Task Two--四段式

• 原题： teachers should only teach students academic subjects. • 改写：they should solely teach students about academic subjects
• Some people assert that teachers ought to teach the students how to distinguish right from wrong. Others, however, object to this proposal, arguing that they should solely teach students about academic subjects
Task Two
四段式
• Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion. • 有些人认为教师应当负责教导学生判断是 非，使他们能够表现良好。另一些人说， 教师应当只教授学生学术科目。
3. 开放式讨论 要得出一个结论，我认为首先要进行认真的 讨论才是明智的。 To arrive a conclusion, I believe it is sagacious to have a careful discussion first.
正文一段
1.简单阐述其中一方的观点，并引出下文 主张教师应当承担责任，教导孩子社会道德 观念(moral values of the society)的人给出以 下理由。 People give their reasons as follows. People who assert that teachers should take responsibilities to teach children moral values of the society give their reasons as follows.
6. 论点3 而且，在悠久的历史上，没有证据表明，道 德行为应该从教师那里学习。 Additionally, for a long time in history, no evidence has shown that moral behaviours should be learned from teachers.
4.论点2 此外，教师们掌握了更多的教学技能，对是 非有着更深刻的理解，能更有效地完成任 务，为社会培养出更多的合格公民。 Besides, because teachers master more skills in teaching and have deeper understanding of what is right and wrong, they can perform the task more efficiently and cultivate more qualified citizens for the society.
3. 对论点一展开论证 否则，受过良好教育(well-educated)但不怀好 意(ill-willed)的人可能是他人和民族的灾难。 Otherwise, the well-educated but ill-willed ones may be disastrous to others and the nation.
3. 建议 因此，道德教育应该成为学校教育的重要组 成部分（component)。 Thus, moral education should be an essential component of school education.
表示原因
• because, since, as, for
• Because 的语气最强，引出的原因往往是人 所不知道的或最感兴趣的 • Since 和 as 的用法差不多，引出的理由在说 话人看来已经很明显 • For 表示推断的理由，是对前面分句内容加 以解释说明
• Firstly, only when students are educated to behave well, can the sound progress of the society be maintained, and positive social order be established.
7. 论点3展开 否则，那些接受很少教育的人都会被视为不 良行为的(ill-behaved)人，这实际上是荒谬 的(ridiculous)。 Otherwise those who receive little education can all be considered as ill-behaved ones, which is actually ridiculous.
开头段
1. 交代背景 教师在现代教育中起到了越来越重要的作用。 _________play an increasingly significant role in ___________.
Teachers play an increasingly significant role in modern education.
2. 论点1 首先，受过技能的培训，教师在教授具体科 目方面知识丰富，而不是道德方面。 To start with, Since they are trained in skills， teachers are enriched in knowledge about teaching specific subjects rather than the morality.
5. 论点2拓展 具体来说，他们希望从老师那里学到的是学 术知识，而不是学习如何做人。 Specifically, they expect to acquire academic knowledge from teachers, instead of learning how to behave.
6. 论点3 另外，学生个性发展的黄金时期绝大部分都 是在学校和教师一起度过的。 In addition, students spend most of their prime time of growth in personality at school with teachers.
7.论点3展开 缺乏教师的为人师表可能意味着学生在成长 期间教导的缺失。 The lack of teachers as role models may mean a shortage of guidance in students’ growth.
找论点，列提纲
• 教授学生道德观念 • 只传授学术知识
1. 学生有道德观念，社 会才能良性发展 2. 教师掌握教学技能， 能有效完成任务 3. 学生个性发展的时期 大部分是在学校和教 师一起度过的
1.教师受过技能培训让 他们在具体科目方面 知识更丰富 2.学生们已经形成了道 德观 3.受教育和道德没有直 接联系
2. 引出话题 ①改写原文 Some people assert that _________. Others, however, object to this proposal, arguing that___
• 原题：teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well • 改写：teachers ought to teach the students how to distinguish right from wrong
结尾段
1. 总结，承接上文 综上所述，双方似乎都有道理。 To sum up, both sides seem to be rational to some extent.
2. 你的看法 在我看来，我认为教授学术科目固然重要，但 它必须和道德教育相结合(integrate)。 Personally, I believe teaching academic subjects is indeed necessary, but it should be integrated with moral education.
2.论点1 首先，只有教育学生表现良好，才能使社会 保持(maintain)良性发展(sound progress)，建 立(establish)积极向上的社会秩序。 Only in this way can you find the truth. Only when I saw her, did she tell me the truth.
5.论点2展开 没有引导，不管学术科目学习得多好，学生 都可能对自己在社会上的位置感到迷茫(be at a loss about)。
No matter how hard you try, you will never be successful. 不管你如何努力，你都不会成功 的。
Without their guidance, students may be at a loss about their social positions no matter how well they have learned those academic subjects.
2. 引出话题 ②主语从句 因此，关于教师是应当引导(guide)学生的行为 还是只是传授学术知识引起了一场激烈的辩 论。
Thus, whether (主+谓语)is under heated debate. teachers should guide students’ behaviour or just teach academic knowledge
• 只有二者完美的结合(a successful combination )，我们的教育体系才能培养出 符合现代社会需要的人personality)。 • Only through a successful combination of both can our education system cultivate talents with healthy personality to meet the requirement of modern society.
3. 论点1展开 他们更能胜任教授学术科目的工作。 They are more qualified in teaching academic subjects.
4. 论点2 此外，学生自出生起就与父母在一起，已经 形成了他们的习惯(habit)和行为方式。 Moreover, staying with the parents since being born, students have formed their habits and ways to behave.
正文二段
1. 阐述另一方观点 但是，那些认为教师的职责只是传授学术科 目的人似乎也有充分的依据(seem well grounded)。 However, others who believe teachers’ duty is only to teach academic subjects also seem well grounded.