2022高考英语读后续写训练及范文(1-4)

读后续写精读精炼（一）
一：原文重现
Dad and Mom had got to go on a four-day business trip. They taught their elder son Daniel and younger daughter Jane how to feed and look after their dog, Spot, how to take good care of themselves—learning to cook if they could, or ordering pizza—with money left on the table—if they were busy, and told them to keep their rooms clean and tidy. They asked Daniel to be in charge.
On the very morning when the parents left, Mom kissed them and said to Daniel gently, “Young man, do take care of Spot and Jane.” Daniel promised, “I will, Mom.”
Too excited to fall asleep again, Daniel and Jane jumped out of bed, calling out each other to get up. Their pet dog, Spot, heard the similar voice and rushed in, with a ball in its mouth. Jane stuck(伸) her head into Daniel’s room,“Spot got up an hour earlier. Let’s walk it.” Daniel said excitedly, “I’m coming, but, Jane, don’t forget to keep your room clean and tidy.” “I will.”
They ran with the dog in the yard and threw the ball away for Spot to bring it back. They had fun playing with Spot the whole morning. Washing Spot was slow and tiring as it was the first time they had done it. Then Daniel settled down to his homework while Jane did her reading with interest.
The following day, Jane begged her brother to order pizza for lunch. Daniel agreed excitedly, “We haven’t tasted that for long and we behave ourselves, right?”After a while, he added, “We should save money, too.” Within half an hour, they treated themselves to a big pizza. However, in the afternoon, Spot looked sick, lying lazily and unwilling to move. Daniel was concerned about the dog and took it to the pet clinic immediately with Jane as their parents had done.
注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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When Dad and Mom arrived a day earlier, they were amazed to find everything in a mess.
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Daniel ran into his room, with tears in his eyes,“ Jane, there is no need to explain and Mom won’t trust me any longer.”
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二：文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了爸爸和妈妈要去出差四天，他们教年长的儿子丹尼尔和小女儿简学会独立生活并照顾好狗Spot。

父母离开之后，丹尼尔和简兴奋得睡不着觉，他们和Spot玩的非常开心。

他们给学会给Spot洗澡，订披萨当午餐。

然而Spot生病了，他们把Spot带到了动物诊所。

【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当爸爸和妈妈提前一天到达时，他们惊奇地发现所有的东西都是一团糟。

”可知，第一段可描写父母非常生气。

②由第二段首句内容“丹尼尔跑进自己的房间，眼里含着泪水：“简，没有必要解释了，妈妈不会再相信我了。

””可知，第二段可描写爸爸妈妈了解了真相并向丹尼尔道歉。

2.续写线索：出差——兴奋——洗澡——生病——生气——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.大喊：shout/roar
②.用完：used up/run out of
③.理解：understand/make sense of
情绪类
①. 生气的：angry/in anger
②. 焦急地：anxiously /worriedly
增分句型：
1. Hearing the little daughter’s words, Mom understood that the reason why they had no time to clean the house was that they waited for Spot at the clinic all day.（现在分词作状语、关系副词why引导的定语从句和连接词that引导的表语从句）
2. She apologized to Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “you are really growing up into
a young man.”（现在分词作状语）
三：续写单句训练
①当爸爸妈妈一天前到达时，他们惊讶地发现一切都一团糟。

②妈妈很生气，喊道：“听我说，年轻人，我让你负责了。

我们以为你会表现得像个成年人，但看看这一团糟。

③买食物的钱已经用完了，但为什么Spot看起来仍然很饿呢？
④你用我们剩下的钱做了什么？
⑤简焦急地解释说：“妈妈，斯波特病了，所以我们把剩下的钱把它带到了宠物诊所。

”
⑥丹尼尔跑进自己的房间，眼睛里含着泪水：“简，没有必要解释，妈妈也不再相信我了。

”
⑦爸爸安慰妈妈平静地说：“可能一切都是有很好的解释的。

”
⑧听到小女儿的话，妈妈明白他们没有时间打扫房子的原因是他们整天在诊所等现场
⑨妈妈后悔这么生气，对丹尼尔学会对别人负责感到满意。

⑩她真诚地向丹尼尔道歉，并把他抱在怀里，说“你真的成了一个年轻人。

”
四：佳作展现
When Dad and Mom arrived a day earlier, they were amazed to find everything in a mess. Mom was angry and shouted, “Listen to me, young man—I left you in charge. We thought you would act like an adult, but look at the mess. The money for food has been used up but why does Spot still look hungry? What did you do with the money we left?”Jane explained anxiously, “Mummy, Spot is sick, so we spent the rest of the money taking it to the pet clinic.”
Daniel ran into his room, with tears in his eyes,“Jane, there is no need to explain and Mom won’t trust me any longer.”Comforting Mom, Dad said calmly, “There is probably a good explanation for everything.”Hearing the little daughter’s words, Mom understood that the reason why they had no time to clean the house was that they waited for Spot at the clinic all day. Mom regretted acting so angrily and was satisfied that Daniel learnt to be responsible for others. She apologized to Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “you are really growing up into a young man.”
五：课后练笔
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Grandparents often have interesting names. My sister-in-law was known as Mimi. Her husband goes by Peeka. Why? Their firstborn grandchild decided on those names.
My firstborn grandchild named me as well. I will never forget the day Joshua hugged me and, in front of a roomful of people, called me “Doll. My Doll Baby!” From that point on, I was known as Doll or Doll Baby. Even my sons-in-law call me Doll. Friends of my children and grandchildren call me Doll. It’s a given.
For the most part, it’s fine, even endearing, to hear my grandchildren call me Doll. But there was one time… My daughter and her husband were going out of town, so the plan was for me to pick up five-year-old Spencer from kindergarten, take him to their house to wait for Joshua’s school bus, and bring both boys home to spend the night with us. Spencer and I arrived long before the school bus. While we waited for Joshua, Spencer wanted to show me a new trick he learned on his skateboard.
Spencer was pretty good. He had learned how to step on the back of the skateboard so that the front tipped up （一边翘起）, and then put his front foot down on the board and take off. Cool!
Then it was my turn. I had played around with skateboards in my day. Of course, they weren’t the high-tech kind of toys my grandchildren enjoyed. Ours were made by mounting the wheels of our old sidewalk roller skates to the bottom of a plank of wood. Still, I had this. I put my right foot on the back of the board and tipped up the front. So far, so good. I brought my left foot down with every intention of rolling forward.
Good intentions. Bad form. I fell hard on my elbow as the skateboard flew across the concrete driveway. My injury was minor, but Spencer raced into the house and got Boo-Boo Bunny from the freezer to bring me comfort. It helped my arm, but not my pride.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

When I made my way home safely with the boys, my husband blamed me. ____________
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My husband helped Spencer practice calling 911 emergency call, pretending I hurt my head seriously.
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六：单句训练
1)当我和我带着孩子们安全回家的时候，我丈夫责怪我。

2)“你知道那会有多糟糕吗？””我丈夫喊道。

“我的意思是，如果你撞到头，失去知觉怎么办？”
3)他是对的。

那天晚上，斯宾塞爬到了我们床上的我们中间。

4)汤姆称赞他得到了流浪兔，并照顾了我。

5)“如果多尔受了重伤呢，斯宾塞呢？”你知道在紧急情况下该怎么办吗？””汤姆问。

“是的！”请拨打911
号电话！
6)斯宾塞为他记得该怎么办而感到自豪。

7)我的丈夫帮助斯宾塞练习拨打911紧急电话，假装我的头部严重受伤了。

8)他举起手，好像是电话，拇指是耳机，小手指是喉舌。

9)“9-1-1.你的紧急情况如何？斯宾塞拿起他的假手机，用手指清晰地说话。

“请提供帮助”
10)我的娃娃落在滑板上，伤了头！
11)汤姆和我笑了。

我很难忍不住要笑了。

12)“嗯，斯宾塞，”汤姆说。

“也许有时候你需要打电话给她奶奶。

”
参考答案
三：单句训练
1.When Dad and Mom arrived a day earlier, they were amazed to find everything in a mess.
2.Mom was angry and shouted, “Listen to me, young man—I left you in charge. We thought you would act like
an adult, but look at the mess.
3.The money for food has been used up but why does Spot still look hungry?
4.What did you do with the money we left?”
5.Jane explained anxiously, “Mummy, Spot is sick, so we spent the rest of the money taking it to the pet clinic.”
6.Daniel ran into his room, with tears in his eyes,“Jane, there is no need to explain and Mom won’t trust me any
longer.”
forting Mom, Dad said calmly, “There is probably a good explanation for everything.”
8.Hearing the little daughter’s words, Mom understood that the reason why they had no time to clean the house
was that they waited for Spot at the clinic all day.
9.Mom regretted acting so angrily and was satisfied that Daniel learnt to be responsible for others.
10.She apologized to Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “you are really growing up into a
young man.”
六：单句训练
1)When I made my way home safely with the boys, my husband blamed me.
2)“Do you realize how bad that could have been?”my husband shouted.
3)“I mean, what if you hit your head and were unconscious?”
4)He was right. That evening, Spencer crawled up between us in our bed.
5)Tom commended him for getting the Boo-Boo Bunny and taking care of me. “What if Doll had been badly
hurt, Spencer?
6)Do you know what to do in an emergency?”Tom asked. “Yes! Call 911!”Spencer was proud he
remembered what to do.
7)My husband helped Spencer practice calling 911 emergency call, pretending I hurt my head seriously.
8)He put up his hand as if it were the phone, his thumb the earphone and his little finger the mouthpiece.
9)“9-1-1. What’s your emergency?”Spencer brought up his pretend hand phone and spoke clearly into his
fingers. “Help!
10)My Doll fell on the skateboard and hurt her head!”
11)Tom and I smiled at each other. It was hard to keep from laughing.
12)“Uh, Spencer,”Tom said. “There are probably times you need to call her Grandma.”
四：佳作展现
（一）
When Dad and Mom arrived a day earlier, they were amazed to find everything in a mess. Mom was angry and shouted, “Listen to me, young man—I left you in charge. We thought you would act like an adult, but look at the mess. The money for food has been used up but why does Spot still look hungry? What did you do with the money we left?”Jane explained anxiously, “Mummy, Spot is sick, so we spent the rest of the money taking it to the pet clinic.”
Daniel ran into his room, with tears in his eyes,“Jane, there is no need to explain and Mom won’t trust me any longer.”Comforting Mom, Dad said calmly, “There is probably a good explanation for everything.”Hearing the little daughter’s words, Mom understood that the reason why they had no time to clean the house was that they waited for Spot at the clinic all day. Mom regretted acting so angrily and was satisfied that Daniel learnt to be responsible for others. She apologized to Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “you are really growing up into a young man.”
（二）
When I made my way home safely with the boys, my husband blamed me. “Do you realize how bad that could have been?” my husband shouted. “I mean, what if you hit your head and were unconscious?” He was right. That evening, Spencer crawled up between us in our bed. Tom commended him for getting the Boo-Boo Bunny and
taking care of me. “What if Doll had been badly hurt, Spencer? Do you know what to do in an emergency?” Tom asked. “Yes! Call 911!” Spencer was proud he remembered what to do.
My husband helped Spencer practice calling 911 emergency call, pretending I hurt my head seriously. He put up his hand as if it were the phone, his thumb the earphone and his little finger the mouthpiece. “9-1-1. What’s your emergency?” Spencer brought up his pretend hand phone and spoke clearly into his fingers. “Help! My Doll fell on the skateboard and hurt her head!” Tom and I smiled at each other. It was hard to keep from laughing. “Uh, Spencer,” Tom said. “There are probably times you need to call her Grandma.”
读后续写精读精炼（二）
一：原文重现
Devi looked through the observation window at the kids below, all waiting in line to get into the pool. She turned to her mother with a furious frown on her face. “Mom, they’re all little kids! I’m 15 already! This is ridiculous!”
“I know, Devi,” replied her mother, “but you’re a beginner, too, and you have to start somewhere!”
Devi had never been to a swimming lesson in her life. Between schoolwork and helping on her grandfather’s farm, she hadn’t had time for lessons. The closest swimming pool Devi had been to was the alligator pool her mother bought her when she was five. Now that Devi was older, her mother had found a new jo b in the city, and Devi faced a new challenge—school field trips to the local pool.
The first day that Devi went with her class to the pool, she had no idea what she was in for. What could be so difficult about swimming? Devi confidently slipped into the water and held onto the side of the pool, expecting to be able to touch the bottom with her feet. But when Devi let go of the side of the pool, she slipped under the water—the whole pool was one big deep end! Devi threw her arm toward the side of the pool and grabbed the ledge (池壁), out of breath. “I really can’t swim! Everyone’s going to laugh at me!” she thought to herself in a panic.
On the next field trip to the pool, Devi sat on the side on a bench, paralyzed with fear. She huddled with a towel over her shoulders, too embarrassed to try again. When she came home, her mother noticed right away that Devi was upset. “Honey, I’ve signed you up for Angela’s swimming lessons at the local pool. Soon you’ll learn how to swim just like everyone else,” she assured Devi, showing photos of Angela with her prize-winning students.注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2. 每段的开头语已为你写好；
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Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson.
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Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself.
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二：文本解析
【分析】本文讲述了黛维因为学业和在农场帮助祖父而一直没有时间去游泳，妈妈给黛维在当地找了游泳池学习游泳，黛维初次学习时候感觉很自信，但是真正进入到水里的时候发现游泳比想象中难，不小
心呛水的黛维觉得自己很尴尬，恐惧去学游泳，这时黛维的母亲给她报了一个游泳班。

【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“接着，轮到黛维上她的第一节课了。

”可知，第一段描写黛维去上游泳课的情况。

②由第二段首句内容“不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐的地方，做了自我介绍”可知，第二段可描写安吉拉老师和黛维的相处。

2.续写线索：怀疑课程——看别人跳水——感到尴尬——和老师交流——尝试游泳——喜欢上游泳
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.和：together with /as well as
②.路过：pass by/go past
③.鼓励：cheer on/encourage
情绪类
①.感知：feel more at ease/feel relaxed；astonished/surprised/shocked；in amazement/in surprise
②.积极：fearless /brave
特色句型
1. She dragged her feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful.（由连接词whether引导同位语从句）
2. Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean.（由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）
三：续写单句训练
1.然后是黛维上她的第一堂课的时候了。

2.她拖着脚走到泳池边坐下来，怀疑上课是否有帮助。

3.环顾四周，黛维发现她的教练穿过游泳池，还有那些孩子们跳进了水里，就像鱼一样跳进了海里。

4.她惊奇地看着她。

5.尽管黛维很敏感，但当一个小女孩走过，要求她不要害怕时，她的脸上很快就泛起了一丝尴尬的红晕。

6.多么令人尴尬啊！她垂着头。

7.不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐着的地方，介绍了自己。

8.黛维惊讶地得知安吉拉直到20岁才学过游泳。

9.深受鼓舞后，德维现在重新获得了希望。

10.她在安吉拉的陪伴下第二次进入游泳池，几个快乐的孩子漂浮在附近为她加油。

11.黛维开始感到更放松，她的动作不那么僵硬，呼吸更平静。

12.黛维怀着感激的心意识到她可能不是一个无所畏惧的游泳运动员，但她肯定会很开心。

四：佳作展现
Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson.
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Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself.
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五：课后练笔
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

It was a Saturday afternoon.The color of the sky was changing,first light gray,then dark gray,and finally dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and dogs.Soon,the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a stormy afternoon,my mother took my five-year-old brother,Christopher,and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper.“So many toys,”the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”
Christopher and I couldn’t have been more excited.We ran across the parking lot,through the cold and biting rain,as fast as our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella,which never worked when she wanted it to.“Christine!Take care of your young brother!”Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
“Christine!I’m going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)!There’s a new pirate ship I want,and I have four dollars!Maybe I can buy it!”Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and,to my wide-eyed delight,found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比) World.
I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside.I jumped at the noise,dropping the doll to the floor.The lights flickered(闪烁) once and died,covering everything in a blanket of blackness.Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,casting frightening shadows on my mind.
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“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”
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“Christine,I’m here.”
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六：单句训练
13)哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪儿？”
14)我害怕，吓得呆住了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱他，确保他很好。

15)我的胃难受了，正在翻转进去。

16)我在黑暗的走廊上跑来跑去，恐慌充满了我的内心，使我呼吸困难。

17)我一边看到糖果，一边被玩具绊倒，一边疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。

18)虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。

19)沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。

20)“克里斯汀，我在这里。

21)“兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了克里斯托弗。

22)他独自站着，一动不动，紧紧地抓着海盗船。

23)我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。

24)他拥抱我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你就能找到我。

25)”然后，我把我的手抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里寻找我们。

参考答案
三：单句训练
1.Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson.
2.She dragged her feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful.
3.Scanning around, Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the
water like fish leaping into the ocean.
4.She watched in amazement.
5.Envious as Devi was, a flush of embarrassment soon crept to her cheeks when a little girl passed by, asking her
not to be scared.
6.How embarrassing! She hung her head.
7.Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself.
8.Devi was astonished to be made aware that Angela had never learned swimming until she was 20.
9.Greatly inspired, Devi now regained hope.
10.She entered the pool a second time in the company of Angela, several cheerful kids floating near to cheer her on.
11.Devi began to feel more at ease, her movement less stiff and her breath more even.
12.With a grateful heart, Devi realized that she might not be a fearless swimmer, but she would sure have fun trying.六：单句训练
1．“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”
2．Scared,I was frozen to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.
3．My stomach twisted and turned inside.
4．I ran up and down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.
5．I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother’s name.
6．Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.
7．Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
8．“Christine,I’m here.”
9．Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.
10．He was standing alone,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.
11．I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
12．He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”
13．Then,I took his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.
四：佳作展现
（一）
Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson. She dragged her feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful. Scanning around, Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean. She watched in amazement. Envious as Devi was, a flush of embarrassment soon crept to her cheeks when a little girl passed by, asking her not to be scared. How embarrassing! She hung her head.
Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself. Devi was astonished to be made aware that
Angela had never learned swimming until she was 20. Greatly inspired, Devi now regained hope. She entered the pool a second time in the company of Angela, several cheerful kids floating near to cheer her on. Devi began to feel more at ease, her movement less stiff and her breath more even. With a grateful heart, Devi realized that she might not be a fearless swimmer, but she would sure have fun trying.
（二）
“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”Scared,I was frozen to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.My stomach twisted and turned inside.I ran up and down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother’s name.Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
“Christine,I’m here.”Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.He was standing alone,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”Then,I took his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.
读后续写精读精炼（三）
一：原文重现
Peter, a 5-year-old boy, showed such great interest in sea shells that he would rush to pick them up with his 3-year-old sister, Shirley. They screamed out their joy as Peter collected his treasure into his pockets. For Peter, sea shells lay shinning on the peaceful beach, waiting for him, just like stars twinkling (闪烁) in the sky. As waves touched them, they seemed to be flowers blooming (绽放)in gentle wind.
One day, Peter was wandering through market with Shirley, with some shells in his pocket. Suddenly Peter found his younger sister was lagging (落后) behind. He stopped and looked back, finding Shirley was standing in front of a toy shop and was staring at something with great interest.
The boy went back to her and asked, “What do you want?” Shirley pointed at the doll, wearing a smile on her innocent face. Peter held his younger sister’s tiny hand, walking into the shop. He tiptoed (踮起脚尖) to reach for the doll, and like a responsible elder brother, gave the precious doll to Shirley. Holding tightly the doll, the sister was very very happy.
The shopkeeper was watching everything and getting amused to see the matured (成熟的) behavior of the boy. Now the boy came to the counter and asked the shopkeeper, “How much does this doll cost, Sir?”
The shopkeeper was a cool man, who had suffered from something in his life. So he asked the boy with love and affection, “Well, what can you pay?” Peter reached into his clothes for money that was intended for these two little guys’ breakfast. Having counted the money, Peter put it carefully on the counter, asking again, “Sir, is it enough for my little sister’s doll?”
The amusing scene just in front of the shopkeeper eventually brought a smile on his face. Shaking his head slightly, he replied, “My boy, I am afraid it seems not to be enough.”
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：
Paragraph 1:
With his eyes fixed on Peter’s pocket, he wondered what Peter would do.
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Paragraph 2:
Seeing Peter leaving happily with his sister holding the doll tightly, an assistant in that shop got surprised.
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二：文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了5岁的Peter和3岁的妹妹Shirley捡了一些贝壳，这些贝壳对Peter来说很珍贵。

一天，他们闲逛时，Shirley被玩具店里的洋娃娃吸引了，Peter把洋娃娃拿给了Shirley，并前去付钱。

老板看着这一切，感到有趣之余还想看看Peter在钱不够的情况下是否愿意舍弃他喜爱的贝壳。

最后，好心的老板只收了Peter两个贝壳。

1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“他的眼睛盯着Peter的口袋，想知道Peter会做什么。

”可知，第一段可描写Peter 下定决心拿出来口袋里所有的贝壳，老板只收了他两个贝壳。

②.由第二段首句内容“看到Peter高兴地和紧紧抱着洋娃娃的妹妹离开，店里的一个员工感到很惊讶。

”可知，第二段可描写Peter和妹妹离开，店员感到很惊讶，老板解释了原因。

2.续写线索：Peter犹豫——拿出贝壳——老板退钱——兄妹离开——店员惊讶——老板解释。

3.词汇激活
行为类
①.下决心：make up one’s mind/ make a decision
②.买：buy/ purchase
情绪类
①.高兴地：happily/ joyfully/ gladly
②.惊讶的：shocked/ surprised/ amazed
高分句型
1. He took out all the shells from his pocket, giving them to the shopkeeper, who took them and started to count as if he had been counting the money. （由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句和由连接词as if引导的虚拟句）
2. Peter put those shells back into his pocket very happily, leaving with Shirley holding the doll tightly. （由现在分词作状语）
3. When he grows up, he will remember he purchased a doll for his sister with the shells from a shopkeeper.（由连接词when引导时间状语从句）
三：续写单句训练
13.他的眼睛盯着彼得的口袋，不知道彼得会怎么办。

14.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。

15.过了一会儿，他似乎下定了主意。

16.他从口袋里掏出所有的贝壳，交给店主，店主拿来，开始数，好像他在数钱似的。