高考英语书面表达记叙文细节描写生动性练习题20题(带答案)

高考英语书面表达记叙文细节描写生动性练习题20题(带答
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1. When describing a person's angry walk, which of the following expressions is the most vivid?
A. He walked angrily
B. He stomped away angrily
C. He moved forward angrily
D. He walked with anger
答案：B。

解析：“stomp”这个词表示“跺脚、重踏”，比单纯的“walk”更能生动地体现出一个人愤怒地走路的样子，让人能够想象到脚步重重踏地的画面，而其他选项表述比较平淡。

2. Which description makes the character's big eyes more vivid?
A. He has big eyes
B. His eyes are large
C. His eyes are as big as saucers
D. He has two big eyes
答案：C。

解析：“His eyes are as big as saucers”使用了比喻的手法，将眼睛比作茶碟，能够让读者更直观地感受到眼睛之大，比简单说眼睛大更生动形象。

3. When writing about a person running fast, which is the best?
A. He ran quickly
B. He dashed off
C. He moved fast while running
D. He ran at a high speed
答案：B。

解析：“dashed off”有“飞奔、猛冲”的意思，比“ran quickly”等表述更能体现出跑步速度之快，画面感更强。

4. How can you vividly describe a person's shy smile?
A. He smiled shyly
B. A shy smile appeared on his face
C. He gave a sheepish grin
D. He had a shy - looking smile
答案：C。

解析：“sheepish grin”表示“羞怯的笑”，“grin”这个词本身就比“smile”更能体现出一种咧嘴笑的感觉，再加上“sheepish”形容羞怯，整体描绘更加生动。

5. Which phrase can vividly describe a person's long hair?
A. He has long hair
B. His hair is long
C. His long hair flowed like a waterfall
D. He has very long hair
答案：C。

解析：“His long hair flowed like a waterfall”把长发比作瀑布，这种比喻的手法能够让读者在脑海中形成长发如瀑布般流淌的生动画面，而其他选项只是简单描述头发长。

6. In describing a person's tired look, which is more vivid?
A. He looked tired
B. He had a tired face
C. He looked worn - out
D. Fatigue was written all over his face
答案：D。

解析：“Fatigue was written all over his face”字面意思是疲劳写满了脸，这种表达比单纯说看起来累更生动，能够让读者更好地想象出人物满脸疲惫的样子。

7. When writing about a person jumping for joy, which is the most vivid?
A. He jumped happily
B. He leaped with joy
C. He jumped while being happy
D. He made a jump when he was happy
答案：B。

解析：“leaped”比“jumped”更有跳跃得很高、充满活力的感觉，“leaped with joy”能够更好地体现出因为高兴而跳跃的生动场景。

8. Which description can make a person's wrinkled face more vivid?
A. He has a wrinkled face
B. His face is wrinkled
C. His face was full of wrinkles like a dried - up riverbed
D. He has a face with wrinkles
答案：C。

解析：“His face was full of wrinkles like a dried - up riverbed”把皱纹比作干涸的河床，能够让读者更深刻地感受到皱纹之多和脸上
皱纹的状态，比简单描述有皱纹更生动。

9. How can you vividly describe a person's slow walk?
A. He walked slowly
B. He shuffled along
C. He walked at a slow pace
D. He moved slowly while walking
答案：B。

解析：“shuffled along”表示拖着脚走，这种走路方式能够很好地体现出走路缓慢的状态，比单纯说走得慢更生动。

10. Which can best describe a person's bright eyes?
A. He has bright eyes
B. His eyes are bright
C. His eyes sparkled like stars
D. He has very bright eyes
答案：C。

解析：“His eyes sparkled like stars”把眼睛比作星星，能够让读者感受到眼睛的明亮闪烁，比简单说眼睛亮更有画面感，更加生动。

11. When we entered the old forest, it was like ____.
A. stepping into a green cathedral
B. walking in a normal forest
C. going through a dull place
D. entering a simple park
答案：A。

解析：答案A中“stepping into a green cathedral”（踏入一座绿色的大教堂）把森林比作大教堂。

这里运用了比喻的修辞手法，将森林的静谧、庄严以及那种神秘的氛围生动地表现出来，就像大教堂给人的那种神圣感一样，让读者能更直观地感受到森林的独特魅力。

12. The small room was so crowded that it felt ____.
A. like a can of sardines
B. a bit full
C. not very spacious
D. rather narrow
答案：A。

解析：答案A“like a can of sardines”（（像一罐沙丁鱼）使用了比喻的手法。

形象地描绘出房间拥挤的程度，就像沙丁鱼罐头里的沙丁鱼一样紧紧挨在一起，比其他选项更生动地体现出拥挤的感觉。

13. As the sun set over the sea, the sky was ____.
A. a canvas painted with fire
B. getting dark
C. turning red
D. a bit colorful
答案：A。

解析：答案A“a canvas painted with fire”（一幅被火描绘的画布）运用了比喻的手法。

把天空比作被火描绘的画布，生动地展现出日落时天空那种火红、绚烂的色彩，如同画家拿着火焰在画布上作画一般，
比其他选项更有画面感。

14. When she heard the good news, her heart was ____.
A. like a singing bird
B. happy
C. excited
D. full of joy
答案：A。

解析：答案A“like a singing bird”（（像一只歌唱的小鸟）运用了比喻的修辞手法。

将她高兴的心情比作一只歌唱的小鸟，非常生动地表现出她内心的喜悦，仿佛能听到欢快的鸟鸣声，比简单地说高兴、兴奋等更有感染力。

15. The old house in the rain looked ____.
A. like a forlorn sentinel
B. wet
C. a bit damp
D. not very dry
答案：A。

解析：答案A“like a forlorn sentinel”（像一个孤独的哨兵）运用了比喻的手法。

生动地描绘出老房子在雨中那种孤独、落寞的样子，就像一个坚守岗位的哨兵，比仅仅说湿、潮湿等更能让读者想象出房子的状态。

16. The moment he saw his long - lost friend, his face was ____.
A. like a flower in bloom
B. showing happiness
C. looking glad
D. having a smile
答案：A。

解析：答案A“like a flower in bloom”（像一朵盛开的花朵）运用了比喻的修辞手法。

形象地描绘出他看到久别重逢的朋友时脸上那种灿烂、充满生机的喜悦表情，就像盛开的花朵一样美好，比其他选项更生动地刻画了表情。

17. The empty street at midnight was ____.
A. a silent abyss
B. quiet
C. not noisy
D. rather still
答案：A。

解析：答案A“a silent abyss”（（一个寂静的深渊）运用了比喻的手法。

生动地描绘出午夜空旷街道那种深邃、寂静的感觉，就像一个深不见底的寂静深渊，比简单地说安静更能营造出那种氛围。

18. When she lost her favorite doll, she was ____.
A. like a wilted flower
B. sad
C. unhappy
D. in low spirits
答案：A。

解析：答案A“like a wilted flower”（像一朵枯萎的花朵）运用了比喻的修辞手法。

非常生动地表现出她失去心爱的娃娃时那种萎靡不振、失落的状态，就像花朵失去生机一样，比其他表达悲伤的选项更形象。

19. The garden in spring was ____.
A. a riot of colors
B. colorful
C. having many colors
D. a bit colorful
答案：A。

解析：答案A“a riot of colors”（五彩斑斓的狂欢）运用了形象的表达。

这里“riot”这个词用得很巧妙，给人一种色彩像在狂欢、肆意绽放的感觉，比简单地说有很多颜色或者彩色更生动地描绘出春天花园里色彩的丰富和绚烂。

20. The little boy's room was in such a mess that it looked ____.
A. like a battlefield after a war
B. untidy
C. a bit disordered
D. not very neat
答案：A。

解析：答案A“like a battlefield after a war”（像战后的战场）运用了比喻的手法。

生动地描绘出小男孩房间混乱的程度，就像经历了战争后的战场一样杂乱无章，比其他表达不整洁的选项更有画面感。