a basketball match, for you can either win or lose. If you’ve tried your best, why not lift your spirits to face up to the result? Anyway, the essence of competition lies not in victory but in participation. Besides, you can also benefit from your loss by figuring out your strengths and weaknesses.
I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
应用文写作|慰问信-数学不好厌学
假设你是李华，你的美国好朋友Jane数学学得不好，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学的情绪。

请你给她发一封电子邮件开导她。

要点如下：
1.没有必要伤心
2.要振作起来
3.和老师交流有助于你改善
4.探索适合自己的有效的学习方式
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请翻译：
1. 我很遗憾地知道你数学不好，对功课失去了兴趣。

I am so sorry to know that you didn’t do well in math and have lose interest in schoolwork.
2. 通常情况下，数学对大多数学生来说很难，所以没有必要感到太糟糕。

As is often the case, math is difficult for most students, so there is no need to feel too bad.
3. 此时此刻，你应该做的是振作起来，找到减轻焦虑的方法。

At this moment, what you should do is to cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety.
4. 为什么不和你的朋友去郊游或者抽时间听你最喜欢的音乐呢？
Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music?
5. 如果你能和你最尊敬的老师谈谈，他们可能会给你一些实用的建议，帮助你。

If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that helps you.
6. 也许现在是你探索一种更好更适合你的新的学习方法的时候了。

Probably it’s time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.
7. 不管怎样，如果你还有什么困难，请及时告诉我们，希望你早日重建自信！
Anyway, if you have any other difficulties, please tell us in time and I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon!
Dear Mike，
I am so sorry to know that you didn’t do well in math and have lose interest in schoolwork.
As is often the case, math is difficult for most students, so there is no need to feel too bad. At this moment, what you should do is to cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety .Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music? If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that helps you. Probably it’s time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.
Anyway, if you have any other difficulties, please tell us in time and I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon!
Sincerely Yours,
Lihua
应用文写作|慰问信-学古诗遇到困难，心情不好
假定你是李华，你校留学生Jacky在学习中国古诗的过程中有困难，心情很沮丧，发来邮件向你求助。

请给他回一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建议；
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请翻译：
1.我很抱歉得知你学古诗词有困难。

我想给你一些建议。

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参考答案
1.我很抱歉得知你学古诗词有困难。

I’m sorry to learn you’re having difficulty learning ancient Chinese poems.
2.不过，没必要为此感到不安。

我想给你一些建议。

However, there’s no need to feel upset about it. I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
3.首先，反复读一首中国古诗，这样可以使你更容易理解它。

To begin with, read an ancient Chinese poem over and over again, which can make it easy for you to understand it.
4.此外，你最好了解一些有关诗歌的背景信息，从而帮助你发现诗歌所传达的隐含意义。

Besides, you’d better learn some background information about poem, thus helping you discover the hidden meaning the poem conveys.
5.更重要的是，观看一个名为“中国诗歌大会”的电视节目是有益的，在那里诗歌爱好者们交流学习古诗的经验。

More importantly, it’s beneficial to watch a TV program called Chinese Poetry Conference, where poem lovers exchange their experience of learning ancient Chinese poems.
6.希望你学习中国古诗词会有乐趣。

Hopefully, you’ll have fun learning ancient Chinese poems.
范文赏析
Dear Jacky,
I’m sorry to learn you’re having difficulty learning ancient Chinese poems. However, there’s no need to feel upset about it. I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
To begin with, read an ancient Chinese poem over and over again, which can make it easy for you to understand it. Besides, you’d better learn some background information about poem, thus helping you discover the hidden meaning the poem conveys. More importantly, it’s beneficial to watch a TV program called Chinese Poetry Conference, where poem lovers exchange their experience of learning ancient Chinese poems.
Hopefully, you’ll have fun learning ancient Chinese poems.
Yours,
Li Hua
应用文写作|慰问信-同学遇到台风
假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风(Typhoon Mujigae)的袭击，洪水毁坏了家园。

你作为班长给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰和关心；2. 提供帮助。

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请翻译：
1.我们非常遗憾地听到一个可怕和严重的台风穆吉加袭击了你的家乡，你的房子成了废墟。

We’re awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in
ruins.
2.我谨代表全班同学向您表示最诚挚的同情和关怀。

I, on behalf of our class, express our most sincere pity and care for you.
3.考虑到你目前的情况，我们迫不及待地想办法帮助你。

Thinking about your present situation, we can’t wait to make every bit of our effort to help you.
4.我们捐了一些钱，希望能帮助你渡过难关。

We’ve made a donation of some money, expecting it can help you go through the difficulty.
5.至于你错过的课程，我愿意帮你补课。

As for the lessons you have missed, I am willing to help you make them up.
范文赏析
Dear Wang Gang,
We’re awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins. I, on behalf of our class, express our most sincere pity and care for you.
Thinking about your present situation, we can’t wait to make every bit of our effort to help you. We’ve made a donation of some money, expecting it can help you go through the difficulty. As for the lessons you have missed, I am willing to help you make them up.
Hopefully, you’ll be back soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
应用文写作|慰问信-美国交换生生病了
假定你是李华，你班来自美国的交换生Peter生病住院了。

请给他发封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示关心
2.提供帮助
3.祝愿康复。

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请翻译：
1.我知道你的腿在足球比赛中不慎受了重伤，特写信向你致以诚挚的同情和关怀。

Knowing that you had your leg severely injured accidentally in the football match, I am writing to extend sincere。