人教版高中英语必修2 写作提升： 名师评析满分范文
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写作提升：名师评析满分范文
1.范文阅读
Dear Mr. Johnson,
How are you doing these days? It’s almost two months since we met each otherlast time. I miss you a lot.
求助信，开头表明态度和诚意。
Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems. I have some difficulty in comprehensive reading. My English teacher often says that only if we expand the reading quantity can we be admitted into a better university. However,I feel it hard to understand English passages with the increase of vocabulary. Besides, I often feel nervous while reading English. All of the problems bring me great pressure. I am unable to remember words well and feel tired of learning English.
I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.（By the way, please come to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you. I am looking forward to seeing you again.）
寻求帮助，期待回复；再次表明求助的诚意。
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
结尾
叙述现状，说明问题；
有however，besides等连接词；
行文中采用了倒装，宾语从句等；
I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how tomake great progress in English with your help.
1.范文阅读
Dear Mr. Johnson,
How are you doing these days? It’s almost two months since we met each otherlast time. I miss you a lot.
求助信，开头表明态度和诚意。
Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems. I have some difficulty in comprehensive reading. My English teacher often says that only if we expand the reading quantity can we be admitted into a better university. However,I feel it hard to understand English passages with the increase of vocabulary. Besides, I often feel nervous while reading English. All of the problems bring me great pressure. I am unable to remember words well and feel tired of learning English.
I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.（By the way, please come to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you. I am looking forward to seeing you again.）
寻求帮助，期待回复；再次表明求助的诚意。
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
结尾
叙述现状，说明问题；
有however，besides等连接词；
行文中采用了倒装，宾语从句等；
I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how tomake great progress in English with your help.