[推荐学习]重庆市渝中区2016高考英语二轮复习 短文改错(1)

短文改错（1）
2016年高考英语专项---改错题
一、题型解读：短文改错题检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力，进而考察学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平，考察学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力。

二、命题特点：1）错误类型相对稳定（错词、多词、缺词三种类型）2）考点覆盖面广、分布合理3）难度保持平稳。

三、考查类型：错词、多词、缺词
四、考点分布
近三年高考短文改错考点分布表
五、应试技巧：通读全文，掌握大意；分句阅读，整句找错；反复通读，复查验证。

六、解题注意要点：
1. 核对错项时，若的确有一时难以改出的地方，可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1：1：8”的比例。

即多一词1个，缺词1个，错词8个。

2. 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。

因为短文改错往往覆盖面广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。

3. 核对答题符号是否规范，位置是否准确，看看有无遗漏符号，忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。

2012模拟短文改错A
If someone asks you how you can make you always 1. ________ happy, you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him 2. ________
a proper answer．Did you remember the old saying“No 3. ________ human being can really happy who is not giving or trying 4. ________
to give happiness to others”? If you will always think of 5. ________ taking more from others and give them less，you won’t be 6. ________
able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich. 7. ________
Here’s an article for you. If each of you follow it, there8. ________
will be all end of many unhappy days of yours．So you should 9. ________
learn to give up your own interests when necessarily to do so. 10. ________
【参考答案及解析】
1. 将always 前的you 改为yourself 考查反身代词的用法。

此处需掌握短语make oneself happy使自己高兴。

2. find 后加it 考查it作形式宾语。

此处it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式短语。

3. Did-Do考查动词时态。

根据文意应用一般现在时。

4. really 前加 be 考查谓语动词。

此处形容词happy前缺谓语动词be。

5. 删除 will 考查动词时态。

在条件状语从句中用一般现在时代替一般将来时。

6. give—giving 考查动名词。

此处and前后为并列关系，故改为动名词。

7. even 后加 if / though; 或者 even—though / although 考查状语从句的连接词。

根据文意应改为even if或even though。

8. follow—follows 考查主谓一致。

此句的主语是each故用单数形式。

9. 正确经分析此句正确。

10. necessarily—necessary考查be necessary to do的结构。

2012模拟短文改错C
Good health is the most valuable possession a person can have, 1. ______
so one can not regard good health as certain to happen. It’s 2. important to remember that body needs proper care in order 3. _______
to be healthy. There are three things that a person can do stay 4. in good shape. Firstly, eat the right foods is good for health. 5. Vegetables and fruits are specially important. Enough sleep 6. _______
is also important. Finally, get plenty of exercises. Sports are 7. ________ not only good for one’s body, but it can also help build 8. ________ friendship with others people. If everyone were to do the three, 9. _______ the world would be a happier and healthy place. 10. _______
【参考答案及解析】
1、正确经分析正确。

2、so—but考查句间逻辑。

根据谓文意此处为转折意义故改为but。

3、body前加a / the / our考查名词的用法。

可数名词前需加冠词或修饰语。

4、do后加to 考查不定式的用法。

两个动词连用第二个用不定式的形式。

5、eat---eating考查动名词短语作主语。

6、specially----especially 考查副词词义辨析。

此处especially尤其，特别地；specially
专门地，特意地。

7、exercises----exercise考查名词词义。

此处exercise意为“锻炼”，故用单数形式。

8、it---they考查代词指代一致。

根据文意此处they指sports。

9、却掉people或others---other 考查代词的用法。

其他人可用other people或others。

10、heathy---heathier 考查形容词的比较级。

此处and前后并列关系，故改为heathier。

2012模拟短文改错B
Angela works at a university as adviser. Students can 1.
come and see her for many problems if they need help 2.
or advices. Most of them are worried about their studies 3.
and exams. Some of them have problems connect with 4.
renting flats, though the biggest problem was loneliness. 5. Universities are exciting places but some students find difficult 6.
to make friends. They miss their families but feel lost in the 7. new environment. They're upset. Angela's job is to listen to and 8.
try to understand whether they are feeling. And of course she also 9.
gives practical advice when she is needed. 10. 【参考答案及解析】
1. as后加an 考查冠词的用法。

此处adviser是可数名词，主语为单数故其前加an。

2. see改为ask 考查语意的改错。

根据语意应为“问问题”。

3. advices改为advice 考查名词的单复数。

此处advice是不可数名词，故不加s。

4. problems后加which考查定语从句的关系词。

5. was改为is 考查动词时态。

根据文意此处应为一般现在时。

6. find后加it 考查形式宾语it的用法。

动词find后应加形式宾语it，后面的不定式是真正的宾语。

7. but改为and 考查上下文的逻辑关系。

根据文意前后为递进关系而不是转折关系。

8. 去掉to 考查动词短语的用法。

此处没有被听的对象，故去掉to。

9. whether改为what 考查宾语从句的连接词。

此处what作feel的宾语。

10. she改为it考查代词的用法。

此处改为when it is needed=when needed。

2012模拟短文改错C
It is Sunday.Li Ming is busy with working on his lessons 1.
in the afternoon at home. During a break, he relaxes in the 2. Window，expecting enjoy the sunshine. Yet the heavy 3.
traffic seems to remind him of something.Like a Senior 3 4. student,facing with the college entrance exams, he feels time is 5.
more or less limited for him.He thinks he must careful plan 6. anything in order to solve the remaining problems with 7.
his lessons but prepare for the coming exams.Meanwhile, 8.
he has to take good care of him.Li Ming is determined 9.
to try his best so that he would go to a good university. 10.
【参考答案及解析】
1. 去掉with或with改为in 考查固定短语的用法。

此处应为be busy doing或be busy in doing。

2.第二个 in改为by 考查介词的含义。

此处by the window意为：在窗户旁边。

3. enjoy前加to 考查动词的用法。

此处应为expect to do sth。

4. Like改为As 考查介词的含义。

此处as a student意为：作为一名学生。

5. faced改为facing或去掉with 考查face作动词的用法。

动词face的用法有两种：be faced with或face+宾语。

6. careful改为carefully 考查副词的用法。

修饰动词用副词。

7. anything改为everything 考查不定代词的用法。

根据文意应为计划好一切事情。

8. but改为 and 考查句间的逻辑关系。

此处为递进关系而不是转折关系。

9. him改为himself 考查反身代词的用法。

此处意为：他不得不照顾好他自己。

10. would改为will 考查动词时态。

此处will表意愿。

2012模拟短文改错D
Animals are close friend of human beings．Their existence 1.
especially that the existence of rare animals，makes the whole 2. world lively and colorful．Unlucky,we have heard such news that 3.
rare animals，even keeping in the zoo，can’t escape being hurt 4.
and killed．You may wonder how this can happen．The reason 5.
is that some people lacked understanding about these animals 6. and care little about them.
However,we should make information about rare animals 7.
known to the public．Let’s keep on mind that protecting animals 8.
is duty of everyone．Meanwhile，we should take active and effective 9. measures．After all，protecting animals are protecting ourselves． 10. 【参考答案及解析】
1．friend---friends考查名词的单复数。

根据主语animals可知，其后应一致用复数形式。

2. that去掉考查代词的用法。

此处especially后直接接名词即可。

3． Unlucky---Unluckily考查副词的用法。

此处副词作评注性状语修饰整个句子，故用unluckily。

4． Keeping---Kept考查分词的用法。

根据文意动物被关在动物园里，故用过去分词kept。

5．√经分析本句正确。

6．Lacked---1ack考查动词时态。

根据文意此处应用一般现在时。

7．However----Therefore考查副词的用法。

此处表结果故用therefore。

8. on---in考查短语的用法。

解题关键：掌握短语keek sth in mind。

9．Duty前加the考查冠词的用法。

根据文意应用the duty of everyone。

10．Are---Is考查主谓一致。

动名词短语作主语谓语动词用单数。