(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达答题技巧及练习题(含答案)含解析(1)
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一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·西安市铁一中学中考模拟)由于父母的溺爱,现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情,导致独立生活能力不强。
请你根据以下建议;
自己的事情自己做;家里得事情帮着做;学校的事情抢着做,谈谈作为中学生,我们应该如何培养自己的独立能力。
要求;1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范2. 字数70 字左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总字数)
As middle school students, it's very important for us to independent. What should we do to make
us
independent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it's very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?
First, let's begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,谈谈作为中学生,我们应该如何培养自己的独立能力。
【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:it's very important for us to……, It’s our job to……, We can….., We should……, We sometimes need to……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头介绍了作为中学生,独立很重要,接下来介绍我们应如何培养自己的独立能力,最后指出不要总是依靠其他人。
此处begin with, make one’s bed, help with, look after, on time, need to do sth, depend on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2.(·海南中考模拟)“美丽的琼海我的家,人人都要保护她”。
自双创以来,我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观,人人积极参与双创活动,让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。
作为一名中学生,请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。
要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.必须包含所给提示,并做适当的拓展;
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4. 词数80左右,(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________
Let’s take action now. Our actions can ma ke a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t b reak traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【解析】
【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动,即创建文明城市、创建健康城市,城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。
这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文,号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。
题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容,而是用图表的形式,列出了写作的提纲。
通过审题可
知,这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述:即应该做什么;不应该做什么。
根据这个内容,写作时,把短文分成两个层次,这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。
整篇短文应使用一般现在时态,第一人称we来叙述。
写作时应注意:首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语,而应从句子的整体结构考虑,使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型,以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主,穿插使用并列句或者复合句,改变文章节奏,提升文章档次。
语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯、流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,向中学生们发出号召,共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。
首先短文的内容完整,文章根据题目中列出的图表,补充了具体的写作内容,从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面,对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。
文章条理清晰,有层次。
其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,语言准确,语句通顺,符合英语的表达习惯。
短文中句子结构以简单句为主,也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式,语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分,如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you t o help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。
3.(·湖北中考模拟)书面表达
初中生即将结束,学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。
内容要点如下:1.初中科目更多,好的学习方法很重要;2.锻炼身体,保持健康;3.参加社团活动,使学校生活丰富;4.多读书,多交朋友;5.补充一两点个人想法。
注意:1.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80词左右。
参考词汇:method n.方法 club. n 社团 colorful adj.丰富的
Welcome to our school!
【答案】Welcome to our school!
I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or
parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
【解析】
本文是一篇给材料作文。
要求是给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议,所以人称主要用第二人称,时态用一般现在时。
在写作过程中,首先要将所提供给的信息要点用英语正确的表达出来,要涵盖所提到的所有要点,同时注意理顺要点,防止漏写,可适当发挥。
同时在写作的时候,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。
要注意准确运用时态,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。
最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求;检查段落是否完整,句子表达是否准确,语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。
4.(·安徽中考模拟)书面表达
假如你是李华,你们学校打算举办一场以“感恩老师”为主题的活动。
请根据以下要点,给你的美国笔友Mike 写一封邮件,介绍这次的活动。
时间:5月30号
活动内容: 1. 给老师献花致敬;
2. 把写满感谢祝福话语的卡片贴在墙上;
3. 为老师表演节目(put on performances)
你的感触:……
注意: 1. 词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________
What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in trouble.We will put up the thank-notes on the wall.After that we put on performances for our teachers.
What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,介绍以“感恩老师”为主题的活动。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Our school will hold……,On the day we will……,We t hank them for……,I am……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头介绍了我们学校举行了一个感恩老师的活动,接下来介绍我们的活动内容,最后表达我的感触。
此处give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
5.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
保护环境是每一个人的责任。
假设下面是你阅读了有关环保的书之后的变化,请根据表格内所给内容写一篇短文。
要求:1.短文必须包含所给信息,并适当发挥.要求语句通顺,意思连贯。
2.表格中最后一栏用2句话展开合理想象,做适当发挥。
3.词数在90个左右.文章的开头部分已给出,不计入总同数。
It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot.
【答案】It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.
In the past, I went to school in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket. However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.
I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我阅读了关于环保的书后的很大变化。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:It is our duty to……,I went to……,And I used to……,And I try to……,I think……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头介绍了保护环境是我们的职责,我阅读了关于环保的书后有很大变化,接下来介绍我过去和现在在环保方面有什么样的变化,最后作为中学生我们应如何保护环境。
此处in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
6.(·宁夏中考模拟)(题文)假如你是李华,作为交换生你去年在美国学习了一学期。
在美期间,你住在Tom家,在这一学期里,你和他及他的家人结下了深厚的友谊。
请你根据下面的提示写一篇日记。
1. 介绍Tom:为人友好,乐于助人,你们相处很融洽;
2. 他在英语学习方面给你的帮助;你了解了美国的文化;
3. 他的父母悉心照顾你的生活,给你做中国菜;
4. ……(自由发挥,至少谈及两项内容);
5. 希望他和他的家人能来中国。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.合理增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Friday May 27th, Sunny
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________
【答案】Friday May 27th, Sunny
I’m feeling a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am going to return to China. I lived in Tom’s home in America when I studied in America. Though we had only studied together for a term, we were good friends. Tom is kind, friendly and helpful. We got on well with each other. He did a lot to help me with my English. My English has improved greatly with his help. I know more American culture. I really appreciate what he did for me. His parents took good care of me. They tried to cook Chinese food for me. I will leave for China today. I hope his family will come to China one day. I am looking forward to seeing them in China again.
【解析】
这是一篇要求介绍自己为交换生你去年在美国学习了一学期。
在美期间,你住在Tom家,在这一学期里,你和他及他的家人结下了深厚的友谊。
请你根据下面的提示写一篇日记。
动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出
来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。
根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称,一般过去时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。
注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
7.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达
随着互联网和手机终端发展,成瘾性网络游戏使一些中学生沉迷其中,影响了学习进步和身心健康。
上周你们学校开展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many computer games ”为主题的专题讨论。
请根据下表中的要点提示,写一篇短文,提出一些意见。
注意 1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2.词数100左右,短文开头已给出,不计总词数;
3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名;
Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many computer games .The students have different opinions.
【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many computer games. The students have different opinions.
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can communicate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.
When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.
As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must come first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文。
给出了一些要点,并给出了作文的开头。
我们只要用英语正确的把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点就行。
动笔前要真人阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当的发挥。
根据题目要求,短文是一篇议论文,时态用一般现在时,人称为第三人称。
写作中要注意适当使用连词,注意上下文紧密联系。
符合逻辑关系。
高分句型【1】
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他们认为他们的学校可以开班会,帮助他们认识到互联网的利与弊。
动词不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.用作目的状语。
高分句型【2】
Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外,学校应该定期举办有益的校外活动。
此句是含有情态动词的被动语态。
其构成为:情态动词+be+及物动词的过去分词。
高分句型【3】
Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 与学校紧密合
作是家长帮助他们的另一重要途径。
动名词Working closely with schools作主语,视作单数,因此be动词用is。
8.(·重庆中考模拟)书面表达。
英国怀特学校下学期组织学生来你校学习了解中国文化,请你以李明的身份给该校校长Mr. Green写一封邮件,介绍你校的相关活动安排及其理由。
要求:
1. 介绍不少于两个有关中国文化的活动及安排理由;
2. 词数:80-120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点:
1.活动计划(打乒乓、包饺子……)
2. 安排理由(非常流行、带来好运……)
3. …….
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m glad that you’ll come to our school for a visit next term. ____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Mr. Green,
I’m glad that you’ll come to our school for a visit next term.Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them.
Since ping-pong is popular in both Britain and China,we arrange a ping-pong game for the students.They can learn from each other. What’s more,they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food.All the students will work together to make dumplings and
have a big dinner.In our culture,dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck.I think they will enjoy their time here.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给英国怀特学校的校长Green 先生写一封信,介绍他们学校的学生来你校参观时的活动安排以及理由。
通过审题可知,这篇作文的主要内容有以下几个方面:首先介绍不少于两个关于中国文化的活动,如打乒乓球、包饺子等;然后叙述安排这样的活动的理由。
根据表达要点充实写作内容,使文意完整。
整篇作文应主要使用一般现在时态,根据表达的需要使用适当的人称,注意谓语动词的正确形式。
写作时,应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。
而应从句子的整体结构考虑,使用恰当的词汇和句型。
句式表达以简单句为基础,穿插复合句,如宾语从句、定语从句等,提升文章档次。
语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。
短文内容完整,符合题目要求。
短文主要分三段,第一段对怀特学校学生们的到来表示欢迎(题目给出),然后作者一句话引出了文章的主题,Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them.。
第二段是文章的主体部分,这一段中介绍了学校的活动安排:打乒乓球和包饺子,并阐述了安排这些活动的理由。
这一段占篇幅最大,里面使用了较丰富的句式,如Since ping-pong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a ping-pong game for the students中Since引导原因状语从句;All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中动词不定式作目的状语;In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。
最后一段作者用一句话表达了自己的期望。
整篇文章结构合理、层次清晰,语句表达准确,意思连贯。
9.(·山东中考模拟)假如你是学生会主席,你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。
请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。
要点如下:1.少开汽,多走路。
2.停止向河内排放废水。
3.少用餐巾纸,塑料袋。
4.节约水电,多植树。
要求:1词数:80--100;2.请结合实际增加细节,适当发挥。
3.倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
【答案】Dear classmates,
As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting it.Each one of us must do something to help save our plante.Firstly,transportation is the main factor of air pollution.So we should walk more instead of driving.Secondly,industrial pollution is serious.Waste water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water pollution.Thirdly,we should stop using plastic bags when we go shopping.Finally,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we should pl ant more trees to protect our earth.
The Students’ Union
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求假如你是学生会主席,你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。
请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。
动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。
根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。
注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
10.(·山东中考模拟)写作
假定你是李华,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。
请你根据博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法。
2. 陈述自己的理由。
3. 提出至少2条建议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her
have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,对学生家长的博客进行回复。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some all-A students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头表明自己的看法,接下来陈述自己的理由,最后介绍自己的建议。
此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
11.(·广东中考模拟)书面表达
假如你是李明,你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气,情况如何。
请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。
内容如下:
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重,去年已发生数次雾霾天气;
2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害,正在采取各种措施减少其发生;
3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参考词汇:雾霾haze
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 语言通顺,句子连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右,信件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my healt h. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .
People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.
As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信,告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。
题目中列出了三个要点,我们应根据这些要点提示,来组织语言,充实内容。
首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重;然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施;最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。
因此文章应主要分成三段,一个内容一段。
文章内容中叙述的情况不一,时态不能统一,根据表达的需要使用正确的时态,注意谓语动词的正确形式。
写作时,应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,应从句子的整体考虑,写完整的句子,利用简单句的基本句型,使用恰当的词汇和短语。
为提升文章档次,可以穿插使用并列句和复合句;语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况,并结合自身的实际情况,讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。
首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点;且文章结构清晰,分成了三段,每一段的中心明确,意思表达清楚、明了。
其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态,动词形式变化准确,语法规范。
短文中语言得体,句式表达符合英语的习惯。
句子结构以简单句为主,也使用了一些并列句和复合句,长短句结合,使文章富有节奏。
短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。
12.(·广东中考模拟)假如你是班长李华,今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。
你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。
请你根据以下信息,给 David写一封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。
注意:
(1)邮件应包含所有要点
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。