四六级考前点拨高分攻略讲义

四六级考前点拨高分攻略讲义
第一部分：关于写作
Part Ⅰ写作部分(30minutes)
提示：四六级热点作文预测（请同学们结合四六级借鉴考研作文的漫画加分析评述性特点完善和变通自己的文章。

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四六级作文大热点话题之一：关于环保和污染治理
备注：环境保护已经成为全球刻不容缓的话题。

对于政府及企业来说，重视环保事业，让我们的生存环境变得更好，至关重大。

预测密押实例画面描述：1）有一只宠物狗正带着口罩。

2 ）背景是，严重的雾霾天气。

P1. S1) As is vividly depicted from the above picture，which seems to be astonishing and thought-provoking on second thoughts. S2) The most eye-catching feature in the picture that impresses me profoundly is that incredibly even the pet dog wears a mask to prevent the terrible smog and haze. S3) As a matter of fact, recent years has witnessed a severe air-pollution phenomenon caused by automobile gas emission and industrial exhaust, which will definitely be disastrous to individual survival and personal development.
P2 S4) It goes without saying that the problem of hazy weather should be attached great importance to by the government and the consequences should be taken into profound consideration. S5) To account for the above-mentioned air-pollution phenomenon, a couple of severe reasons should be pointed out. S6) On the one hand , the severely polluted air industrial wastes have been pumped into the air, the lakes and rivers and an increasing number of automobiles crowd into the streets and produce the gas emission. S7) On the other hand, the widespread use of plastic bags and coal burning as well as the nationwide construction dust have been pumped into the air from time to time.
P3 S8) As a matter of fact, the smog and haze not only does harm to the lungs and noses but also gives rise to horrible traffic accidents. S9) In addition, no issue is as harmful as the environmental deterioration, which will be a potential threat to the survival of human beings that we are unwilling to see. S10) Just according to a recent survey made by one Morning News, more than 40 percent of Chinese cities are suffering from the hazy weather per year.
P4 S11) As a result, it is essential that a couple of effective measures should be taken to prevent the environmental pollution. S12) To start with, the local government should take more steps, such as closing the factories which produced too much industrial exhaust, planting more trees and develop more high-tech products so that air quality can be better and the weather can be more agreeable. S13) In addition, the government should severely punish those who destroy the environment intentionally. S14) Last but not least, it is urgent to limit the number of private cars in the urban cities and we should adopt the best technologies with a view to creating more
energy substitutes instead of the petroleum. S15) Only by the above-mentioned pragmatic measures can we enjoy better health and live a more comfortable life.
亮点表达释义：
smog and haze 雾霾cause / trigger 造成
thought-provoking 发人深思的industrial exhaust 工业废气potential threat 潜在的威胁disastrous 灾难性的
witness 见证give rise to 导致
with a view to doing sth 旨在做某事.
account for 说明（现象、原因、理由等）
environmental deterioration 环境恶化
预测话题之二：援助那些马路上不熟悉的人是否有必要？
Should We Assist those unfamiliar people in need on the roads ?
1) 有人认为援助那些不熟悉的人是一种传统美德;
2)有人却认为援助不熟悉的人容易被骗，而且可能给自己带来更多麻烦;
3) 本人的观点是……（禁止非法出版原创文章；转载请标注出处；尊重原创；自觉远离盗版)
(滔滔不绝的四六级预测范文/ 曾受启发源自于春晚小品;社会热点之一)
Assisting those unfamiliar people in need on the roads has been a traditional virtue throughout the world. After all, everyone has his own sad day and helping others will be praiseworthy and should be advocated (提倡) among the young people both at home and abroad.
As a matter of fact, assisting those in need on the roads will cheer us up and will make us feel delighted and have a strong sense of achievement as well as a sense of glorious mission(使命感) because when offering the free assistance to those in need we may feel that we are really trusted and honored as heroes. However, some people hold different views that we should be more prudent (谨慎的) and more careful to prevent ourselves from being cheated. They insist that helping others may be likely to be cheated. Giving a hand to those unfamiliar people in need often make us step into an unfavorable situation .In addition, it is risky to provide the assistance. For instance, seeing someone being drowned in one river, seeing one old man or woman being tripped over on the road, and so on. Maybe helping others may conversely put us in the unexpected trouble.
As far as I am concerned, we should try our best to help those in need. Meanwhile, we should prevent from getting cheated and call the police to ensure whether they are professional liars (骗子) or not. Last but not least, the local government should set up the first-aid centers and shelters to better provide the overall , timely and humanizing assistance and set up the SPECIAL PRIZE for praising those warm - hearted and generous charity donors( 慈善捐赠者) and call on more young people to learn from the donors. Only in this way , can we enjoy a more harmonious and friendlier atmosphere.
写作热点话题：关于传统文化流失
The above-mentioned vivid cartoon aims at showing us of the severe phenomenon of the terrible loss of traditional culture. (画面描述内容已省略).
More often than not, from my own perspective, the reasons which surely contribute to this phenomenon can be shown as follows. To start with, an increasing number of people, especially youngsters, hold that Chinese traditional culture is out-dated and of little use in modern society. Moreover, cultures from foreign countries have posed a great challenge to the traditional culture of China. A large body of people have been attracted by foreign cultures which feature diversity, novelty and richness. However, no one can deny the significance of Chinese traditional culture. It is the crystallization of Chinese’s wisdom. It once played and will continue to be an indispensable role in all aspects of all life.
As a matter of fact, some effective measures should be taken to reverse this trend. In the first place, a large-scale educational campaign should be launched to inform the public of the importance of traditional culture. Additionally, when fascinated by foreign cultures, the public should also endeavor to preserve the essence of our own culture. Only in this way can we prevent the trend of traditional culture from disappearing and can we hand down the culture from generation to generation.
写作热点话题：如何减少压力和解决压力问题(stress problem)
How to reduce and cope with the stress
As a result of the fast development of society, the heated competition of the entire society is more and more intense, causing increasing heavy pressure to both young people and old ones. Stress of study, work and life can exist everywhere, but how can we reduce and deal with it? Here is some valuable advice as follows.
To start with, keep good and healthy habits. Good habits will contribute to great health. A healthy body is the precondition(前提条件) to face stress. It’s the least capacity to cope with stress when a person falls ill. Secondly, learn to accept the pressure. The reason why many people can not cope with stress is that they avoid and escape it. Actually, there always is trouble and problems once we chose a path to go, for （由于）almost everything worth doing is not so easy. Thirdly, be active to solve the problem, rather than complain about it. Many people complain about the environment / surroundings and don’t plan to seek the effective solutions when confronted with problems. As a matter of fact, complaint can do nothing but only let you down(让人失望). As long as the problem is not solved, the pressure can never disappear. Fourthly, tell others your pressure and get help from them. Lots of pressure can’t be solved by our own and the rational way is talking the pressure to workmates or friends to get help from them. But we shouldn’t intend to put pressure to others but to seek help and support to solve problems.
Of course, there also are some other ways to cope with stress, such as, readjusting life goals and expectation, playing games to relax, even shopping or eating. In addition, a positive and healthy attitude can help us deal with the problem that gives rise to stress. All in all, only by the
above solutions can we reduce and cope with the stress.
四六级热点作文预测: 关于网购（请同学们结合四六级借鉴考研作文的漫画加分析评述性特点完善和变通自己的文章。

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Will Online Shopping Replace Traditional Shopping？
Evidently,online shopping is increasingly popular and acceptable especially among the young and middle-aged people recent years. Is the former really better than the latter？
As a matter of fact, there is no consensus of viewpoints among people of all ages, for / since / because both online shopping and traditional store shopping have merits and demerits(优缺点).
People's viewpoints vary from person to person. Most young people hold / assert / maintain that online shopping will replace the mall shopping, and surely stores will disappear in the future, while others insist / argue that stores would be unlikely to disappear / vanish , it has its own merits / advantages.
The merits of shopping online are as follows: to start with, it is efficient and convenient only by clicking the mouse. In addition, online goods are much cheaper than street shops so that the young consumers can save much money. However , online shopping also has its demerits. From time to time, there are frequent news about online cheating, and frequent complaints about poor quality of fake goods, which is totally different with the goods shown from the online picture. Yet as for the traditional store shopping, the consumers may communicate with sellers face to face anytime, so buyers can see goods in person and may select the reliable and superior ones . While the traditional shopping is not convenient and time-consuming .
As far as I am concerned, online shopping and traditional shopping can coexist (exist together). At present, online shopping will not completely replace traditional shopping especially among the aged people. (禁止非法出版原创文章；转载请标注出处；尊重原创；远离盗版)
四六级考试写作范文（请同学们结合四六级借鉴考研作文的漫画加分析评述性特点完善和变通自己的文章。

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Recreational Activities
(1) The twenty first century has brought with it an unprecedented（空前绝后的）variety of recreational activities. (2)They range from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kings of online ones.
(3 )Some people think those various recreational activities brought by modern technology are great and necessary because they can help people relax from the hard work and study and broaden our horizon. (4)However, some people think that too many recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. (5)Some people may not resist some temptations and indulge themselves in those activities, such as the online games. (6)At last they are lured away from their studies, work and interpersonal relationships.
(7)In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge.
(8)When it comes to those time consuming and less meaningful activities, I assert that to stay away from them is a wise decision.
预测密押四六级作文
四级六级作文预测主题：食品安全（关于食品安全的漫画已省略）
Food Safety
Currently, many problems concerning the safety of food have popped up. As for me, I insist that at least three factors account for this issue.
To begin with , I observe that profits drive many food producers to commit illegal things. They aim to gain more money at the expense of consumers’health. In addition, the overuse of agricultural pesticide has resulted in the degradation of food quality. The excessive pesticide bears enormous health hazard for people. Furthermore, some food producers inject hormones into domestic animals so as to make them grow more quickly and thus they can turn in more profit. As a result, people’s health has been seriously disturbed.
All in all, food safety is such a great concern, and we all should do establish laws and implement them effectively to avoid producing toxic foods.
热点话题的写作要求:
Directions:
1.表达你对举行XXXX的看法;
2.对XXXX具体内容的建议。

预测四级作文的范文：
My Attitude towards XXXX
As for those who desire to take part in the festival's performances, the Arts Festivals will not only increase general interest in and appreciation for the arts, but also become a good way for our university to show its support for the arts.
The arts festivals are excellent opportunities to remind everyone that arts are important to appreciate and take part in, regardless of college majors.
I assert that there should be diversified, fair and intense competitions in all the major arts. There should be a variety of forms, such as, painting and sculpture, classical, folk and modern dance, and instrumental performance and choral performance. The judges should be made up of both faculty and top students as well as the experts .
The festivals in this way will, from my own perspective, give college students a greater enjoyment of the arts and a better appreciation for the arts.
关于行动的重要性的热点作文话题：
Evidently, the cartoon (卡通画面已省略) aims at informing us of the significance of taking actions. Definitely, no one can deny the importance of it. Taking actions will enable us to achieve our objectives and realize our dreams more smoothly and rapidly. The more actions we take, the more likely we are to accumulate more experience, master useful skills and seize fleeting opportunities .
To further demonstrate the importance of actions, I would like to take a famous Chinese
fable story as a case in point：How could the “foolish old man”who dreamed of removing the mountain in front of his gate finally achieved his dream without constant actions ?
Accordingly, on no account should we ignore the power of taking actions. Furthermore, not only should we possess a great dream, but also we should take actions to make it come true. As a famous saying goes, “Actions speak louder than words.”
四级考试真题大回放：
What Electives to Choose
(1) With the remarkable educational reform and the increasing students’demand, (1) universities strive to offer a variety of elective courses for students to choose from. (2) Some higher institutes provide the optional courses of cross-cultural communication, (2) and some colleges have computer science on the curriculum of elective courses.
(3) There are three main reasons for students’selection of courses. (4) In the first place, students tend to (5) take personal interest into consideration when they opt for an elective course. Possibly, that’s why (6) cross-cultural communication courses are so prevailing on campus. (4) Additionally, Some students may choose to take a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation. (4) Last but not least, to (7) make up for their required credits is another universal reason as students select a course.
(8) As far as I am concerned, I’m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own. I am taking geographic research and discovery course (9) in that I’ve been greatly keen on science since I was a kid.
真题大回放：2015年6月英语六级作文题目及范文
漫画：关于"Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it."
参考范文（含中文关键词提纲）：
As a matter of fact, how to combine the knowledge that is acquired every day with social practice has confused numerous people. As a famous proverb goes, “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.”Apparently, this saying aims at conveying the message that if we truly want to master the knowledge we learn, we ought not to stop practicing it.
以上的第一段三句话，用漫画核心词引入+漫画的目的+分析
From my perspective, a couple of reasons accountable for this statement are as follows. To begin with, when we utilize knowledge, and make mistakes, then try to utilize it again, we will easily remember it by our heart. Moreover, knowledge has become rather complicated and we can seldom grasp the essence of it if we do not practice it and ponder it over again and again. For instance, there used to be simple diseases, such as the cold and measles, and some doctors might have the knowledge to treat all the common ones. However, with our living environment
becoming ever increasingly uncomfortable, various diseases have evolved into irremediable, and unpredictable ones. Therefore, the medication has been divided into numerous branches, and doctors of each one have to practice for years only in order to cure the diseases.
以上第二段，拓展部分。

中心句+两个原因+举例。

（举例应用对比法）
All in all, social practice is of greatest importance for those who are willing and eager to acquire rich knowledge. Not only does it assist people to remember knowledge better, but we are able to catch up with the speed of the evolution of knowledge. I hope that the young can focus more attention on practicing what they learn instead of memorizing it blindly so that the knowledge will become our precious treasure and make the future life more brilliant.
以上第三段，总结该漫画核心的合理性+罗列两个理由+展望美好未来。

写作模板礼物附赠:
话题类型作文
Nowadays，there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is ______. Besides，_____. The third one is _____. To sum up，the main cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing，_____. For another thing，_____. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.
对比观点作文
(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1. 有一些人认为。

2. 另一些人认为。

3. 我的看法。

The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2) 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主
题的看法).
阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.
2. 分析并举例使其更充实.
The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).
解决方法题型
要求列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I hold that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
说明利弊题型
此类题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays，numerous people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First --------- --(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that --------- -(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,----------- (A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to --------- (我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ----------- (对前景的预测).)
现象说明文
Recently _______, what amazes us most is_________ ,it is true that__________.
There are many reasons explaining_ _______________ _.The main reason is____________________.
What’s more, _________________________.Last but not least , _________________________.As a result_______________.
Considering all there,______________ _.For one thing_________ __,for another________ In Conclusion____________ .
议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
( 3 ) 答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.
( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
A typical case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of
people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..
图表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/ dramatically/ steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
实用性写作(申请信)
Dear ...,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.
.../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
X X X
图标作文
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，____ has been on rise/ decrease，significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart，it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand，____.In the other hand，_____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition，______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned，I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
第二部分：关于四六级15选10的实战剖析
Questions 47-56 are based on the following passage.
When we think of green buildings, we tend to think of new ones-the kind of high-tech, solar-paneled masterpieces that make the covers of architecture magazines. But the U.S. has more than 100 million existing homes, and it would be (47)_________wasteful to tear them all down and (48)______them with greener versions. An enormous amount of energy and resources went into the construction of those houses. And it would take an average of 65 years for the (49)_________carbon emissions from a new energy-efficient home to make up for the resources lost by destroying an old one. So in the broadest (50)___________, the greatest home is the one that has already been built . But at the same time, nearly half of U.S. carbon emissions come from heating, cooling, and (51) _______our homes, offices, and other buildings. “you can’t deal with climate change without dealing with existing buildings,”says Richard Moe, the president of the National Trust.
With some (52) ________, the oldest homes tend to be the least energy-efficient. House built before 1939 use about 50% more energy per square foot than those built after 2000, mainly due to the tiny cracks and gaps that (53) ________ over time and let in more outside air.
Fortunately, there are a (54)_______ number of relatively simple changes that can green older home, from (55)_______ ones like Lincoln’s Cottage to your own postwar home. And efficiency upgrades can save more than just the earth.; they can help (56)_________
property owners from rising power costs.
请注意此部分试题请在答题卡2上做答。

A ) accommodations B) clumsy C) doubtfully D) exceptions
E) expand F) historic G) incredibly H)powering
I) project J) reduced K)replace L) sense
M) shifted N) supplying O)vast
仔细阅读强调对综合能力的考查，做到两点：
1.判断词性2含义匹配。

步骤：1)先对所给的15个选项词性归类，如下表格：
词性数量
名词 3 Accommodations; exceptions; sense
形容词7 Clumsy; historic; powering; reduced; shifted; supplying; vast
副词 2 Doubtfully; incredibly
动词 3 Expand; protect; replace
从表格可以发现其中对形容词的考查最多，名词、动词和副词考查频率相当。

然后我们可以对每个空格进行分析来看，分别需要什么词性的词来填入。

47．需要副词来修饰形容词wasteful，副词只有两个备选项，从含义推断，表示浪费的程度巨大，故而只能选择G；
48．根据and面的结构可以看出需要一个动词，并且此动词必须能与with构成固定搭配，而动词备选项有三，能与with进行搭配且语义符合的只有replace 表示用什么来代替之意；。