2019人教版高中英语必修一Unit3 解透单元写作

Unit3 解透单元写作
主题写作——健康
1. 写作任务
为了让同学们远离疾病，保持身体健康，你班将举行次英语班会，主题为“How to be strong and healthy”。

请你根据下面的提示写一篇发言稿。

存在问题：部分学生身体素质差；
解决方法：①充足的睡眠；②加强锻炼，增加户外活动；③按时吃饭，少吃零食。

注意：①词数100左右；
②可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 2. 写作思路
（1）一审：确定体裁、主题和结构
体裁：应用文——发言稿
主题：如何保持健康
第一段：开场用语——演讲话题
第二段：陈述问题
结构：四段第三段：健康建议（话题导入+概括句+
3条建议）
第四段：总结+呼吁
（2）二定：确定时态与人称
时态：一般现在时
人称：第二、三人称为主
（3）三明确
明确写作要点：
①开场白：点明演讲话题
②陈述问题：部分学生身体素质差
②健身建议：充足的睡眠；体育锻炼；平衡饮食，拒绝垃圾食品等
④总结与呼吁
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语与句式
work out 锻炼
compared with/to 与……相比
build up fitness 健身
make a difference 有影响，有关系
rather than 而不是
cut out 切断，关掉
It is an honor for me to do sth. 对我而言，做某事是荣耀。

It is obvious that...显然……（主语从句句型）
（2）完成句子
①站在这里给大家演讲是我的荣耀，我演讲的话题是如何保持强壮、健康。

（“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句）
It is my great _______ to stand here and give a speech the topic _______ _______ is how to be strong and healthy.
②很少看到我们学生在体育馆健身或在操场上踢足球。

（倒装句）
______ ______ ______ ______ us students in the gym or play soccer on the playground.
③我想提些有关如何健身的建议。

I’d like to offer some suggestions _______ how to _______ ______ ______.
④我们最好养成早睡早起的好习惯，而不要熬夜。

（rather than）
We’d better ______ ______ ______ of early to go to bed and early to rise _______ ______ stay up late.
⑤锻炼和户外活动能给我们力量和精力。

（强调句）
______ ______ exercise and outdoor activities ______ can give us _______ and energy.
⑥幸福和成功首先在于健康。

（lie in）
Happiness and success _______ first of all ______ ______!
答案:①honor; of which ②Seldom can we see; work out ③on; build up fitness ④form the habit; rather than ⑤It is; that; strength ⑥lie; in fitness
4.满分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
How to be strong and healthy
Good morning, boys and girls! It is my great honor to stand here and give a speech, the topic of which is how to be strong and healthy.
As you can see, seldom can we see us students work out in the gym or play soccer on the playground. It is obvious that some students, compared with others, are neither in good health nor full of energy.
Just as the saying goes, a sound mind lies in a sound body Therefore, I'd like to offer some suggestions on how to build up our fitness. First of all, get enough sleep Enough sleep can make a big difference. Thus we'd better form the habit of early to go to bed and early to rise rather than stay up late. Besides, it is exercise and outdoor activities that can give us strength and energy. Last but not least, make sure we keep a balanced diet and cut out the junk food, which will be beneficial to us.
Happiness and success lie first of all in fitness! Come on and take action now!
第一段：开场用语+点明演讲话题
句型使用：“介词of+关来代词which”引导定语从句。

第二段：揭示存在问題：部分学生身体素质较差
第一句使用了seldom引导的倒装句；第二句使用了It is obvious that.（that引导主语从句）句型。

第三段：提出建议
第一句转换话题，第二句topic sentence，接下来三条建议，分别用关联词first of all，besides，last but not least连接。

第四段：总结+呼吁
5. 佳作背诵
（一）佳作
自2007年以来，全国亿万学生参加了“阳光体育活动”，教育部倡导学生要做到：
每天锻炼一小时；
健康工作五十年；
幸福生活一辈子。

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下“阳光体育活动”的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：①发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥；
②词数：100词左右；发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
③参考词汇：阳光体育活动sunshine sports program；教育部the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon，everyone,
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Thank you!
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone,
It is my great honor to make a speech here. As we all know, the sunshine sports program, started by the ministry of Education, aiming at improving the fitness of all students, has benefited thousands of millions of students all over China. It has made quite a difference in the students' physical fitness.
The program suggests that we work out for one hour a day and try to work healthily for 50 years, which can have a lasting and positive effect on our whole life.
In my opinion, I feel it important and necessary to try to make it with great determination even though our spare time is limited. After all, nothing makes sense without health. Enough exercises can help improve our study rather than harm it. So everyone of us, join the program now!
Thank you!
（2）佳作二
假如你是李华，新学期开始你校成立了学生健康成长中心，分设两大功能区。

根
据下图，给你的美国朋友Tom写信，介绍该中心的情况。

作为学生活动组织部部长，对全校的春季学生活动安排提出自己的设想并征求Tom的建议。

学生健康成长中心
学生活动办公室心理咨询室学生健康成长中心the Students，Healthy Growth Centre
心理咨询室the Psychological Consultation Room
注意：①词数100左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I have good news to tell you. The Students' Healthy Growth Centre has been newly set up in our school, consisting of two functional areas. One is the psychological Consultation Room, where students can solve their emotional problems with our professional teachers. The other office is intended to arrange the favorite school activities of our own.
As an organizer of students' activities, I have a heated discussion with others about our spring plans. We’re going to have a sports meeting next month and the students of grade One will visit the nursing home to help the elderly people. We' ll spend some time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. What do you think of our ideas?
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua。